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Commission for ~Sakamura-------------------------------------------
WARNING
Please Respect my gallery
if you don't like it ... don't look at!
Constructive critics are welcome
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Comments: 98
(Full disclosure, this piece of artwork was a commission I requested - as such, I decided to upgrade to critique this piece, out of respect for the artist, and because it's worth it ^^)
Many things can be seen as wrong on this piece if it's taken in a purely photographical form. Eyes far away (Megatokyo-esque), stray adjustment line under the breasts, leg in front of the camera smaller than leg further away, DS symbol not perfectly centered nor are 3D lines following each other, the bathing suit does appear to be put on top of the back leg, instead of moving around it, like on the front leg. Besides, she's in a hell of an incline on the beach, and why would you put some umbrella to protect you from the sun in that angle when it's clearly on the other side of the sky! And someone who would like to relax would certainly not be sitting Japanese-style to play some DS. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
This is why I do not see this as a perfectly realist portrayal of the girl on the beach. This is why I do not see this as a photographic event that someone with a Nikon would have better luck getting than someone who draws. This is an artist who had something in her mind, and who drew it, reality or not. And thank God for that!
I absolutely LOVE what Nekochank did as an artist. The fun being portrayed in the eyes and smile, the way she made the girl all happy, inviting and friendly-looking, the way she added up personal touches that makes appear it's the girl who's being portrayed, like the glasses and the star necklace. Of course, she's sexy, feline-like (or else it wouldn't be Nekochank) but is more suggestive than in-your-face revealing.
I am not a very big beach goer, but seeing such a picture makes me want to go to the beach. It seems like such a very quiet place, but at the same time, we can feel there are other people nearby, that this is only her little piece of paradise.
Many elements of this have been seen elsewhere, whether the way the elements are organized together, the way the camera is tilted, and so on. One can say it's a standard, and that's not a bad thing in itself, since it helps reinforce the sensation of well being and comfort that's felt when seeing the image.
Now if I can only become a cartoon to go sit besides her and talk while taking it easy on this beautiful sunny day on the beach... *sigh* Come on, Saka, go to work, yet again *leash* *pout*.
Well done! Kudos!
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Ah, now this is really good. The breasts seem find, but the navel is a bit too long again, and one knee is thicker than the other.
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ohhh my dream girl 8D.What game she be playing?
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emm pokemon? i don't know XD
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OwO *throws her a free pokeball*.
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Sexy girl at the beach playing the DS, what more can we ask for?
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nice :3 on the beach in a bikini playing a DS
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Looks nice! The only crit I have is that her feet are wrong, the big toe should be on the inside not the outside (I hope that makes sense).
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Oh...
My...
Jesus Tap-Dancing Christ on a Cracker...
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As always your piece is rather good. I have to say though the eyes are too far apart, I sometimes catch you doing this from time to time, and I usually bite my lip because of my respect for you as an artist, but not this time because I care.
Your colouring is very bright and cheery. I like it.
The DS doesn't look right, almost looks like one end is smaller than the other. pay attention to vanishing points and the angles of the lines. It's tedious I know. Corner button looks crooked a bit.
(I can't critique because I don't have a premium accoun, I'm cheap lol)
But overall a most enjoyable piece away from the cat people. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more pieces like this.
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very nice work! a spot a slight error in the eyes but it still looks 124345353 times better tham my art XD
and neat design on the swimsuit, it's subtle but very good ^^
oh and she's pretty good looking to XD
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She looks like this girl named Arista, a friend of mine in high school (I'm in junior year). I challenge her to Mario Kart Racing! LOL
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>w< awesomness I challenge you to mario cart DS
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ΒΏQue estΓ‘ jugando?
Que DS tan afortunado jejejejeje buen trabajo me encanta la postura que ulitzaste en pic y su expresiΓ³n es linda e inocente.
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very sexy :3
I soooo want that swimsuit, its amazingly cute
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most unique glasses.
a wonderful piece as always. ^^
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These glasses exist in real life.
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well then you have soem cool specs. ^^
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Yep, that's my GF's glasses. In fact, that's my GF in the picture, and was designed from images.
Nope, no public piccies of her, sorry 
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Then she has cool specs.
understood.
My gf avoids wearing her glasses.
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If you try to play Nintendo DS in the beach you will see nothing int the monitors, I now that for experiece, but she's hot anyway
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nice i luv her outfit 
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She's cute, she has a great bikini and a greater taste in video games.
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very nice but her left foot looks backwards...
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Makes you wonder what game she is playing.
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As much as I would like to find something to Critique, I can't... it's too well done...
A-ha! But there is a little detail there! The Button in the DS seems a bit strange, like out of it's normal place... seems a bit weird, that's all.
Still, you can't notice so easily with that girl around...
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Hooooolllllllllly crap shes got nice legs , and you know , I think your women are so hot partially because You get the anatomy so right.
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Mmm me always love a hot voluptuous woman who knows how to work a DS
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nice job on the anatomy and colouring i love the detail on her swim suit
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I love red heads, glasses, and girls who play video games. All three in one just makes sense. Great job on everything. It's really well done.
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