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well, im going to receive alot of crap about this. this is not about the artwork at all. i spen such little time on the correctness that its not even funny. i spent more time on the little pointless details than the actual drawing. just check out that gun! and the pants... i love those. anywhoo, im tryin to design a character, or actually 3-4, and this is one of them. forget the head, and forget the wonky breasts and forget the giril in the costume compleatly!( its a girl cause i havn't drawn one in over a month.... u can tell by how bad she is! i dont even know if this is for a girl, it probably is. just thing of the person in it as a manikin) this drawing was so that i could put all the clothing elements togeather because i have been designing them seperately, and i think it came out knida nice, except for the fact that i drew it terribly. what i do think i drew wrong, and i dont know if it is even reckignizable, is the suspenders.i love em in the middle, but on the sides, they go out way too far. and... o yeah, i dont know if u can see it, but she has 2 shirts. so the creasis on her stomack... are not rolls of fat, they are creases in her long sleve shirt *.* (i think i have to change the shirt situation, it just looks bad.) one more flaw, is that the coat is too open at teh top, and that's about it. hmm... so, PLEASE!!!! GIVE ME SOME SUGGESTIONS, COMMENTS, SAY MORE THAN 3 SENTINCES IF YOU WRITE!please, give me some new suggestions for a shirt also! thx a ton everyone...

(this will later end up in scraps, so dont worry anyone...)

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well, im going to receive alot of crap about this. this is not about the artwork at all. i spen such little time on the correctness that its not even funny. i spent more time on the little pointless details than the actual drawing. just check out that gun! and the pants... i love those. anywhoo, im tryin to design a character, or actually 3-4, and this is one of them. forget the head, and forget the wonky breasts and forget the giril in the costume compleatly!( its a girl cause i havn't drawn one in over a month.... u can tell by how bad she is! i dont even know if this is for a girl, it probably is. just thing of the person in it as a manikin) this drawing was so that i could put all the clothing elements togeather because i have been designing them seperately, and i think it came out knida nice, except for the fact that i drew it terribly. what i do think i drew wrong, and i dont know if it is even reckignizable, is the suspenders.i love em in the middle, but on the sides, they go out way too far. and... o yeah, i dont know if u can see it, but she has 2 shirts. so the creasis on her stomack... are not rolls of fat, they are creases in her long sleve shirt *.* (i think i have to change the shirt situation, it just looks bad.) one more flaw, is that the coat is too open at teh top, and that's about it. hmm... so, PLEASE!!!! GIVE ME SOME SUGGESTIONS, COMMENTS, SAY MORE THAN 3 SENTINCES IF YOU WRITE!please, give me some new suggestions for a shirt also! thx a ton everyone...

(this will later end up in scraps, so dont worry anyone...)