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Published: 2005-06-27 06:52:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1759; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 150
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THIS THING TOOK ME FOREVER SO FULL VIEW OR ELSE U'LL NEVER SEE EVERYTHING IN IT!
this pic started a long time ago and consists of the characters in Factor L
from right to left
Masahiro Azusa/Azuma (haven't decided last name), Kotomi Shindo, Ayame Utsugi (name subject to change, any suggestions? get non asian name), and Kenji Sakurai
okey okey, very late for me already so i better go. parents are about to blow a fuse with me still playing around on DA
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Comments: 38
::sigh:: this is utterly wonderful. i love this picture a lot. the details are astounding. and i love the shading. the creases in the clothes are so nicely shaded. and the hair, especially Masahiro's. ^__^ i could go on and on. hehe
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thanksssss, and u faved it too
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wow! beautiful! just one thing though, the guys head seems a bit off for the size of his face, though it could be
the angle at wich it is shown ..( Please forgive my spelling errors. I havealot of art work to look at )
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The guy with red hair.. not sure of his name.
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thanks! who's face though?
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Wow! IT's all colored! It looks so good! *secretly sneaks up behind cyborg guy and glomps him* He's still my fave even though I love how well yuor characters have developed!
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*u* this is amazing~~
I luff the bg! it's so detailed~~
and the characters all look awesome~~
I luff the way you draw hair *envies*
Keep up the great work~~
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tthaaank youu for the fav
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It is summer and Jasmine shall plunge into her long comments that people dont USUALLY mind the length of... (read: usually)
Beautiful. 
The background is awesome, and I really like the glove ^___^ but it would be mucho sexier if Masahiro were pulling it with his teeth, but ok that's me, uber muber truber biased
One critique-esque comment would be that although the coloring is nice, maybe the collarbones stand out a little too much...? Like perhaps a lighter shading would match the overall picture better. But seriously the piece is perfect the way it is. No wonder you've remained dormant for so long. Out erupts a masterpiece~
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and yesh yesh 
awww is that why u're not on at night that much ? u're working on the piccy? 
thaankies jasi
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I think this is really well done. The amount of effort you put into this really shows. I love the BG and how detailed it is. I commend you for having the patience to draw those little people walking inside the "bridge" and on the street below. The characters in the foreground are drawn very well too. Overall, it's a great piece!
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thankies thankies ^__^ hehe, u noticed the lil ppl
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I really like it. The orange haired guy's headshape could us a little work but the other three characters and the scenery rock.
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haha, yea, i agree, kenji's head is a tad odd DX i think it's the hair
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this is exquisite!! it's so very detailed and lots of attention to shadow...i'd never have the patience to do that. XB but yeah...
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thanks
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np yo. u are deservant.
XD
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hehe, awesome. The anti-angled buildings actually is quite a cool touch ^_^ and it's all rendered so softly (pat and pending) but a little more darkness could have gone a long way. Also, Ayame is the girl with the sword? Her righthand is a little dodgy with the angle, making it look like the sword bends towards the viewer halfway down.
Awesome all round.
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thaanks! especially for the critique.
xD the pic killed me though... i'm all ready to draw something different now
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^_^ mistakes are natural which is why I asked you guys to rip my pic to shreds with critique, so I can get it perfect.
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lol
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SOORRYY PPL xD ish too lazy to edit teh above comment, i'll resize it later!
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