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Published: 2018-11-27 18:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 22225; Favourites: 2441; Downloads: 0
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crystal does a floop flop.video i made of this (oh fuck shit bitch!!) www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvBuRTβ¦
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head is not consistent, animation is still a bit stiff, and the run cycle is a bit off
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really -_-Β
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yes, really
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my dude u have no room to talk mr.wiggle lines
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You don't have much room to talk, either.
I think the critic was alright, maybe came off as a little rude.
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a movie critic doesn't have to make movies in order to review them. just as long as a person knows what they're talking about and aren't coming off as a dick, it's a valid critique.
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valid. but all of your art is kind of shit
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yikes, acknowledging my point yet ignoring it still
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dang like you should be talking
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yr art looks like garbage too bud pwease no steppy
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oh honey, maybe if I steppy on ur art it'll make it look better <33
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oh honey, maybe if you didnt have autism yr art wouldnt be same face furries with no skulls
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oh honey, maybe if your art didn't look like a baby chewed it up and spit it back out it would actually look decent <333
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lmaooooo thats so basic. give me some real hard hitting critique if u can muster the brain power for it
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Anyone can make a critique no matter what skill level their art is at. I don't care if a person has godly levels of talent or can't even draw a straight line, their critique is still valid as long as it is constructive. Insulting someone's art because they made a critique of someone else is honestly a pretty low blow. It literally has nothing to do with the critique at all. This person just wants to help kd improve, even if they maybe could have done it in a more constructive way.
You all need to stop insulting each other over stupid stuff. Everyone's art on this website can use some work. I don't care how polished it looks or how god-like you think it is, there's always ways to improve the art we all make. And everyone's criticisms are valid as long as they are constructive. End of story.
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honey, saying I have autism is the most original thing in the world from slugs like you
So maybe you should try better insults??
Also sweety, I'll have more brain power than you'll have in a million years
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also honey sweetiesweetybabey honey honey honeyΒ
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you no can use that as excuse
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soo i cant give criticism because my art is worse than the critiquee?
>mfw
also i actually do use a mouse, im shit tbh
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of course you can give criticism - as long as you keep it constructive.Β
instead of telling her only what is wrong, try to tell her HOW she can improve.Β
otherwise, your criticism just comes off as hostile.Β
i know you use a mouse - but that is no excuse. my friend used a mouse to make this piece "Hey! Selfie time! " that has no such wobbly lines.Β
So just keep at it and you can learn how to create smooth lines even with a mouse! c:
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I really love the secondary action on the tail and the hair/ fur for this animation, one thing I would say is that the head and body seems to grow and shrink constantly and that could easily be fixed with the use of key frames and construction just to keep things looking consistent. Other than that I think it's a really good start and I'd love to see more animation from you.
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Woop congrats on making the front page!Β
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Good morning friend, cute, like the pose.
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dude!! this is literally smooth and the shadings are just 
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'The Floop Flop'
That is one of the best things I've heard today!
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Kittydog I love it! Itβs very bouncy, and your art style never ceases to be as cute as possible.
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Looks coolio!
some criticism i havent seen in the comments yet: while everything bounces, the hanging ears are very still. It might look super cute if they would flap around
Also the head shape is a bit inconsistent, but i think you already wrote your awareness of that.
another thing that could make the animation better might be the feet squishing when they touch the ground? Idk your style looks so soft and squishy, i just thought this could give it a distinct something c:
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ive notice somethings that only u should notice
i have ascendedΒ Β
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Omg itβs so smooth!!!! LOOK AT HER GO! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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hey! your lin-eartΒ and coloring are awesome here and I really think you are a talented animator! the frames are clean and you have a clear movement going on! that being said, if you are looking to continue down an animation path, i think your work could benefit from studying the movement of animals (four-leggedΒ mammals to be precise). the actual movement in the piece is off in timing and how each leg falls, i really think just looking at natural movement could improve this beyond just pretty art.
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I think this is a very valid criticism. A lot of people think criticism= being mean. It's not the same. You NEED criticism to improve the quality of your art.
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hec off aniamtion is hard, its fine as is ffsΒ
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Why you gotta be so mean, though? I understand that people can be unkind when theyβre mad, or in a bad mood, but I donβt think you should be so edgy on here.
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nah famm i know how hard aniaiation is cuz i aniamte and i would blals mad if someone said something was off withan animation i took forever to do lol
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If you know animation is hard, wouldnβt you want critique that will make it less hard? There is a difference between someone putting down someoneβs work and trying to help them improve it, you know.
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I agree with @/starli-i!! I animate as well and while it IS difficult, advice helps us a ton and shows us what we need to improve on!!! Never discourage people from trying to help us!!!! It helps us so much in the long run ;;
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Oh! You read that too? Thats awesome what page you on?
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