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.: Name :.
Shallowpool
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.: Age :.
46 moons // 3 yrs 8 months (or nine, my math may be off.)
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.: Gender :.
She-cat // female
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.: Clan :.
Iceclan
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.: Position :.
Senior Warrior
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.: Parents :.
Father // Minnowclaw
Mother // Silverpad
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.: Siblings :.
None
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.: Mate :.
Fleetfoot (deceased)
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.: Kits :.
Leafpaw, Wrenpaw, Brightkit, Dustkit, Breezekit, Riverkit
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.: Brief Personality :.
[ Loud/Talkative | Brash | Impatient | Independent | ]
In character.
| Loud/Talkative | - I don't think I've ever held my tounge. I might have ignored that one lesson...oh, what-- Ah, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.' I don' like that. If you have something that needs to be said, go on and say it. It's just as bad said as thought.

| Brash | - I don't mind stepping on toes and making cats uncomfortable. Sometimes you need to come out of your bubble! *coughFleetfootcough*

| Impatient | - Yeah, well, waiting is for mouse-brains and cowards. If you can make things happen, why wait? Sieze every opportunity to make things happen today. Better yet, make them happen yesterday. I hate waiting.

| Independent | - Know how to do things by yourself, that's what my aunt taught me. She was a medicine cat, so she taught me things that I think ALL cats should know to survive. I love my Clan and never want to be without them, but if something were to happen, I can hunt and heal myself, so I would be ok on my own.


Temporary | Insecure, Depressed |
After Fleetfoot... I'm just done. I'm only here to raise my newest kits, the kits Fleetfoot wanted so badly, the kits he'll never see... The poppy seeds Leafpaw brings me help numb the world. He's taking good care of his siblings, too. I'm not worthy to be their mother anymore, I couldn't save their father..

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.: Brief History :.
She was born early, the only kit in her litter. Her mother was taking a walk with her mate, by the river pools, and she began to feel bad, and then she had her kit. Her mother named her Shallowkit because she was born in a shallow pool of water by the river. She soon caught up with the other kits, and became fast friends with the brothers Ravenkit and Fleetkit. They all grew up together, and now are all Warriors. After a long, strange courtship she and Fleetfoot became mates, not realizing it was Ravenstreak who loved her first. She and Fleetfoot grew into love, and after a while started a family. Fleetfoot died protecting her from a snake, but the trauma caused the early arrival of their second litter and Shallowpool's depression.

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.: Brief Apprarance :.
A boisterous and loud female warrior with a white and cream pelt and light blue eyes.
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.: Where you live :.
Ga
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Important Relationships
Family
Acquaintance
Friend
Good Friend
Mentor
Crush
Love
Hate/Dislike
Discomfort

Ravenstreak || He's an awesome friend. He listens, and helps with problems. I have this headstrong, do it my way or else thing going on, but Ravenstreak talks me through some things and guides me through it other (sometimes easier) ways. Take my relationship with Fleetfoot for example. When I want to talk, I just go on and say it, but Fleetfoot doesn't work like that. He shuts down, and shuts me out. Ravenstreak saved our friendship, and I am thankful. Now deceased.
Fleetfoot || He has been my best friend since kithood. We get along because we both like to laugh, we're so similar. Even though he still shuts down sometimes, I think he's the best mate in the world and a wonderful father.Now deceased.
Leafpaw || I can't help but be partial to my little son. He reminds me so much of my mother, in stature and nature. Though he's much more hyper. But how, WHY did I have to crush his dream of being a Warrior like Fleetfoot and go behind his back to make him a medicine cat? I hate that I did it. But if it keeps my son safe...
Wrenpaw || My beautiful, cheerful daughter, the spit image of her dad. I love her, but I can't be around her since her father died. She's so much like him.
Ashstar || My young apprentice, all grown up and leading our clan. I am so increadably proud of him. He will always be my first son.
Starlingflight || My second apprentice! She's grown now too. She's the smartest cat in the Clan aside from me
Bumblecloud || Our deputy, he's a strong cat. I don't know of any other cat strong enough to leave the Clans to search for his family like he did.
New kits || I love them all, but they remind me of Fleetfoot. It's hard to be a mother to them.





Lineart of the cats: Angry cat *aThousandPaws [link]
Depressed cat *xXBloodyWarriorXx [link]
Headshot ~FlyingSpaceDorito [link]
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Comments: 57

karysha13 In reply to ??? [2012-04-22 15:18:45 +0000 UTC]

hello ^^ i was wondering if you would like to rp in stoneclan chat room [link] for a bit?

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Meganpony In reply to ??? [2011-12-05 02:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Woops, forgot to add this.

Love how you drew her! Wonderful job!

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Meganpony In reply to ??? [2011-12-05 02:11:10 +0000 UTC]

For starters, what position are you rooting for?
And the description lists characteristics a medicine cat has, is that your position?

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kisini In reply to Meganpony [2011-12-05 02:16:02 +0000 UTC]

I was going for Warrior, actually. She knows a little bit of first aid kind of stuff, in my imagination her aunt was a medicine cat and taught her a few little tricks Anyway... yes, I was quite proud of that particular drawing, however, it is very heavily referenced from one I found somewhere... but I'm getting better!

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Meganpony In reply to kisini [2011-12-05 02:47:58 +0000 UTC]

That's great! Nice little twist there, I like it.
There it nothing wrong in referencing in my opinion! If you notice your mistakes and learn from them in the future your just helping yourself get better! Keep up the good work.

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kisini In reply to Meganpony [2011-12-05 02:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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