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.: Name :.
Shallowpool
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.: Age :.
46 moons // 3 yrs 8 months (or nine, my math may be off.)
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.: Gender :.
She-cat // female
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.: Clan :.
Iceclan
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.: Position :.
Senior Warrior
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.: Parents :.
Father // Minnowclaw
Mother // Silverpad
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.: Siblings :.
None
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.: Mate :.
Fleetfoot (deceased)
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.: Kits :.
Leafpaw, Wrenpaw, Brightkit, Dustkit, Breezekit, Riverkit
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.: Brief Personality :.
[ Loud/Talkative | Brash | Impatient | Independent | ]
In character.
| Loud/Talkative | - I don't think I've ever held my tounge. I might have ignored that one lesson...oh, what-- Ah, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.' I don' like that. If you have something that needs to be said, go on and say it. It's just as bad said as thought.

| Brash | - I don't mind stepping on toes and making cats uncomfortable. Sometimes you need to come out of your bubble! *coughFleetfootcough*

| Impatient | - Yeah, well, waiting is for mouse-brains and cowards. If you can make things happen, why wait? Sieze every opportunity to make things happen today. Better yet, make them happen yesterday. I hate waiting.

| Independent | - Know how to do things by yourself, that's what my aunt taught me. She was a medicine cat, so she taught me things that I think ALL cats should know to survive. I love my Clan and never want to be without them, but if something were to happen, I can hunt and heal myself, so I would be ok on my own.


Temporary | Insecure, Depressed |
After Fleetfoot... I'm just done. I'm only here to raise my newest kits, the kits Fleetfoot wanted so badly, the kits he'll never see... The poppy seeds Leafpaw brings me help numb the world. He's taking good care of his siblings, too. I'm not worthy to be their mother anymore, I couldn't save their father..

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.: Brief History :.
She was born early, the only kit in her litter. Her mother was taking a walk with her mate, by the river pools, and she began to feel bad, and then she had her kit. Her mother named her Shallowkit because she was born in a shallow pool of water by the river. She soon caught up with the other kits, and became fast friends with the brothers Ravenkit and Fleetkit. They all grew up together, and now are all Warriors. After a long, strange courtship she and Fleetfoot became mates, not realizing it was Ravenstreak who loved her first. She and Fleetfoot grew into love, and after a while started a family. Fleetfoot died protecting her from a snake, but the trauma caused the early arrival of their second litter and Shallowpool's depression.

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.: Brief Apprarance :.
A boisterous and loud female warrior with a white and cream pelt and light blue eyes.
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.: Where you live :.
Ga
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Important Relationships
Family
Acquaintance
Friend
Good Friend
Mentor
Crush
Love
Hate/Dislike
Discomfort

Ravenstreak || He's an awesome friend. He listens, and helps with problems. I have this headstrong, do it my way or else thing going on, but Ravenstreak talks me through some things and guides me through it other (sometimes easier) ways. Take my relationship with Fleetfoot for example. When I want to talk, I just go on and say it, but Fleetfoot doesn't work like that. He shuts down, and shuts me out. Ravenstreak saved our friendship, and I am thankful. Now deceased.
Fleetfoot || He has been my best friend since kithood. We get along because we both like to laugh, we're so similar. Even though he still shuts down sometimes, I think he's the best mate in the world and a wonderful father.Now deceased.
Leafpaw || I can't help but be partial to my little son. He reminds me so much of my mother, in stature and nature. Though he's much more hyper. But how, WHY did I have to crush his dream of being a Warrior like Fleetfoot and go behind his back to make him a medicine cat? I hate that I did it. But if it keeps my son safe...
Wrenpaw || My beautiful, cheerful daughter, the spit image of her dad. I love her, but I can't be around her since her father died. She's so much like him.
Ashstar || My young apprentice, all grown up and leading our clan. I am so increadably proud of him. He will always be my first son.
Starlingflight || My second apprentice! She's grown now too. She's the smartest cat in the Clan aside from me
Bumblecloud || Our deputy, he's a strong cat. I don't know of any other cat strong enough to leave the Clans to search for his family like he did.
New kits || I love them all, but they remind me of Fleetfoot. It's hard to be a mother to them.





Lineart of the cats: Angry cat *aThousandPaws [link]
Depressed cat *xXBloodyWarriorXx [link]
Headshot ~FlyingSpaceDorito [link]
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Comments: 57

kisini In reply to ??? [2013-01-13 15:14:59 +0000 UTC]

D'aww he's so cute >.< I see you got Dewcloud to adopt him, that's good cause I was going to have to turn you down due to Shallow's depression. If she wasn't at that point in her life then I surely would have though!!

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st0lensanity In reply to kisini [2013-01-13 15:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Ohh lol thanks ^^ B-but why is Shallow depressed?

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kisini In reply to st0lensanity [2013-01-13 15:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Well while pregnant with her recent litter, she and her mate Fleetfoot were out on a walk and were surprised by a snake, and Fleet was bitten. She dragged him back to camp, and watched him die in her arms, then went into labor a little early because of the trauma. She's addicted to poppy seeds, now, easily supplied through her son from her first litter who's the medicine cat apprentice.
Such drama She's my only dramatic charrie, so I try and go over the top.

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st0lensanity In reply to kisini [2013-01-13 15:28:29 +0000 UTC]

DAMN

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kisini In reply to st0lensanity [2013-01-13 15:36:13 +0000 UTC]

IKR?

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st0lensanity In reply to kisini [2013-01-13 15:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Well that stinks

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kisini In reply to st0lensanity [2013-01-13 15:47:59 +0000 UTC]

And yet, so much fun, in a twisted way xD

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st0lensanity In reply to kisini [2013-01-13 15:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Ikr

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Artemiie [2012-12-19 22:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Want to roleplay her with Duskkit? 8D

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kisini In reply to Artemiie [2012-12-19 22:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes I do! Note me.

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Artemiie In reply to kisini [2012-12-19 22:55:39 +0000 UTC]

sent! c:

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LionKingIsMyLife [2012-12-14 19:53:47 +0000 UTC]

YOU FORGOT XAVIER AND CLOUD YOU SHE-DEVIL! HOW COULD YA!

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kisini In reply to LionKingIsMyLife [2012-12-14 20:22:45 +0000 UTC]

OH NO!
I shall fix

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-12-16 19:26:15 +0000 UTC]

STILL HAVEN'T DONE EM! TROLLOLOLOL~

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-12-14 20:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Also, I got thinking when Shallow's ref got updated 'n stuff. "Hey, since Shallowpool's all depressed and can't really care for the new litter, what would happen if Cloud tried to foster-mother them?" Mainly taking care of them while she's depressed, or until she can take care of them and has a new mate and not so depressed anymore. XD, And I also thought that Leafpaw would help her time to time, and then he'd say something like, "Hey, we're like the daddy and mommy to my new little siblings!" And then Cloud would be all like, "*frothing at the mouth with mega blush*"

Although Cloud'd be pretty depressed over Xavier's death, too.

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kisini In reply to LionKingIsMyLife [2012-12-14 21:07:31 +0000 UTC]

D'aww that'd be cute. But yeah, Cloudy'll be depressed over her daddy dying too. Leafie hides the pain under work, which is why he's helping raise the new little ones, and trying to help his mom (while actually feeding her addiction.)

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-12-14 21:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. If I wasn't killing Xavier off, then I'd make Cloud they're (foster)mother. I'm sure she'd like acting mom-ish, too.

Oh, and I submitted Cloud's Fourth Kit Life to WVS, So no need to worry about Cloudy being dead!

I'm gonna note the group on her being an Apprentice, now.

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kisini In reply to LionKingIsMyLife [2012-12-14 21:35:39 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-12-15 01:17:41 +0000 UTC]

XD, I've been busy. And, I whipped this up relatively quick. Like maybe 15 minutes to 30 minutes.

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-12-14 20:25:14 +0000 UTC]

|D

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Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 21:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Bumble is Bumblecloud not claw lol xD

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kisini In reply to Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 22:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I'll fix. I called him Bumblefire one day xD I just can't get his name right.

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Sparrow-puff In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 22:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe xD
Bumblefire was my ginger cat in heather that used to be Nettle's girl lol xD

He has many names xD

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kisini In reply to Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 22:27:26 +0000 UTC]

I knew there was a Bumblefire! Ah-ha

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Sparrow-puff In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 22:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe xD Yes, when I left Da she died ;;
But I had to come back C:

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kisini In reply to Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 22:40:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you did! c:

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Sparrow-puff In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 22:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

Did you prefer any of the names I couldn't decide on for the fourth kit? I'm still stuck on that xD

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kisini In reply to Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 23:22:16 +0000 UTC]

I like Riverwing, it's so unique and adorable

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Sparrow-puff In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 23:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD That is the one I decided on, I just posted it lol xD

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kisini In reply to Sparrow-puff [2012-12-06 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh neat XD

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xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-05 16:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Actually- about Fleetfoot- could we rp them and maybe ehr get preggo one more time? (So I can has a kit in Iceclan :3 )

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kisini In reply to xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-05 16:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes! Yay

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xHalfaLife101x In reply to kisini [2012-12-05 23:35:07 +0000 UTC]

nice, note the group for one more shekit... and then we can rp if you like.

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kisini In reply to xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-06 01:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Do we want to try for a normal sized litter and adopt out the extra kits, or just have one for you? Either way is good with me, I can design the extra kits if you want me to. I assume you have a little she-kit in mind already

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xHalfaLife101x In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 01:39:06 +0000 UTC]

yes I do, and either works....

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kisini In reply to xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-06 11:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Yay, I'll ask Sly to roll the dice and I'll make the extra kits.
Do you want me to start the RP?

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xHalfaLife101x In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 15:48:56 +0000 UTC]

sure1

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kisini In reply to xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-06 16:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Note sent And I noted the group too.
I'm so excited for another litter! Lol now me and Betta need to get on getting Turtledove and Antlerclaw a litter

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xHalfaLife101x In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 16:27:54 +0000 UTC]

:3 yes, that has been a long time coming..... I was thinking perhaps he dies DURING her birth, for some reason... Becuase that way she can move on after some time... (since I have no use for him anymore anyway) Like maybe a snake gets in and he gets bitten instead of her?

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kisini In reply to xHalfaLife101x [2012-12-06 17:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh god how traumatizing!! Yes, that gives awesome story potential. Or, like, their taking a walk cause she's not due yet, the snake gets him, she drags him back to camp and is traumatized and has the kits because of that. God that's so upsetting but we do love the drama with these two Yes, I like it!

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xHalfaLife101x In reply to kisini [2012-12-06 17:59:51 +0000 UTC]

i like the second one yes!

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bluestar32 [2012-11-19 19:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Shallowpool is the same age as my Berrysplash. x3

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kisini In reply to bluestar32 [2012-11-19 23:38:48 +0000 UTC]

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bluestar32 In reply to kisini [2012-11-20 01:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Read my journal Kisini. D: It's important.

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LionKingIsMyLife [2012-09-29 00:51:21 +0000 UTC]

XD, You gonna need to update her ref to include her kittensAnd Cloud too !

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kisini In reply to LionKingIsMyLife [2012-09-29 00:52:35 +0000 UTC]

I do need to do that T_T

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LionKingIsMyLife In reply to kisini [2012-09-29 00:54:26 +0000 UTC]

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lama555 [2012-08-10 01:40:46 +0000 UTC]

purdy X3

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kisini In reply to lama555 [2012-08-10 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :3

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lama555 In reply to kisini [2012-08-10 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]

your welcome X3

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