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Published: 2006-12-21 16:27:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5700; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 342
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There's something wrong in this picture, I can't quite figure it out yet.Anyways for those who don't know, she is Komachi Onozuka and the one below is Sikieiki Yamaxanadu.
Komachi is Sikieiki's subordinate which is in charge of ferrying souls to the netherworld. She is able to manipulate distances.
Added a sketch version. Gonna get scrapped soon.
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super sexy i love touhou more needs more touhou
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Everybody (Includying me xD), are going to HELL...
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OMFG Komachi Hentai *Nosebleeds like a waterfall*
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the chibi sketch was hilarious!
if there's anything weird about this nice *nosebleed* pic, it would be the her left thigh and the stomach.. she looks a tad fat if you imagine the lines.. -_-
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LOL I can see that happening so well xDD I love how you drew her hair... And chibi Sikieiki (GAH, can't spell her name! D8)
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Gee, i love her face... and the bottle! hahaha XD sorry, i couldn't resist. o_o i have been reading the other comments and watched the sketch version so, XD i'm not a great artist or something (u are lots of times better than me hehe), but, as i can see, i think that the lines of the underwear aren't the real problem, when a girl (oh, yeah, I'm a girl) is in that kind of position...mmm (i'm not as good speaking english... so i can't find the words). ok, i think that she has the left leg on her right leg, nee? then, that space between her legs it's ... mmm, how could i say it?
If the left leg were closer to the cam, then that would be ok, but the lines of the right leg are trying to say that the left one is behind it, so it's almost impossible to have that kind of elevation on the hips (aaaah! I'm soooo bad with the grammaaaar!). That's one thing, another is that the legs should be of the same size, or i don't know, with the same distribution or something, because a leg has greater diameter in its superior part and the other has it in the middle, so that looks kind of weird. At least, if you can change the direction of the underwear lines, then she won't look weird... well, i think XD as i said before, i'm still learning and i don't know too much about this kind of stuff, but ƱoƱ i really liked it, so i'm trying to do this in a friendly way 
ƱƱ u have a nice gallery!!
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Waai really long comment! X_X
Thank you, it is very insightful, and your english is fine.
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Ʊ_ƱU he he, that's one of my qualities, when i leave a comment it's loooong haha... well, it's just that i think that u have an amazing work, so if i could help, i'm happy :3 nyaaa
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It's probably the part after the bottle {the lower stomach} that looks a tad wrong. xD
She's adorable though. x3 
Lovely work!
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im bad at explaining things.. here goes nothing, the upper line of pants should bend more to the left or the position the pants are in should be altered.. im not even sure if that would fix the 'something' there. anyways, really nice pic!
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watever.. it makes me nose bleed....
But I like the character~!
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erm maybe teh bottle is covering her waist..thats why it looks kinda wrong..? *shot* ;__; dun trust me XD;; and maybe her arm is too short?
anyways, i love how u colored her skin <33 pinkish purple~~ healthy skin 8D
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OH i just saw ur sketch..uhh thingy XD;; and i realise that the bottle and waist wasnt the prob.. i think its the shoulder.. u drew the shoulder as if its not looked from that point of view.. X__X im stupid at explaining stuff, sorry, but i can see that the shoulder needs fixin XD
gomen v__v i make no sense
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I think I get idea. Her right shoulder needs to stick out more?
=w=;
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LOL yes i think so XD; sorry im kinda stupid in explaining >__<~~
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Her body kinda give a fat feeling when the bottle is there.... Perhaps that is the weird feeling you got?
This art gives me the same ecchi feeling in Negi / Love Hina artwork feel.
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ya me too... it makes an illusion...
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Ya, the bottle covered up the waist, giving the wrong impresson... orz
Indeed its ecchi. I spent alot of time making sure the boobs are as realistic as possible lol. Gotta branch out from loli. I don't wanna be known as 'the guy who draws loli' for life.
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The mature rating is missing? ^_^
and the nipples... :c
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uho! Trying to make it as worksafe as possible. Just think that the nipples pressing against the bottle, barely outta sight.
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wa.. so hentai larrr!! >>x<<;; *blush**blush*
i think the body..other, no prob!
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Haa.. u think so too? This deviation is a failure.. T_T
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