HOME | DD

kitsuneko — WIP 2 - At the Assembly by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-06-25 17:17:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 985; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
Redirect to original
Description There is still something wrong with the pose, but I can't figure it out. Something about her shoulders... ~rubendevela pointed something about her shoulders being too broad before and ~jacksprat said her neck's too thick. Tried to correct those but it still feels off to me. O_O

This Lizzy's slimmer now, as opposed to the first WIP since she was described as having a light figure (which wasn't the fashionable one then, really. Oh, to be born in that age! No one expects girls to be all waif-like thin! Yay for women with curves!)

Oh and yes, hairstyle-wise I know I should have Lizzy Bennet's hair pinned up in a bun, but i felt that her more informal hairstyle here fits her better.
Related content
Comments: 11

Mellime [2009-01-04 02:27:08 +0000 UTC]

she reminds me of the girl who played Georgiana...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

deboahan [2007-07-02 06:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Looks ok to me. Maybe adding a lil shading under the dress in the dress-skin border to make the skin "go behind" the dress? Haha nah, don't mind me. XD

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kitsuneko In reply to deboahan [2007-07-03 10:52:31 +0000 UTC]

hee, yeah. the dress is barely done. i'll go work on that after i fix the anatomy

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

deboahan In reply to kitsuneko [2007-07-03 13:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Goodluck on that! Not that you need it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

jacksprat [2007-06-29 14:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Her lips could perhaps be more pronounced, and has been mentioned earlier, suggesting 3-dimensionality to the neck with some musculature would make it look less flat. But you fixed the shoulders so that's good.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

jactinglim [2007-06-27 11:08:12 +0000 UTC]

eh? *looks and looks at the painting* ummm add more shading unde rher chin I guess?

Honestly I don't see much of what's wrong here heehee!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

littlesailboat [2007-06-26 08:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh man look at that! Her hair has been rendered so prettily! And her face as well. As for critique, perhaps her neck and chest are receding too much? Might need a bit more light. But I really like how it looks at the mo

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kitsuneko In reply to littlesailboat [2007-06-26 09:32:54 +0000 UTC]

i have a fixation with drawing hair. XD anyway, thanks for the crit!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Gealachamhran [2007-06-26 07:16:58 +0000 UTC]

neck to right shoulder might be a bit too curved.

and i think that once you've shaped out the neck muscles it will be fine.

adding an extra patch of dress on the left side of the picture might balance things out.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kitsuneko In reply to Gealachamhran [2007-06-26 08:31:26 +0000 UTC]

ooh~ okay. thanks for the tip~!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Tarantoela [2007-06-25 23:22:08 +0000 UTC]

there is something wrogn whit her right shoulder...
her hair is beautiful

👍: 0 ⏩: 0