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kismitj — the lonely acre
Published: 2005-03-06 08:41:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description i
toss
and
   i
turn

three o' clock came and went,
the sun rises now

the blankets have writhed and wracked my limbs
the pillow torn at my hair

without you
this bed
is
a painfully
lonely
acre
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Comments: 2

BjCnMxS [2005-05-04 11:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is actually very good... Metaphorically, without a set design but still has construct... The way youve set it out! But still is extremely effective, i like this alot welldone!

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kismitj In reply to BjCnMxS [2005-08-17 20:44:42 +0000 UTC]

thankie muchly for the reply! i don't write often...only when in an extremely emotional state.......

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