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kezzieb — My Poem For You
Published: 2007-10-07 09:13:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description We could be together,
But this could be a phase,
I have such feelings for you,
But you don't have a clue.

I sit here typing and I think,
Me and you it could be great,
But if for you its just rebellion,
Then we really wont get on.

So shut your eyes,
And use your head,
Tell me if its true,
Tell me if I stand a chance with you.

Cos I won't tell if you don't,
And it can be our secret,
But I need to know whether I,
Can be with you and fly.
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Comments: 2

JoeHBax [2007-10-08 19:41:50 +0000 UTC]

First stanza is a bit wonky on syllables but the rest is really good And it got a fave so it must be good

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kezzieb In reply to JoeHBax [2007-10-09 15:14:28 +0000 UTC]

Well I was just feeling weird and yeah I thought it was just weird might as well add it so yeah I'm rambling on, thanks

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