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Kieraux — i like your jacket.
Published: 2012-02-08 12:43:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 921; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 5
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Birthmas present for ~NamelessAndroid which was the Jan. 30th. ♥Not sure what to put here.
Herp a derp
Critique is very much welcomed.
Ai © ~NamelessAndroid
Artings © Meee
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I am really not very good at critiques so bear with me!
Lets start with positives...
I LOVE the perspective! I also really like the coloring. It is a nice cold blue that goes with the robotic look. I also like the hand close to his mouth. Its like, "What is this new object?"
Hahaha
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One thing I wasn't wowed about is the hmmm how do I put this...body anatomy? I feel like the legs are a tad to skinny.
Other than that I think you did a good job on this! Especially since it is in a hard perspective!
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I agree that his legs are too thin, though Ai is suposed to be rather scrawny. Thank you very much for the critique. c: ♥
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i like his jacket too he has a neat jacket i want his clothes sob
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Yes. Any man that can wear those clothes well has a free pass to my bed.
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Android.
Close enough.
:'BBBB
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Androids are still defined as robots. xD
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You already pretty much know how I reacted to this on Tumblr but LDKAHJKFGHJKALSJKF LLSK KLDJSFKJGJHFA
<3
It's the background on my phone. <333
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Really? ;U; ♥
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huaihdasiubasidu
I feel so special. ;u;
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I love the colors and the weird composition in this!
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I can't help you 'cause I'm not an humanoïde artist but I don't think we can precisly say where is light source.
You've really done ( I dunno if I can say that in english) the shading on the left harm but you maybe need to add more grey/or/black on the rest of the body.
Except that, I like the drawing and the perspective : D
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It's suposed to be to the left, slightly above him, but I do see the ambiguity now that you point it out. c:
(No, your English is great. xD) But, yes, I agree he could do with more contrast. Thank you for the critique! ♥
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