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The red! it BURNS!
Oh Dax...you're so wonderfully clue-less!
I have very little to say about this page. XD
Tones: Pro and Copic Sketch Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
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Comments: 58
COOKEcakes [2009-11-21 03:47:15 +0000 UTC]
ahahah! i like the snake seasoning daxter. so funny.
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lookatmewithlove [2006-12-28 07:04:52 +0000 UTC]
wow ilove the way you did the back graound
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ayekastar [2006-11-02 23:52:14 +0000 UTC]
oh man, hes asking a mute kid to answer his question oh Daxter <3 I just love how vibrant this page looks with the red! Its very very nice.
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AngelNeko13 [2006-11-02 12:05:32 +0000 UTC]
i love the salt chaker, nice comic releaf =^.^=
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Stan-the-Pickle-Man [2006-10-28 17:54:13 +0000 UTC]
continuing the comic some time soon maybe? Good god, that sounded like something Zoidberge would say...
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KeyshaKitty In reply to Stan-the-Pickle-Man [2006-10-28 20:25:35 +0000 UTC]
When I get the chance, I'll continue. Right now, my heart's not fully into it.
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stich76 [2006-10-26 00:42:56 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. The snake put salt on Dax....Or was it pepper? Can't tell...looks like salt though...
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jaklover101 [2006-10-09 02:46:30 +0000 UTC]
lol! YAY! NEW PAGE! I usually check ur page almost every time I get on this site! Well, maybe it's just because I'm an obsessive freak!lol. Luv how the snake salts Daxter!
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dia-aren-marie [2006-10-05 07:03:09 +0000 UTC]
The red really worked good here for that danger-look O_O And the salt frame XD So funny!!
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AuroranWings [2006-10-04 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]
Daxter! D:
He is rather clueless, isn't he? I really like the red here, actually. It stands out!
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Gashtall [2006-10-03 00:15:51 +0000 UTC]
*sigh*...made it till the last page,finally! (&$%ยท~# slow connection....took a year to open more than one page at the same time....)
Oh well..whatever...
Lookin' foward to the next page...i think..
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SesakaTH [2006-10-02 02:23:52 +0000 UTC]
That snake shaking salt and pepper on Dax I think is really funny! I know Jak will take care of that snake
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silveremerald [2006-10-01 09:32:50 +0000 UTC]
Eurgh, you wouldn't want to eat Daxter, he's too bony...
But oh the salt shaker!
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dabean [2006-10-01 01:24:16 +0000 UTC]
LMAO I bursted out laughing at the salt shakers! at first i thought it read "Snake! snake!" and thought you were making up your own on sound effects xD so cute. and smart it really lightens the mood without taking nulling the drama that the bursts of red and the points of view create. the panels focusing on Jak's turn and change of emotions are nicely laid out, they add some flow to the page :3
you'd think that by the look of Jak's face Dax would realize wtf is going on behind him e_e; open your eyes, Dax! quit acting so smug!
and I agree with Eno about the floppy ears. they're a lotta fun to draw! I miss the floppy ears from the first game's animation too ;;
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KeyshaKitty In reply to dabean [2006-10-01 02:10:56 +0000 UTC]
The floppy ears shall live on in our hhheeaaarrrrtttssss!
I mean, ah...yeah. XD
Thanks so much for your sweet words, beanie-bebe!
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dabean In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-10-01 19:41:39 +0000 UTC]
the legend of the floppy ears, forever and ever, Amen x3
gotta show mah love, mang!
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enolianslave [2006-09-30 22:54:25 +0000 UTC]
man i love this! i especially love how you've chosen in these pages to pick out a certain colour that makes the strip more foreboding and draws you in, this time it's the red of the snake and it really helps set the dire situation that daxter is in.
the first three carttony poses are love! and the salt shaker does harken back to the old style cartoons that we all love so much. kinda putting a light note on the threat int he beginning. but as the panels chose to show the fear in jak's eyes the threat to daxter seems more apparent and imminent.
the last panel's gotta be my favourite tho, he's just not meant to be int he jungle is he, i mean he has no clue, he doesn't even use his senses that should be warning him about the dangers of the forest. but his EARS! his damn floppy ears hunny! they are what makes this comic page to me! cause who would possibly try and digest some one that cute??
love this, it just looks so great hun.
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KeyshaKitty In reply to enolianslave [2006-09-30 23:28:28 +0000 UTC]
You comments always make me feel so mushy and special!
Yeah, I've been digging making their ears REALLY floppy as of late...like in the original game (their ears bounced SO much as they walked about in the cutscenes! <3) It's a shame that feature wasn't really done as much in the later games. ;_; I miss the floppy ears!
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Gaijin-Sensei [2006-09-30 20:29:44 +0000 UTC]
That is a lot of red!
I wonder what's going to happen next!
Great work!
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InvaderKali [2006-09-30 19:47:30 +0000 UTC]
I love the close up on Jak, he cant even warm Dax. Im actually terrified for the little guy here.
I also like how the red of the snake frames the white panels with Jak in them.
Dax is gonna get munched! DX
I just noticed Jaks goggle looks like a nipple
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BecSparrow [2006-09-30 19:17:48 +0000 UTC]
heheh I love the red hints of danger! ^^ Lil dax is gonna need lotsa salt to cancel out tht sugary goodness ^^
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KazimaKuwabara [2006-09-30 19:12:05 +0000 UTC]
i feel like a dork i actually screamed lookout....
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EndofaCentury [2006-09-30 18:59:12 +0000 UTC]
OH SNAP. Big snake! (I always hated them things o-O) ...Big snake with a salt shaker! XDD Omfg, so much love.
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EcoQueenMistress [2006-09-30 18:01:38 +0000 UTC]
CHIBI DAXTER!!!!!! I'm not too fond of him, but seeing your version of him makes me squeal in delight!!!
Jak is a cutie as well. I love how he's like -OMG!!! LURKER SNAKES!!!
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GirLikeyTacos [2006-09-30 16:47:41 +0000 UTC]
That salt haker just takes the cake on this. Poor, poor, clueless Daxter.
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xelloss100 [2006-09-30 15:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Very cute!!! Love Dax's expressions!!! Just Adorable!!!
Love the colors and the details on the snake!!
Great work!!
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CaptainKurfuffle [2006-09-30 14:57:21 +0000 UTC]
hee hee
BIG SNAKE U MUST EAT DAXTER!!!!!
DAXTER IS A PAIN!!!!!!!
(sorry daxter hatred coming out )
lol awesome stuff
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Namine17 [2006-09-30 14:02:37 +0000 UTC]
This is cool. The salt was a good addition. Thats funny!
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Moonshadow87 [2006-09-30 13:14:12 +0000 UTC]
A snake with a salt shaker, awesome
And all that red is rather vibrant, isn't it? Looks cool though Poor Dax... can't wait to see what happens now! :3
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croatian-sweetheart [2006-09-30 11:48:17 +0000 UTC]
how come he can't talk? i never understood that
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KeyshaKitty In reply to croatian-sweetheart [2006-09-30 12:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Originally, one of the games creators (I think it was Jason Rubin, though I could be mistaken) wanted Jak as a mute, because they had a theory that if the character you played as through the game talked/said stuff you didn't agree with, then the player would want to distance themselves from the character they were playing.
However, after the first game, they got alot of comments from players saying the felt Jak lacked personality, so from the second game onwards, Jak had a voice (which he aquired during his years of torture in the Baron's prision - either the torture or something else bringing along his speach, different fan's theories ect).
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croatian-sweetheart In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-09-30 12:46:18 +0000 UTC]
ohhhhk thanks for the explanation now i understand
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CaptainOscillator [2006-09-30 11:24:55 +0000 UTC]
wheee drunkduck. filled with charby the vampirate goodness.
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