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Published: 2007-08-23 14:52:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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So yah, I didn't like the original lose pose too much so I decided to throw up another piece of art from my maw. This came out. Kinda happy, kinda sad.Either way. I'm gonna get to work on this soon with the inking and colouring.
For now I'm re-working the colouring on win pose so it doesn't look so muddy. Same goes for the first story page.
Probably gonna go for something much more simple than the approach I'm trying, as I'm trying to make a battle comic possible on entervoid, not a single shot masterpiece.
Peace out, lemme know what you think.
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Definently like this one more.
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I think it looks way better than the original piece. This one has more of Kiljax's personality in it. The rubble is looking good but you've got a big empty space in the top left hand corner, I would suggest filling that with something, which goes back to the comments I made about backgrounds before.
And remember, while you don't want to go too detailed, each panel IS a little single shot masterpiece. Showing your true potential as an artist relies on being able to create little materpieces in succession to tell your story. As long as you don't skimp, and you remain consistant everything will look great.
PS: You forgot his tattoos/magic vents
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Yes, I know I forgot them. This is just a prelim.
And you know there's a timelimit on subscriptions at Void, so spending 5 hours colouring a single panel/page would be a little retarded, as I have a life and a job
The blank space will be filled with randomness, be it clouds or more rubble or even an 'eat at Denny's sign'.... I hate Denny's so much...
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Well......it's either that or you keep practicing and getting better to the point where an awesome piece doesn't take you that long.....
c.c
Just a thought....but yeah, all in all I think it looks great and with color, even better.
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