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King-Of-Feathers — Sketches Campout Challenge:part 1

Published: 2014-02-03 04:18:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 9218; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 24
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Description The real fun started when we got off the plane. Our scoutmaster met us at the airport, and drove us and six other kids from our troops out to the campsite in a van that had a TV and video game system in it! It was only a Playstation one, with a couple of games, but we had a blast for the five hours it took us to drive to the campsite. I was winning against everyone, as always, so Brandon decided to help some of the other kids cheat. You see, I was sitting on the seat near the sliding door, with my legs folded up under me, with my feet sticking out the side. Brandon, who was sitting behind me, suddenly grabbed my ankle, and started taking off my sandal. I didn't do anything about it, because I was paying attention to the game, and I didn't really mind what was about to happen.

"Well, what we have here? The bare foot of a 'Ticklee'!"

I don't know if that was the way my anklet was to begin with, or if Brandon set it that way - it didn't really matter when Brandon was about. The guys in my troop knew how much my big brother tickled the crap out of me, and I think they even looked forward to it!

"C'mon, bro! Not while I'm trying to concentrate! I'm about to set a record, here!" I protested, giggling already, even though my ankle was only being held.

Brandon knew he had me. The way I was sitting, with him holding my ankle, I would just end up tumbling out of the seat face-first if I tried to change position. I couldn't help looking back from time to time, and the grin on my big brother's face just made me more and more nervous. That distraction alone almost made me lose to my buddy, Jeff. But I knew that Brandon wouldn't be content with me losing that easily.

"Introducing, the best T.J. tickler in the world, next to me, of course!" Brandon announced.

Oh no! He wouldn't! Not in front of all our friends! I thought to myself. Anything but that!

"My little brother and protégé, Sandy!"

I held my breath, and tried to concentrate on the game - as if that would make a difference. Brandon's friends cheered on Sandy as my little brother's fingers touched my sole; as if the little stinker needed any encouragement to tickle me. My friends were already teasing me about how I was going to lose, and I have to say that I was going crazy. And Sandy hadn't even started yet!
The instant those little fingers started moving, it was like the tickling sensations were a sledgehammer shooting up my legs, straight to my stomach. I was gritting my teeth at first, but I couldn't hold back my giggling, and keep trying to play at the same time. Brandon's friends were laughing and commenting on how much Sandy's tickling must have been getting to me, because my feet were wiggling as much as possible, as Jeff and my other friends were joking about how there was no way I could win laughing like that. 

They weren't wrong. I never could resist squinting my eyes shut whenever I got tickled, and it was getting nearly impossible to keep playing. Jeff was toying with me; his fighter in the game just taking jabs at me from time to time, and easily evading my attempts to attack. I was playing like an amateur, and between that, and the embarrassment of having all out friends watch as my youngest brother tickled my helpless foot, I swear I was twice as ticklish as normal.

And that wasn't even the end of it. I'd been able to push Sandy's fingers away from time to time with my other foot, but before long, someone pulled off my other sandal. It had to be more than just Sandy then, because I felt what must have been five times as many fingers tickling; now on both feet. That was the end of it. I flopped forward, not caring what would happen, just laughing my head off. 

Someone caught me, thank goodness; but those same hands pulled me back into the rear seats, where people started tickling me all over. I was totally lost, laughing and squirming; twisted upside down so the guys in the back seat could grab and tickle my feet as those in the middle seat scourged my sides and stomach. Fingers had slipped up under my toes, driving me mad with ticklishness, as hands crawled under my shirt to get my sides, stomach and ribs.



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Comments: 22

King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-04 21:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Here's the jest of whats happening if you find the story to long. okay so are lead t.j has gotten of the plane with his bothers hes now driving to camp in this supped up bus which has video games in it, which he seems to be really good at since he's beating everybody. his brothers and the other boys are getting tired of this so Brandon his older bro starts tickling him and invites his little bro sandy to join in on it. which is not only distracting and humiliating but causing him to lose against his buddy jeff who is taking great delite in beating him. despite t.j's protest he's eventually tickled until he slumps forward in this moment he is pulled back upside down into one of the seats  and gang tickled by all the other boys 

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SergeantD [2014-02-03 17:08:06 +0000 UTC]

I honestly believe this is perhaps the best tickle comic you've done and all the hard work you put into greatly shows dude!!! The detail of each comic panel is absolutely stunning, especially the incredibly ticklish looking soles of the two young teens I can't wait to see more comics

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to SergeantD [2014-02-04 20:55:31 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SOOOO MUUUUCCCH. i've been wanting to get back into comics  ever since i learned my new technique. im soooo glad i got the opportunity to do so it seems to have worked out great and yes your right i took allot of work but it all paid of and im so glad be on the look out for the next one soon .


oh and thanks for saying so i was really worried id lose my attention to detail from each panel.oh dang i hope i didn't draw it to confusing but theres only one boys bare feet being shown and tickled which is the lead  Jeff hasn't been tickled just yet lol and do be worried the rest of comic will be posted soon for sure. ^_^ 

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seto749 [2014-02-03 15:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Clever bit with the numbers, and a good match for the story.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-02-04 20:36:47 +0000 UTC]

THANKS SO MUCH i'm having a lot of fun doing this lol iv'e admired this story for awhile and am so glad that i'm finally getting to do  it . by the way thanks for commenting  but you've just got to tell me your favorite panel i'm gonna use that information for when i start doing the next part.

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-11 19:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I never picked a favourite panel, but there were reasons. I'm in a grim mood right now after seeing something completely unnecessary.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-05-29 23:55:37 +0000 UTC]

i sure wonder what that was :/ ?

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-05-31 15:33:02 +0000 UTC]

It was a gratuitous slur.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-06-01 05:12:35 +0000 UTC]

i can only imagine what that was 

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AnimeBoyPerv [2014-02-03 14:57:02 +0000 UTC]

The description/story and the comic is very well done

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to AnimeBoyPerv [2014-02-04 20:31:54 +0000 UTC]

oooh thanks so much unfortunately i cant take credit for all of those things lol oh by the way i wanna say thanks for continuing to comment on my pieces its very much appreciated by the way which panel is your favorite ? 

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AnimeBoyPerv In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-05 14:02:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all and hard to say...i like most of the panels as much .

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to AnimeBoyPerv [2014-02-10 03:44:04 +0000 UTC]

well okay thats good ^_^

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Mr-R0bby-R0b [2014-02-03 09:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Looking good!

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to Mr-R0bby-R0b [2014-02-04 20:30:35 +0000 UTC]

which panel would you say was your favorite ? ^_^

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Mr-R0bby-R0b In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-04 21:09:07 +0000 UTC]

A tie between 8 and 10, with the boy's soles nice and in view.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to Mr-R0bby-R0b [2014-02-10 03:43:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks cool ^_^

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WIfootlvr [2014-02-03 04:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Love it,very well done,good reading,good job  

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to WIfootlvr [2014-02-04 20:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much but i've got to give the reading part to my idol but you can't leave  without telling me which ones your favorite panel buddy ? ^_^

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WIfootlvr In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-04 22:56:59 +0000 UTC]

thats a hard one but its between 7 and 8

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to WIfootlvr [2014-02-10 03:43:51 +0000 UTC]

awesome ^_^ cool

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King-Of-Feathers [2014-02-03 04:20:54 +0000 UTC]

i'll admit this took up the better part of my weekend so all comments are highly appreciated and dully noted for the future especially when i'm choosing request *wink* lol 

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