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Sora stumbled, then fell. Unable to will himself back to his feet or even his knees, he lay face down in the dirt, dirt that was rapidly cooling as the sun continued to set, sending offensive bands of red across the sky. Sora hated red."Sora!"
"Leave me alone," Sora mumbled. "Just go away. You'll be ok. Just go." He wanted nothing more than to sleep. Unfortunately, his friend did not offer him that opportunity, and before he could so much as close his eyes, a thick silver tail was hauling him upright, but not before delivering a clean smack across the face.
"Don't be an idiot," Riku said sharply. He was a naga, half snake and half human, and it was only his snake half that had gotten them this far in a desert.
In any case, Sora did not respond to either the slap or the insult, and continued to walk doggedly west towards the sunset. The very thing he feared most.
Sora, in-every-way average human peasant, had done an incredibly stupid thing. At least, he thought he had, though as much as he tried to rack his brain, he couldn't remember what it was. Wrong place at the wrong time, he supposed, though it wasn't entirely fair for him to have to give his life for it. He'd been accused of attempting to murder a member of the royal family, and now, every armed man, woman, or creature in the entire world knew of the bounty on his head. One particularly talented group of hunters had tracked Sora and Riku for weeks before chasing them into the desert.
Where they were now.
Sora fell again. The dull thud of his body hitting the ground was inaudible over the howling winds. If a peasant falls in the desert and no one hears him, does he still make a sound?
"Come on, Sora," Riku grimaced, but this time, pull as he might, Sora's legs refused to support him. He crumpled into the cold sand, and looked up at Riku.
"Seriously. You don't have to be here. I'll just freeze to death, and you can go do whatever nagas do, and some lucky bastard will find my body and get rich."
"No," said Riku simply.
"Why?" Sora demanded.
"Because we're friends." He said it with finality, as if that were enough. Nagas were weird. Sora sighed and shut his eyes.
"There's no way I can survive out here," he said quietly. "We both know it. There's nothing left for you to do but watch me die."
"Don't say that. I'll figure it out." Sora wanted to scream in protest, pull his hair out, punch the optimism right out of Riku's scaly gut. But he was too tired, and it was cold, so instead all that got out was a petulant:
"Whatever."
The geography on their world was odd and violent and not at all suited to human life. Human populations were concentrated into towns with vast expanses in between. During the day, people traveled, worked, talked. But at night-
Night was problematic.
The temperatures began to drop in the late afternoon, and by sundown, the air was far too cold for anyone to survive. The winds cut through layers and layers of fabric. The whole world became cold enough to freeze blood. People were forced into their homes, unable to go out until the morning thaw.
Sora was in open desert, miles from any sort of civilization. He didn't have a chance.
"Come on," Riku said. Nagas were, by virtue of their physiology, relatively immune to the cold, enough so to survive it, though they usually chose to seek shelter as well. "We need to get you out of the wind." He dug a hole, a lone blemish on hundreds of square miles of flat, perfect earth. It wasn't enough, it couldn't be, the wind was already cutting straight through Sora's clothes, but he let Riku try. He couldn't not let Riku try.
"Come on," Riku shouted again. Sora didn't move, so Riku moved him. Soon he was lying down in a ditch with a naga tail pressed down over him to protect him from open air. For the moment, Sora felt ok, but the sun had only just gone down, and they had several hours of night left ahead of them.
"Well, at least the hunters will have to lay low, too," Riku said.
"They stopped all the way back in the town we passed. Because they're not stupid."
"If we'd stayed in that town, we'd both already be dead," said Riku flatly. Sora stayed silent. Maybe Riku would be ok, but Sora, frail even by human standards, was as good as dead out here anyway. The tracking group probably wouldn't even bother to look for his body. Wait, no- they'd need it to collect the bounty.
"Riku," Sora whispered. He opened his eyes and peered up at his friend's face. "You don't really believe I'd try to kill anyone, do you?"
"Duh." So, that was that conversation.
"Ok." Sora could practically feel the sun go down. Layers of cold crept over his body. Pain eased into his joints. "I'm glad you're here with me," he said, closing his eyes again.
"Hey," Riku shook him. "Hey! I'm not going to let you die of exposure," he snapped, the urgency more than present in his voice. "Not after we've made it this far."
"Well, w-w-what do you sug-g-ggest?" Sora chattered. The pain was disappearing. He was already losing feeling in his extremities. Not too long now before he lost consciousness completely, and then it would be over. Once you fell asleep in weather like this, you didn't wake up. It just wasn't done.
Riku moved quickly, seemingly oblivious to Sora's pain, or rather, lack thereof. He wrapped his tail tightly around Sora's middle. Sora barely felt it, not that it would have mattered anyway- Riku produced so little body heat as for it to be negligible.
"Easy," Riku said. "It's a trick they do with baby nagalings. I'll just swallow you whole."
Sora stared.
He'd thought of many unappealing things in his short life, but none so unappealing as being swallowed whole and then, presumably, spat back up again. Which would be worse? He moved to scream in protest, but the cold air froze his lungs solid. With effort, he did manage to shake his head a little.
"No protests. I'm not going to let you die." Sora was moved by the emotion in Riku's voice- figuratively, of course, since he was literally frozen in place and quite helpless to do anything about the fact that he was about to become naga chow. Riku worked quickly, slackening his jaw and lifting Sora into position.
"Just try to relax," he said quietly. "Don't be scared."
The first bit of Riku that Sora felt was hot breath hitting his face. Naga breath wasn't so hot as humans', but it was warm enough that Sora was able to feel it, which was reassuring. The warm air even tried to melt some of the ice around Sora's eyes. Riku's tongue flicked out and hit Sora's face before recoiling with a sharp hiss- apparently, Riku preferred his food warmed before eating. Sora was able to see Riku's irritated grimace before his friend steeled his body, opened wide, and began working his lips over Sora's head.
The smell was the first sense to bust through Sora's frozen body- the smell of drool and partially digested meat. It was gross. He felt dizzy. His eyes unfroze and he found himself squished into darkness. He could feel himself being swallowed. Riku's muscles weren't working in any sort of organized fashion. Half seemed determined to get him down and the other half were trying to expel the offensively cold meal. The result was schizophrenic, and Sora was hauled down inch by jerky inch.
Outside of Riku's body, he was completely numb. His legs might as well have not existed at all. The inside of Riku's body, on the other hand, was just warm enough to allow him to remember how cold he was. He began shivering uncontrollably, which didn't help the swallowing situation.
"Mmmoonnngghhh," Riku moaned around him, shaking a bit himself, an admonishment Sora correctly interpreted as 'stop moving around.'
"I c-can't h-help it," Sora gasped, finally able to speak again. But once he opened his mouth, the smell inside of Riku's stomach gagged him, and he thrashed.
Riku finished up quickly, forcing himself to pull in Sora's frozen legs without complaint. Sora crunched uncomfortably into the bottom of Riku's stomach. He'd seen Riku eat plenty of meals before, of course, but he'd never once imagined how it would feel. His face pushed into squishy flesh, his arms crumpled, his legs bunched up on top of him. His frozen joints groaned in pain as they were forced to bend.
As soon as Sora's feet entered Riku's mouth, he became aware that Riku had pulled his shoes off. He hadn't even noticed. Riku's lips closed gently over his stocking feet.
Sora was in. He was in.
Staving off the claustrophobia was difficult. Riku was not exactly roomy. Sora was completely pinned in place, squeezed on all sides, overwhelmed by bodily sounds and smells and unable to move even a pinky toe. He was trembling. He swallowed a scream.
Riku's breathing was heavy, the way it always was after a big meal, though Sora was used to hearing it from a decidedly different perspective. He knew Riku would have his eyes closed, breathing slowly, with both hands resting on his stomach.
But then, Riku groaned.
Sora was familiar with the standard range of naga sounds- from the outside, of course. Inside was completely different. The sound was overbearing, deafening, shaking through every cell in Riku's body before tumbling out of the mouth. Sora couldn't plug his ears. The stomach tightened around him. He gasped for air, he was choking-
A sudden movement, a drop of a foot or so, a heavy but not painful thud, and everything stopped.
Riku's heartbeat was steady, but his breathing was ragged.
"Riku?" Sora asked quietly. He was afraid- he was still trembling. "Riku, are you all right?"
"Sorry," came a gasp, finally. Sora might have missed it if he couldn't feel the irregularity in Riku's breath when he spoke. "It's just- you're awfully big."
Sora laughed, in spite of himself. It was a big laugh- well, as big as he could manage- the release of all of his anxiety. At being chased, at being frozen, at being eaten. All of it. Riku groaned again at the sudden noise and movement, even more pathetically than before, and Sora quickly silenced himself.
"Bit off more than you can chew?" he whispered.
"Shut up," Riku groaned. "You're alive."
"Yeah. Thanks," said Sora sincerely. Riku grunted a response. Sora was settling into the stomach now, and he was beginning to lose feeling in his left hand. Riku's body munched on him contentedly, all movement and noise. Sora was tired, bone tired, but in these circumstances, there was no way he was getting any sleep at all, short of passing out from lack of air.
"It's gonna be a long night," he sighed finally. He got no response. Maybe Riku fell asleep? A long pause.
"Yeah."
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Comments: 41
Ash-Faen-Loke In reply to Dragonbite1992 [2017-01-14 03:17:02 +0000 UTC]
Me 2! Or eat someone!
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TARISENACROW [2012-03-08 17:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Yah I don't know y but going to long without vore posses me off
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Deer2016 [2011-10-04 10:11:31 +0000 UTC]
I like so so so so much it is great story a don't know what to say but it is so so good ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
\(^o^)/
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Goron-King-Darunia [2010-10-27 06:44:53 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much! This one is currently my second fave, my first fave being the Indigestion story, and my third fave being the Whimsical Heartless vore one! I'm going to go die from the cutess for, like the third time today!
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DR4WNOUT [2010-06-16 18:53:39 +0000 UTC]
Wait, is Sora being digested? Cause at the end, you mention him losing feeling on his hand, and said that "Riku's body was munching at him..." or something. Then Sora would pass out from air. Kinda confused on that.
And oh my god. That book series BY Jane Yolen, I bought that so long ago, cause on one of the covers, the characters doesn't have a shirt on... don't judge me...
Great story though! I like the backstory of the two of them being hunted, like THelma and Loius or something. PLus there was a painfully slow buildup to the vore part which made me laugh a little, cause it seemed like you did it on purpose.
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khvorefan2 In reply to DR4WNOUT [2010-06-17 01:13:58 +0000 UTC]
LOL no, sora is not being digested. it's just, munching and smelling bad and being claustrophobic and so on is what stomachs do. i imagine being inside of one wouldn't be terribly comfortable
haha yeah, this was a smidge melodramatic for me >_> i need to go write something stupid
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DR4WNOUT In reply to khvorefan2 [2010-06-17 17:17:18 +0000 UTC]
What about the trade? You could write something stupid on that! I'm totally forcing it upon you aint I? Still writing your part, trying to fill it with more porn, but like I've said before, it's kinda weird to be writing that kind of stuff.
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khvorefan2 In reply to DR4WNOUT [2010-06-17 17:18:47 +0000 UTC]
ahhh i just finished moving and i have not started your trade at all faaaail. BUT I'M ON IT I SWEAR
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DR4WNOUT In reply to khvorefan2 [2010-06-17 19:00:51 +0000 UTC]
Well my half will be sloooooowww anyways.
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sora-belly [2010-06-14 17:00:06 +0000 UTC]
It's okay. Melodramatic vore is also fantastic. :3
I thought it was pretty awesome. C:
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khvorefan2 In reply to sora-belly [2010-06-15 03:41:26 +0000 UTC]
YAY thanks it was fun to write
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KageSora [2010-06-13 07:36:07 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha! I was reading this and I was like "Dude, that totally sounds like those Dragon books!" ...Great, now I wanna go read them again. XD
Nicely written, interesting, and my favorite type of vore--"protection vore"!
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-10-27 06:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, friend, me likes the protection vore a lot too!
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-10-27 07:46:29 +0000 UTC]
Yaaay! Another person who likes it a lot! There's just not enough of it.
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-10-28 05:50:14 +0000 UTC]
I like protection stuffing as well, but there's even less of that... The deficit is most likely caused by the fact that people like you and I rarely write any of it, or if we do, we never post it... Maybe we ought to do a collab?
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-10-28 22:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Haaa... Probably that's the reason--I could write several stories to fulfill my personal tastes, but I'm so shy it took me months to post up the few pictures I ever drew. XD Ohhh, a collab would be fun!
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-11-14 01:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Great! So... how do you want to do it? I'll list all the options I can think of in as orderly a manner as possible, pick whichever you would like, or suggest something if there's something else you'd rather do. One or Two Deviantions?
One story
- I'll start one and you finish it
- You start one and I finish it
- I'll start one and you finish it, but you get the final touches
- You start one and I finish it, but I get final touches
- We will both start one independantly and then swap them, and finish each others
- We both pick one topic (from the next list or other) and start writing the same story, swap, and finish each others
- We each set up the basic circumstances of each others' story, like why the voring happens, who vores whom, emotional relation as in willing prey, oblivious prey, frightened prey, loving prey, etc. then write based on each other's criteria
- Any other ideas?
- Richter x Emil
- Richter!naga x Emil
- Richter x Emil Naga
- Richter!naga x Emil!naga
- Add other characters?
- Other couple/pairing?
- Other species shift? (Like mers instead of nagas...)
- Riku x Sora
- Riku!naga x Sora
- Riku x Sora!naga
- Riku!naga x Sora!naga
- Add other characters?
- Other couple/pairing?
- Other species shift? (Like mers instead of nagas...)
Umm... I guess that's all I can think of right now, see what you think, reply back, and we'll start something!
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-11-14 03:18:32 +0000 UTC]
I like the idea of doing two stories, that could be fun.
It could be fun to try and tie them together somehow, like have one of us do a "first time" and the other do a "Nth time" one. XD
I like the idea of setting up the criteria for each other, it's always fun to see how another person will handle an idea, I think.
I personally like doing Richter X Emil, because I've never written for Sora or Riku and have no idea how to do them and would probably ruin them. XD And I usually prefer to keep them human, because I've never worked with nagas before...?
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-11-15 05:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Okay! I'm good with that!
So, basic outline is:
- Richter x Emil Protection Vore
- Human Vores Human
- 2 Connecting Stories
- One "1st Time" story and one "Nth Time" story
- Set up criteria for each other, write story from that criteria
That sounds great! One last thing to clear up, then we'll be ready to start. Do you want to do the "1st time" or the "Nth time" story? Pick whichever one you like best, then give me the criteria for the other one and I'll give you the criteria for yours!
This is going to be so much fun!
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-11-15 07:28:00 +0000 UTC]
This really is gonna be really great fun to do!
Let's see... I'd like to take the 1st time, if you don't mind?
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-11-15 09:14:12 +0000 UTC]
Sure! Mweee-heee-heee! ~ Nth time sound's like a ton of fun! Lots of room for me to... experiment...
Okay, okay! Here's my criteria for your's!
Ahem...
- Richter x Emil will be in the usual cannon pairing, Richter is his usual seme self, and Emil will be his usual uke self. (Assuming you don't know what Seme and Uke mean, "seme" is the japanese term for a member in a romantic couple who is the dominant, strong, "on top", or masculine one. "Uke" is the exact opposite, submissive, fragile, "bottom person", feminine one)
- Basic situation
- Richter and Emil are traveling together (I'm not really sure at what point in the game it would fit in, so I'm not excluding additional characters here [like if you want to put Marta, Tenebrae, or Zelos or who ever else in it, it's up to you]) and they have to go into a deep, dark, scary cave, I guess to get a special stone, like a super powerful stone that they need for... some reason... (making this all up as I go, can you tell?!
). So Emil sees the cave and remarks that it's "Really, deep, dark, and scary!"
And Emil, being all "Uke" as usual, is terrified of going in. Like "Nooooo! Richter! Don't make me go there! What if there are monsters?! So Richter, being all manly, says "Courage, remember? Don't worry, if we run into trouble, I'll protect you... " So Emil goes with him.
- Why Richter eats Emil
- So, they go into the cave, and it's really deep, dark, and scary...
So they're walking along and all of a sudden, some huge weird monster jumps out of nowhere and tackles Emil. Emil cries like a little girl of course.
And Richter can't just attack with his sword because he might hit Emil accidentally, so her wrestles it off of Emil with his bare hands. Richter beats it to death with his bare fists, but get's cut up pretty badly by the monster. Emil goes up to Richter once he see's it's safe and notices how badly Richter's hurt. So he takes off Richter's shirt to bandage his wounds and notices his sexy body, but doesn't say anything.
- So after a long time, they find the shiny rock they were looking for. I guess originally, Richter was going to use it for himself, but since Emil helped him, and he's been secretly crushing on him, he gives it to him. But Aqua sees how lovey-dovey they're being and get's really jealous. So she's like "No! Master Richter is mine! Stupid boy!" and she summons some of those giant turtle things and commands them to eat Emil so she and Richter can be together forever. Richter tries to get her to stop, but she won't. Still wounded, he cannot fight all of the turtle things at once. So he grabs Emil and runs into a narrow passage of the cave. The turtle monsters start bashing the wall in, so Richter is left with no other option. "Emil, I'm going to have to eat you..." "What?! " "It's the only way I can keep yo safe, and I promised I would keep you safe!" So yeah, the rest of the dialogue is up to you here, but Richter eats Emil. Whether or not Emil Enjoys it is up to you. So after that, Aqua can't kill Emil anymore, since she'd have to hurt Richter to do it, so she calls off the monster. You can add more aftermath, of course, but otherwise... the end!
- Stuff I'd like to see:
- At least once, Emil has to get frightened by something absurdly non-threatening, and squeal like a little girl and cling to Richter. Richter's reaction to this is up to you (like, does he sigh and feel embarrassed, does he think it's cute? etc.)
- Optional: At some point, I'd like to see Richter and Emil shout "Objection!" (It can me on sepparate occasions or at the same time, I'd just like to see them say it!
)
Okay, hurry and send me my part!
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-11-15 19:14:17 +0000 UTC]
Ack! Forgot to mention: You can do whatever you want with Marta. Or anybody else. I'd like to see some mention of Marta getting some kind of negative fate or at least being unhappy with Richter and Emil's relationship--bonus points if she finds out about the whole vore thing. XD
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-11-15 19:10:50 +0000 UTC]
I love experimenting. XD
Yah, I know what uke and seme are.
This is gonna be fun to write. XD One thing, though, mind if I post it up on an alternate account? I plan to start writing some other vore-based stuff, and figured I'd make an account dedicated to that only. I just have to come up with a good name for it. XD
I'm assuming this is same-size, right? Any specific way you want to explain away Richter's ability to do that or just an "It's something I can do, don't question it" sort of thing?
Okay, here's you critera: Richter x Emil, naturally. XD Usual roles
Post-game, but with an alternate ending: Richter didn't need to spend 1,000 years guarding the door. He and Emil are together, naturally. They can be traveling or hanging out someplace, whichever you prefer.
Why Richter eats Emil: Because he likes doing it. He just really likes doing that to Emil. Emil can either really enjoy it, be annoyed, hate it, whatever you prefer--more than one, if you'd rather that.
Anything extra I'd like to see: At least a mention of an instance where Emil ate Richter. Preferably a detailed mention. XD (Because it would be hilarious to see that reversal of roles)
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Goron-King-Darunia In reply to KageSora [2010-11-16 08:05:31 +0000 UTC]
EXPERIMENTING IS THE BEST...
Yeah, I was just making sure, because, up until recently, I didn't know what seme and uke meant...
And you can post it on whatever account you like! As long as I can read it, you could post it on the moon! Just be sure to let me know when it's done and link me to it! I want to be the first to read it!
And yes, same-size vore. If you ask me, the whole giant/giantess vore is kind of like the crippled younger brother of same-size vore, or at least a wimpy version that's easier to draw... I mean, what's the point of swallowing someone who's a 10th of your size (or smaller)? You might as well be swallowing a goldfish that can scream! I like same-size much better because it tends to last longer instead of just "slurp-swallow-gone" like giant/giantess vore. And also... I'm a gastrophile... I loves meh sum bellehs! ;3; Not that giant/giantess vore doesn't have it's perks, but same-size vore tends to leave a lot more to be described and built upon and exaggerated and... other cool stuff... (not really thinking coherently, currently having a voregasm... please wait for sensible data to re-enter my mind... )
Anywho..... If a reasonable explaination comes to you easily, then write it. If not, you can just drill past it with the "I just can because I'm that awesome, okay? Don't question it..." answer. I think Richter just happens to be one of those people who's whoop-ass enough to just do impossible things like they're child's play. 'Cuz duh Richtah be coolz liek dat, yo...
As for my criteria... OMG YESH! <~ "Holy crap, that's the freakiest icon ever... :"
Yesh, I will make Richter so smexeh, you will die to death!
Dude, Richter wouldn't just like to eat Emil... He'd love it! He'd practically get high off it!
Yes, role reversals are the best! ~Nyoron! The description will be vividly detailed...
And as for the Marta thing... I'm totally going to go for extra points... She will indeed find out about Richter and Emil's secret fetish and will also fall victim to a negative fate... Surprise ending in store for you here...
Oh mai GAWD... This is going to be soooooo much fun! *begins typing wildly... which is about 10 words per minute for me...
*
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KageSora In reply to Goron-King-Darunia [2010-11-16 17:02:34 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing, I'll be sure to link it when I post it. I just need to figure out a name for that account in the first place, ahahaha... XD
I prefer same-size, too, though micro is okay depending on the setting. Sometimes it's fun to play around with. But I know what you mean about the bellies.
He really just is epic enough to be able to do the physically impossible.
Ahaha, Emil makes Richter high, huh? XD
I look forwards to the description of that reversal. XD And I can't wait to see what you do with Marta. >D
This really will be awesome!
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khvorefan2 In reply to KageSora [2010-06-15 03:42:12 +0000 UTC]
protection vore, not so much my favorite- but i have a coupla more stories in the works i always say that and then 'in the works' ends up meaning 'months from now' LOL. but seriously! more vore! woo!
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