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Published: 2008-08-11 10:03:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 4443; Favourites: 367; Downloads: 67
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Description Scrapped image, but maybe a salvageable concept for the future.

Picture each part of the umbrella a colour of the rainbow that matches the girl it belongs to, and Zuri wearing mostly grey, black and white.

This is scrapped due to a million anatomy issues + the umbrella being wonky with the cane.

Going to go practice hands, now.
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Comments: 57

Dartty [2008-08-24 07:41:14 +0000 UTC]

the umbrella shes holding would make a good real umbrella

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GoblinQueeen [2008-08-21 04:42:19 +0000 UTC]

What a fabulous idea! What a great umbrella that would make

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fastrisingdemon [2008-08-15 02:44:50 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS ADORABLE!!!! C'EST MAGNIFIQUE!!!

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Kinkatia [2008-08-15 01:52:08 +0000 UTC]

If you ever revisit this, I look forward to it. Wonderful concept, and I would love to see it fully colored.

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Goldenwings100 [2008-08-14 08:49:43 +0000 UTC]

your style is kawaii

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ThunderGoddesKino [2008-08-14 08:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Too bad it's being scrapped, it's a lovely image in spite of the errors you talk about, and it would look even more amazing colored.
Hopefully maybe you redo the concept in the future. :3

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DEMONxxCHILD [2008-08-14 00:37:48 +0000 UTC]

that is so cute ...and i hate the word 'cute'

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rainbowonfire [2008-08-13 06:01:45 +0000 UTC]

It's cute just alittle. . .as you put it wonky :3

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wistful-moon [2008-08-12 04:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, for your cane, all you have to do is get rid of the "end circle" so all you se is the curve to the left... ( and then flip the strings' cruves to match ((( This will make the pole facing away, and you'll be able to fix it with just a few adjustments. But I really like it, and if you already knew this, then ignore me

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Ginny-chan13 [2008-08-12 02:57:04 +0000 UTC]

wow
how cool!i love the little chibis on the Umbrella

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dogmaje234 [2008-08-12 00:02:23 +0000 UTC]

wow~ thats really good...

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yokotei [2008-08-11 23:53:51 +0000 UTC]

aww, i like how this was turning out. the arms don't seem as short as you usually draw them, and overall, the anatomy is just different from how you normally execute it.

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Mama-chan [2008-08-11 23:40:21 +0000 UTC]

I see very little problem with the anatomy! Continue it! Its reallly cute X3

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Kirky-Fire [2008-08-11 23:22:45 +0000 UTC]

beautiful... i want 2 make dat umbrella lol ^^"

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AkiraXKiraxa [2008-08-11 21:46:11 +0000 UTC]

This is one of the cuter things I've seen on dA, actually...I think you should come back to this piece sometime in the future. The concept is really cool, plus it looks cute. <3

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Twilight-Nymphara [2008-08-11 21:28:03 +0000 UTC]

It looks perfect to me, you should definitely continue it :3

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Maddragon [2008-08-11 20:30:04 +0000 UTC]

thats a cool concept... we should make the umbrella!

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KeyshaKitty In reply to Maddragon [2008-08-11 22:35:14 +0000 UTC]

@___@ If you make it I will love you forever and ever!

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Maddragon In reply to KeyshaKitty [2008-08-12 23:53:02 +0000 UTC]

ok after armegeddon... and after the mascot heads along side all my other schemes. hehe

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Ookamiiki [2008-08-11 19:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Even if there are any issues, I wouldn't notice them anyways. ^^
This is lovely, and brightened my face when I saw it. 8D

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hinausagibaby [2008-08-11 19:47:03 +0000 UTC]

why did u scrap it? it looks so nice!

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silent-mage [2008-08-11 19:25:06 +0000 UTC]

wow this is beautiful

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Gaurdian-of-Dreamers [2008-08-11 19:21:10 +0000 UTC]

I wish i had a cute umbrella like that!

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Miszery [2008-08-11 18:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Very elegant, in a way. I really like the umbrella ^-^

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crystalkirby [2008-08-11 18:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Bah I think it's fine X3

Hands are an awesome thing to practice and it SO pays off XD I should keep practicing hands

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GoblinQueenSelene [2008-08-11 18:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Cute! I like the idea!

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MiraKHall [2008-08-11 18:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Shame, this would really look good completed.

Another time, perhaps

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MARoy [2008-08-11 17:37:54 +0000 UTC]

i really love this, her outfit and the umbrella is really cute and something id actually own if i could. The ribbons at the of the handle are simply beautiful

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CabbyHat [2008-08-11 17:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, umbrellas are tricky. Oh well, you did pretty good anyway.

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Laraloopy [2008-08-11 17:15:15 +0000 UTC]

I hope you color this or redo it, I really like the idea!!

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Aireyon [2008-08-11 16:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Heehee i wants that umbrella
>w<
so cute so cute
YOU SHOULD COLOR IT
to heck wit hall the anatomy issues i loves it
x3

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BecSparrow [2008-08-11 16:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah, wow! I bet that umbrella would brighten up any grey storm! From the way you've described the colours planned I bet this would look fantastic. I hope you change your mind and do finish it. I can't see anything wrong with it majorly, and all art has minor mistakes within it!
Go on.. give it a shot

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ClosetExtrovert [2008-08-11 16:17:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't see problems with anatomy so much as the umbrella's perspective... the cane looks like it's bent around her head when you look at the end of the cane when compared to the umbrella part itself. If you could tweak the end I'm sure it would work a lot better! And in any case, I like the concept!

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wolvie16 [2008-08-11 16:05:18 +0000 UTC]

really pretty.

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JewelSparrow [2008-08-11 15:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Forget anatomy. It looks awesome, and would be beautiful in color!

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th3p1nkscYth3 [2008-08-11 15:04:10 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty! You should color it!

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hachi24 [2008-08-11 14:34:59 +0000 UTC]

i love the concept!!

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Ldrmas [2008-08-11 14:33:20 +0000 UTC]

Could we color it. I want to color

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KeyshaKitty In reply to Ldrmas [2008-08-11 22:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't offer my art up to be coloured.

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Ldrmas In reply to KeyshaKitty [2008-08-11 22:55:14 +0000 UTC]

oh okay I thought it would be fun heheh

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moony-thewerewolf [2008-08-11 14:22:17 +0000 UTC]

this is so pretty ...i luv the umbrella!

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The-Reploidst [2008-08-11 14:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Question: Why does the Thunder or Lightening one remind me of Saber/Seiba from Fate Stay Night?

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MangaRox [2008-08-11 13:49:23 +0000 UTC]

cute pic!

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Crows-Sin [2008-08-11 13:28:32 +0000 UTC]

i like it ^^

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driedzone [2008-08-11 12:45:45 +0000 UTC]

this is simply awsome!!!

I would really take it to colour it, but i don't know anty of the characters
but stil, great anatomy! (awesome hands )

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b-o-o [2008-08-11 12:41:35 +0000 UTC]

I love all the chibis on the umbrella and Zuri looks gorgeous!

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mishi271 [2008-08-11 12:33:53 +0000 UTC]

I really love this concept, I think you should finish it despite any issues you see. You could always re-draw it differently too

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Rajia [2008-08-11 11:52:15 +0000 UTC]

I think the lineart looks really nice! And I didn't even realise that the umbrella was wonky on its cane until I read that it was.

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sofiskita-chan [2008-08-11 11:45:06 +0000 UTC]

I love this godness *-*

I have Characters about godness too ^^

Can I use your godness' outfits with my godness if I put you credits??

(sorry, my english is bad -.-)

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hhantu [2008-08-11 10:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww I like the anatomy, and maybe it's on a banana stick.

//|\\
..( <-- banana stick


lol, funny way to say i really like this picture and would have loved to see it done. XD;

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