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Dear friend, dear family, dear all whom I hate.This is my chance... My time to escape...
My time to shine, I've just crossed the line.
I swallowed some pills and am slowly dying.
I've taken my life, with no kind of regret.
I came to realize, my life isn't shit.
Reality hates me, fantasy ignores me.
But this shiny little knife, all but adores me.
I cut my wrists, my blood falling into mists.
The vein slowly hisses, as I look into abysses.
I draw the steel, from is red warm womb.
Trail the blood on this note, spelling out "Doom".
I cry acid tears, they burn out my eyes.
They take the sights away from this world I despise.
I still feel the pain, I still hear the torrment.
As my soul in my body, still remains dorment.
I get out the rope, tie up the noose.
I've remained here far to long, it's time to be set loose.
I hang my head is sorrow, bidding my farwell.
I jump off the chair, and fall down to Hell...
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Comments: 104
AshamedAngel343 [2013-08-02 18:24:19 +0000 UTC]
Can I borrow this on a game? I wanna use this for a game called Worlize.
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kalliat [2012-08-14 12:15:55 +0000 UTC]
Mind if I use this tomorrow?
I just want one last day here on Earth before I go, and I have had no inspiration in this dark time.
I will be, however, using a razor.
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DracoAwesomeness In reply to kalliat [2016-12-18 23:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Please don't go You'll hurt not only yourself you will hurt others like ur family and it won't solve anything sorry if u don't know me
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xZylerx In reply to kalliat [2015-02-24 23:59:42 +0000 UTC]
you have no idea how much that scared me D: D: D: D:
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kalliat In reply to xZylerx [2015-02-28 03:00:47 +0000 UTC]
holy shit when did i write that
fuck i was an angsty little shithead im so sorry 8(
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DreamsphereINC In reply to kalliat [2013-01-30 03:05:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad too see you didn't go thought with it....jeez almost have me a heart attack ;n;...
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kalliat In reply to DreamsphereINC [2013-01-30 07:53:22 +0000 UTC]
...
Hmm.
I don't remember writing this.
...
...
...
Hmm.
I'm never letting my friends near my iPad again.
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DreamsphereINC In reply to kalliat [2013-01-30 13:18:10 +0000 UTC]
Good plan.....
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No one.....
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Touches.....
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THE IPAD (atleast in my case)
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Killerkeller In reply to DreamsphereINC [2014-01-01 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]
WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE??!
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Killerkeller In reply to DreamsphereINC [2014-02-28 06:19:48 +0000 UTC]
You don't look so dirty.
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DreamsphereINC In reply to Killerkeller [2014-02-28 14:01:17 +0000 UTC]
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KoalaJ-Corner [2012-05-26 15:20:03 +0000 UTC]
Makes me think about my friend shady aka scott. I'm bullied a lot, i've taken a lot of sh*t. Just don't feel like i can make it anymore, i don't think i can go on...
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B3tterinTim3 [2012-04-15 17:37:34 +0000 UTC]
I love it. Not to be weird or anything haha, but yeah I love it!
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ifeelviolated22 [2012-02-12 01:27:02 +0000 UTC]
i love this, i've written so many things like it as well.
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zorgothe [2011-02-22 01:13:08 +0000 UTC]
I've been thinking about killing myself, but I'm too scared to attempt it.
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Animegeekmak In reply to zorgothe [2011-03-10 03:45:56 +0000 UTC]
Its not worth it. Even if you don't know it, there is someone out there who is waiting to meet you. Someone who is waiting for you to make their life important. Someone already loves you. Please trust me because I swear its true.
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zorgothe In reply to Animegeekmak [2011-03-11 02:05:48 +0000 UTC]
Why? whats the point of life if were all just gonna die anyway? besides,. my life sucks, im a ugly worthless piece of garbage, and im a moron.
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Animegeekmak In reply to zorgothe [2011-03-11 02:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Let me just say that I've thought through suicide before and it changed me. I thought I was hopeless and unable to help the ones I love, only hurt them. But it turns out that there is one who will love me no matter what happens. No matter what crap I throw His way he will always forgive me if I'm truely sorry. And the point of life is to seek Him. He doesn't see you as an ugly worthless piece of garbage, or a moron. He created you and he thinks you are the most beautiful work of art. You don't have to agree with me but I just want to share a piece of my hope with you. The thing that keeps me alive everyday.
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xXFadedscarsX In reply to Animegeekmak [2011-09-07 03:02:08 +0000 UTC]
Now, I as well contemplate suicide...However, as you say that this 'special someone' who doesn't judge you or anything is out there. Somewhere in the world, awaiting to find you. Correct? This is your intake? However, if you think of it this way. What would happen if the person your 'meant' to be with already died? Killed himself out of suicide, did a stupid act and died. It's not like your going to find the same person who feels for you the same way that person would have. And Zorgothe has a point. We all die in the end of life, so really there isn't any point of living...
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BlackDreamX In reply to zorgothe [2011-03-03 10:03:16 +0000 UTC]
"Do not fear Death, but embrace him. Do not fear the darkness, but let it engulf you. We are not scared of Death, but we are scared of imagining Death, for the mind is far more powerful than the body." ~Me Talking To Myself While Staring At My Wrist Holding A Knife...
But do not even think about doing it unless you know your life is full of bullshit like mine is.
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horcruxhorror [2010-12-24 02:47:35 +0000 UTC]
come to think of it, i would probably write mine in poetry form too. I'm better at poetry than prose
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BakaLeo [2010-10-26 04:41:02 +0000 UTC]
very well i choosto hate it but very nice job its a splinded poem
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silentchild01 [2010-06-14 21:25:38 +0000 UTC]
i dont hate this is so sad , its gives my like this heavy sorrowful feeling i love it !
its dark
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brokenlov [2009-12-27 04:47:51 +0000 UTC]
wow this is really great. you did so well. this is deep, relatable, and dark. i love it!
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samo4251 [2009-12-08 22:06:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that is awesome, not a bad thing to leave behind
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nikkynikki [2009-10-13 19:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Very nice poem, I really like it. I can definitely relate to the emotion.
You definitely have talent I wish I could rhyme. Sadly I couldn't if my life depended on it.
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BlackDreamX In reply to nikkynikki [2011-03-03 10:13:58 +0000 UTC]
You may not be able rhyme, but you have time.
To learn new things, is to become the one of the kings.
Of your own kingdom in your mind, your imagination is the most powerful find.
To control your own worlds just by thinking, I leave this world to my own as I start sinking.
Into my own worlds I go, to laugh at my cousins weird arse afro.(I don't care, I did this for the hell of it. Also I know I suck at it)
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Killerkeller In reply to nikkynikki [2009-10-15 22:28:47 +0000 UTC]
Awwww thank you for your comment!
And I'm sure you're good as well. I'm going to check out your stuff.
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nikkynikki In reply to Killerkeller [2009-10-15 23:57:45 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome Well thanks.
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temarifan111 [2009-06-30 07:54:55 +0000 UTC]
Your words are
sooo
different
that they are powerful.
Good job.
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ForensicRockinRisu [2009-06-07 23:17:18 +0000 UTC]
I love this. You're style is excellent, and I've felt like that a few times.
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LifeIsDeadRIP [2009-04-02 04:09:52 +0000 UTC]
I get out the rope, tie up the noose.
I've remained here far to long, it's time to be set loose.
I hang my head is sorrow, bidding my farwell.
I jump off the chair, and fall down to Hell... ,
I like this line
very nice dark and sad but amazing all the same
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xbrittx102 [2009-03-18 22:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Your wonderful at poetry. I wish I was that creative.
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Killerkeller In reply to xbrittx102 [2009-03-19 04:43:27 +0000 UTC]
I just looked through your gallery and just became an extremely jealous person.
You're extremely talented. Much more so then I.
I immortalize art by words, your art is worth 1000.
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xbrittx102 In reply to Killerkeller [2009-03-19 19:07:22 +0000 UTC]
Well then I'll just have to read your gallery and yours will defintely be better I know it and I'll prove it too XD
Thank you for saying I'm talented but I'm horrible at poetry as you can see at [link] and the more I read it the more I think it sucks XD I like the little guy i drew in it though XD
I think everybodys art is amazing. I believe that immortalizing art by words is ten times harder than what I do.
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Killerkeller In reply to xbrittx102 [2009-03-19 23:51:38 +0000 UTC]
I loved that poem! It added a lot to the deviation, and yes, the gray blob guy is pretty wicked .
Nooo, you're not. It doesn't matter what it sounds like, it's the meaning that matters.
And no, it's no differently. At least people can see what you mean.
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xbrittx102 In reply to Killerkeller [2009-03-20 12:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you XP hehe I named grey blob guy Jorge
Well, yeah I guess XD
I like your writing better because people can enterpret what you mean and come to their own conclusions. In mine you just see one thing,
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ConstantAgony [2008-05-09 13:30:16 +0000 UTC]
thats amazing is all i can say
ur really talented
i couldnt rhyme to save my life
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Killerkeller In reply to ConstantAgony [2008-07-14 05:07:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Hey, don't get yourself so down. I like your stuff!
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dbcjk499 [2008-04-17 17:15:55 +0000 UTC]
very very good
i really liked it.
I can really relate
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