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Description 去年暑假[也許是吧]在臺灣和朋友合作的本漫畫電子稿,時間過去蠻久的^ ^|||
當時因為好久沒有畫漫畫了,畫技退步了不少,想要表達的東西也沒有表達清楚,于是變成了今天這個4不像作品orz
劇情比較意識流,我英文很爛,弄不好還會詞不達意,如果各位有什么問題可以直接詢問哦

最后感謝各位的捧場,漫畫我會慢慢上傳翻譯完畢的XD

PS:配對以陸空為主,惡六為輔

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The FANBOOK of KH with my friend in Taiwan. As it have been for a long time,parhaps paint in 2005,It seemed a bittle of poor quality T v T
the story is stream of consciousness, And by my poor
English,It can't be translated well...
If someone have a problem,you can answer me.

And Thank you everybody see my comic,I hope you like it^ ^

PS:the story is riku x sora Axel x Roxas...

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Comments: 17

Ironic-Sarcasm [2008-07-03 20:39:48 +0000 UTC]

This is very good. The English is kinda bad, but it was a good try!
The artwork is AMAZING! It reminded me of the art from DNAngel.

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kiercat1999 [2007-08-24 02:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank's every,I'll try my best to do more better.

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kiercat1999 In reply to kiercat1999 [2007-08-24 02:03:08 +0000 UTC]

OH,I got wrong word...I don't know how to edit it ^ ^;;
Thanks everyone

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mello091 In reply to kiercat1999 [2008-05-04 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]

don't worry about it ! your english sure is better than my chinese! we all understand perfectly !

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Eric727 [2007-08-23 01:32:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah nice artwork! good try on the english keep it up

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justamiracle4u [2007-08-22 18:05:03 +0000 UTC]

luv how u draw them ^^

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Kaykuro [2007-08-22 17:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I love how you draw the characters! Such smooth lines

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Maru-mar [2007-08-22 15:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Roxas looks so sad... And that's not true, Axel will be sad.

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trackstar94 [2007-08-22 14:45:16 +0000 UTC]

yay you sure a posting this fast

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numberman123 [2007-08-22 14:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Totally awesome! The English isn't bad. I'm sure most of us can understand your intentions with the words. XD I love the panel with Roxas and the crystal. Their expressions are wonderful.

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Niji-iro [2007-08-22 13:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Totally awsome!

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Kawaiii-Chibi [2007-08-22 13:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice~ Again, great work~
Um... Is it okay if I give you some pointers on your English~ You're probably gonna hate me...

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kiercat1999 In reply to Kawaiii-Chibi [2007-08-24 02:00:30 +0000 UTC]

OH,It doesn't matter ^ ^
My English is poor,you can tell me how to use the words more better.

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Kawaiii-Chibi In reply to kiercat1999 [2007-08-24 04:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Okay... And if you don't really understand, I can always have a shot in talking to you in Chinese...
Anyways, I think when Roxas says, "No one will be sorrow", I think a better word would be sad, instead of sorrow. I think it might just fit in a little better
And also when Roxas says, "I have my own heart! Not belongs to anyone!" Maybe "I have my own heart! It belongs to no one!" might be a bit better~
Hehe... Sorry for making it so long

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Kawaiii-Chibi In reply to Kawaiii-Chibi [2007-08-24 04:15:23 +0000 UTC]

But other than that, every thing's really good ^^

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kiercat1999 In reply to Kawaiii-Chibi [2007-08-24 05:39:16 +0000 UTC]

OH~thank you!
you give me a good advice^ ^

I will remove all the faults when I get home XD

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Kawaiii-Chibi In reply to kiercat1999 [2007-08-24 16:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Okay~ ^^ I'm not sure I'm good help though... I think I'm a pain in the butt XD

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