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A Primal Work Of Rage By

I was looking for something to emphasize Johnny's badassery. I was already free to spank every character as much as my perverted heart desired in this story, but I didn't want that to be all it was about. I already tried a calm cool collected, yet sarcastic martial arts style character that handled most situations with a certain finesse. Johnny on the other hand was a prime candidte for a "Get mad and break shit" type character. I didn't even hit the forums for this one. I saw RattlePool's gallery once and thought this style would be perfect for Johnny's berserker style adrenaline rush. I gave him a synopsis basically, of who Johnny was and how he acts in the story to bring about this transformation. Even though he completely nailed Johnny's rage, this backfired on me in the best way possible. I explained how Johnny begrudged care for Felicia, and spanks her like a father figure, and these two examples showed up on the draft sheet he sent me. I caved instantly and asked him to finish all three. I was no where near financially prepared for three commissions, but I do not regret it at all! RattlePool made it worth every penny!

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A Primal Work Of Rage By

I was looking for something to emphasize Johnny's badassery. I was already free to spank every character as much as my perverted heart desired in this story, but I didn't want that to be all it was about. I already tried a calm cool collected, yet sarcastic martial arts style character that handled most situations with a certain finesse. Johnny on the other hand was a prime candidte for a "Get mad and break shit" type character. I didn't even hit the forums for this one. I saw RattlePool's gallery once and thought this style would be perfect for Johnny's berserker style adrenaline rush. I gave him a synopsis basically, of who Johnny was and how he acts in the story to bring about this transformation. Even though he completely nailed Johnny's rage, this backfired on me in the best way possible. I explained how Johnny begrudged care for Felicia, and spanks her like a father figure, and these two examples showed up on the draft sheet he sent me. I caved instantly and asked him to finish all three. I was no where near financially prepared for three commissions, but I do not regret it at all! RattlePool made it worth every penny!

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