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kiko375 — X-Evolution.05 for 2.0ver
Published: 2010-11-12 18:20:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3267; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 20
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This page took me a long time to finish it,for the following plot was not the same as the original,we had to made the outline of the story before drewing this page<3Hope u like it!
Thanks for kyurai0 to sort out our mistake ^^
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were omega say "ill execute you for protect her" is bad,maybe instead of protection,say"for her safety",and also,i dunno if you spelled it like that on purpose,but im pretty sure its doru,not duro,but yeah,and also,when dexdorugoramon says "you are the Alpha"if your meaning as like as in alpha is famous,like hes questioning his identity,then try capitalizing the,or maybe making it all upper case letters would be better,for emphasis,like this "You are THE Alpha?" and also then alpha says "You...You are the..." maybe get rid of the,but idk what hes gonna say after that,so yeah,other than that its really good,keep it up,lol
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I am the translator.
THX to your amendments!We will take it!
You know,my work is translating CN into ENG.I will try my best to avoid some obvious grammer mistakes.But cuz both kiko and I are not native Eng speakers,making meticulous different between words and tones is not easy to us -- for this point, hope for mading progress with your help.
THX a lot!!!
PLZ continue to correct and encourage us!
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lol,no problem at all,its my pleasure,and ill try my best so don't worry,and i hope u 2 become very successful!
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ooooh 
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