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KhaosDrawz β (C) Pinekit (heart) and Sharpkit (wing)
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Published: 2017-10-15 19:48:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 298; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Commission for Crowsmos !I had a lot of fun drawing these two characters, and I haven't drawn kittens in a while. I hope they look kitten-ish XD
On the right, we have Pineheart, and on the left, Sharpwing is playfully batting at his brother's ear. When I thought of these two as kittens, I immediately thought of them being in a nursery. So... here we have it!
If I got any of the markings on them wrong, please let me know X3
Thank you for commissioning me!
Art belongs to me
Characters belong to Crowsmos Β
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Ello! Since it seems like you want some constructive criticism I'll be more than happy to give you my review!
First off, I love how you do most of the coloring and shading you can really determine where the light hits and where it stops. BUT I'll be honest the whole image seems too dark, adding a few more lights and hues can really create a bouncy and lively picture.
Now, as I look on to your anatomy it could use some work. Pineheart does look quite a bit tall with such a short body does sort of make the viewer think that they are an apprentice. Sharpwing on the other hand looks like an apprentice too.
Since anatomy can get pretty tricky it's nice to have alot of references to help your artwork, believe me they can really change how you make everything and boy does it look better. (Not in a hateful way or anything, this is just a suggestion)
Lastly, your background looks quite flat and dull I would say to add maybe a few cracks or rocks to really get the setting of a den to make the whole thing seem uneven and not perfectly shaped like a human wall. Along with the sky, ground, and moss bed could use some more work with different colors and hues.
In all, I actually like your picture and it's fine just the way it is, you don't have to follow my advice all the way just keep it as a tip.
-ππ
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Thank you for this positive feedback! It really makes my day to see people wanting to help me improve my art in such positive and helpful ways! I will keep all these things in mind for later drawings! (It's not often that I draw younger cats, since they have different body builds) But thank you nonetheless!
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I feel ya! And absolutely no problem, I really find joy when I make a critique as I can say alot of things about what I think can or can not happen.Β
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Thank's again! You don't know how much this advice helps!
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Haha, Alright if you're unsure about an artwork I'll be more than happy to give you feedback about it!
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I feel ya! And absolutely no problem, I really find joy when I make a critique as I can say alot of things about what I think can or can not happen.Β
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OMG THIS IS SO CUTE!!! Tysm!!!!! It's exactly what I wanted : D
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I'm glad you like it! Thanks again for commissioning me X3
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How cute is that X3 I really like howΒ Sharpwing looks! very cool pose O,O
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Thank you! ^-^
It took me forever to get Sharpwing's pose right haha, looks like it paid off!
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