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Published: 2007-04-09 19:45:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 5377; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 25
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Chapter One: ReflectionsThe production of an image by or as if by a mirror; an effect produced by an influence
All 17 pages of the first chapter. Decided to put all the pages together in one file to make reading easier and to declutter my gallery.
Read it on Smackjeeves
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Cover [link]
Chapter 1: Reflections ( YOU ARE HERE)
Chapter 2: Awakening [link]
Chapter 3:Affliction [link]
Chapter 4: Detainment [link]
Chapter 5: Transcendence
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nice comic~
i also would like to ask, how did you put all the pages together? wich program did you use?
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Thanks. I used Flash to put all the pages together and for coding the buttons used to navigate between pages. This tutorial might help, [link] although it's not the method I used.
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Great! I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well. Lucky will be making more appearances
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i'll bet you could make a hit show if you spend some bucks to get an airtime and some profecional animators. you shold hold like a donation thing for the start of it. agree?
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That would be pretty cool if it happened but i'll just focus my energies into finishing the comic first. I'm open to wherever it goes from there.
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Thank you, glad you are enjoying the story
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Did you mean "epitome" when you wrote "apitamy" on the first page? x3
I feel like a grammar snob when I bring up stuff like that. >.o Sorries.
Do you have a copy editor? (=
I like the story! I'm on my way to read chapter two right now! Did not see that coming at the end! xD
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It's ok. I've been meaning to change that for the longest but I can't seem to find the original Photoshop file to redo the spelling. I don't have an editor or anything like that so I tend to miss small things. But now i'm starting to spellcheck in MS Word more often so mistakes are getting less frequent.
But i'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. Only Ch.1 and 2 are on Da so far but feel free to read the comic at Smackjeeves to be fully up to date.
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Well if you ever need an editor, I've a lot of time on my hands in betwixt my hours of writing. It would be a good break for me from my work and it would just be amazing to be part of something as cool as your comic.
Even if you don't wish for my services, you could have someone close to you check your script. Computers can't check everything. ^^
And I think I will go read the rest of your comic right now. x) I'm curious as to what's going to happen. ^^
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Thank you so much for your kinda offer! I'll definitely have to keep you in mind. I've had some close friends proof read my script in the pass but they didn't do a very thorough job...grammar and spelling wasn't their strong points. My main issue is sentence structure, trying to get everything to flow like i'd like it but not be too wordy. But it seems to be getting easier as I make new pages. I look forward to your thoughts on the next few pages!And if you seen any other errors let me know. ^_^
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Well I'm a bit of a grammar nazi and spelling comes naturally to me so you know I'll do a good job there. xD
And flow is a hard thing to accomplish--I know I've had trouble with it in the past and I probably always will because it takes skill and time. But if you work at it, you'll get better. (=
As for errors, I'll let you know if I see any more, probably in a note. I look forward to reading more. ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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This has a very interesting idea for a story. I'd like to see how it unfolds. X3
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Thanks! I have a few pages in my DA gallery but the majority of them as well as all the new work is on my SmackJeeves account
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Nice! I like ur main girl already! ^^
But I do have a question....is it really all copyrighted? How did u do that?! O_O
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oooooh Looks interesting! ^^ I'm going to keep up with this one ^^
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thanks! it's good to know so many folks are liking the story so far.
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Hey, I saw your submission on Small Press Idol and thought I would check out your stuff. I like the colors and the Marissa character is fun ^_^ I liked her language but in the last panel she seemed to say too much. But I don't know enough about her to really judge though, do I? 
Are you gonna do the whole comic in color if you get into the third round? That would be pretty cool, but it looks like a lot of work!
Well, congrats on getting in and I hope you do well!
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i agree. I think i need to break that one page into 2. it'll make things seem less rushed.
I'm glad you found me through SPI and decided to stop by and comment .All the art there is so good so it's nice to know my little story caught your eye. But i'm doing the entire comic in color even if i don't make it to round 3. It's good practice in storymaking and art. And besides that, i just enjoy color too much to only stick with black and white.^^
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To be honest, I was one of the contestants (Cassandra Evans Project). I submitted to early in the development stage of the comic and I rushed the cover and my writer. I noticed your comic was one of the only eastern styled ones.
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oh thanks. I kinda just make them up as i go along. Luckily i haven't ran into any major problems yet
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Nice. Heh I like the theif. "I need to work out."
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lol, yeah. a slow thief is a dead thief. ^^
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oooh nice! i like it so much i can't wait to see more!
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thank you! I have up to page 25 made and i'll post them here in sets of 5 pages each.
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