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Published: 2015-01-15 20:36:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 578; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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So I had this English test today, but I didn't even know until someone told me today and I had to study about 400 words within two hours orz, I'm so smart...Anyway 'eternity' was one of the words I had to study and I don't even know why I put that as the title, because I couldn't think of something else urgh
I really don't know but I've got the feeling that something's wrong with his face ;0
Also, it has been so long since I drew any of my OC x)
[edit] wow I found the critique button
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Comments: 11
Overall this piece looks awesome. I love the art style you used and the colouring you used really fits the scene. I also love how you did the hair and the highlights and shadows in it. However like you said there is something off about the face. I believe it could be his left side jaw area (our right) needs to be sharper and slightly less rounded. And you may need to lessen the neck so there is a curve (his left side) I think another possibility is the blending between the nose and mouth area and the shadows needs to be slightly more gradual from the pale white to the tan colour. I love how you drew the nose.
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Thank you really really much for this detailed comment!
I totally agree with the blending between the nose and the mouth, I didn't even realize it ;O
And all the other tips too, they were really helpful ;D
Thank you again!
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Well I find that title fits perfectly to the mood of that pic. Makes you think about it....^^
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Yeah, most of titles are created in a whim, in my folder theyre called either Roger in Water or Roprorotpoyyogogkf
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dannng gurl, wat is er met jou kleurgebruik gebeurd? dikke boost!
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Ik weet niet eigenlijk haha, gewoon staren naar andere tekeningen en tutorials zoeken xD
Maar thanks!!
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vooral staren XD
heb je n paar goeie tutorials voor mijn collectie? ;D
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Uhm, ja voor deze had ik een deel van deze tutorial gebruikt
en deze
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ahh ik moet denken aan jack frost als ik dit plaatje zie :'D Het ziet er echt super uit!
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Haha thanks!! Jack Frost? Ja kan wel, afgezien van het witte haar haha
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