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The hope of finding water made the two cats hurry on their run across the field. As Lattè said, they had to pass an abandoned twoleg nest. Brambleclaw ordered his companion to quicken up when he caught the disgusting scent of rat coming from the place. She'd been in enough trouble as it was, if she weren't to get bitten by a stinking rat as well.
"That must be the gorge, see how the field ends up there!" Squirrelflight said, and she sped ahead of Brambleclaw.
As their speed slowed, Brambleclaw caught another smell in the area. Cat, as they'd been warned of. He stopped, trying to locate where the scent came from, and sniffed near a bush.
"A border marker?" he spoke to himself. Then Squirrelflight's voice broke into his thoughts.
"Brambleclaw, over here," she whispered, and her tail flicked urgently. Her voice bore traces of shock, and he began wondering what she'd spotted, as he padded towards her.
Squirrelflight's pupils were wide, and she was obviously stunned out of her mind. And when he followed her gaze, he understood why.
First things first, the gorge was enormous, easily three times the size of their camp at home. But that wasn't the biggest surprise of all.
Below, between rocks and caves and clumps of forest, cats were buzzing to and fro. It was like a clan...
"By StarClan," Squirrelflight mumbled.
Brambleclaw nodded, and then his ears caught the noise of a twig cracking.
"Intruders!"
(c) Erin Hunter
art and fanfic: ME
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Comments: 55
KittyStorage In reply to ??? [2013-06-04 09:45:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm using mainly Paint Tool SAI
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tretais [2012-03-18 01:38:38 +0000 UTC]
BLOOOOODDDCLLAAANNNNNNN. D8 lmao, sorry I've wanted to shout that ever since you mentioned going back to their home forest xD Now just seems like the perfect opportunity.
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KittyStorage In reply to tretais [2012-03-18 10:37:57 +0000 UTC]
haha, variation is the thing
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tretais In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-18 18:58:06 +0000 UTC]
/just read the latest one/ Ohhh I was wrong xD Though everyone else was guessing SkyClan so I wanted to be different xD
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KittyStorage In reply to tretais [2012-03-18 19:14:30 +0000 UTC]
It's okay trying for something other than the others XP I usually do that myself XD
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tretais In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-18 19:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Definitely xD Like taking the road less traveled :3
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Maekii [2012-03-18 01:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Draw the next part of the story already!
I don't want to wait!!!
I want to see their reaction!!!
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KittyStorage In reply to Maekii [2012-03-18 10:38:24 +0000 UTC]
aw, I'll be done in an hour
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Maekii In reply to Maekii [2012-03-18 01:03:22 +0000 UTC]
And then they find out about Firestar and Sandstorm.......
*eye twitches*
they go For TC!!!
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KittyStorage In reply to Meepalso [2012-03-16 22:10:31 +0000 UTC]
damn.... I was having some milk with my food when I wrote it, curse that -.- *on my way to fix it*
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tornado3595 [2012-03-16 20:36:12 +0000 UTC]
SKYCLAN!! OMSC! -bounces up and down with excitement-
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tornado3595 In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-17 02:25:43 +0000 UTC]
lol, if you wanna see how I've been doing with your story, her it is: [link]
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KittyStorage In reply to tornado3595 [2012-03-17 11:04:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's cool *w* thanks ^^
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cats11cats [2012-03-16 19:22:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.... did they find Skyclan? Hmm wants to know!!!
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KittyStorage In reply to cats11cats [2012-03-16 22:10:59 +0000 UTC]
hmmmmmmmmm....did they? *wicked grin*
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cats11cats In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-17 18:20:02 +0000 UTC]
I so want to find out!
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DarlekFan In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-16 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Sharpclaw: Oh great more kittypets joining us Β¬_Β¬
Leafstar:Shut up Sharpy and give me a kiss!
Sharpclaw: O.O
Sharp x Leaf supporter!
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KittyStorage In reply to DarlekFan [2012-03-16 22:24:23 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha XD Sharpclaw's reaction alright...
Huh, you no like Billystorm?
Got nothing against SharpxLeaf, but I do prefer SharpxCherry <3
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DarlekFan In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-16 22:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Billystorms ok... but he's not my fave when he was first seen in the books
But! I do also support Sharp x Cherry <3
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KittyStorage In reply to DarlekFan [2012-03-17 10:59:00 +0000 UTC]
I simply can't handle that name of his...so sorry, but I can't XD
Oh, that's nice ^^ Cherrytail's my fav SkyClan cat, first place together with Sparrowpelt <3
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DarlekFan In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-17 11:07:54 +0000 UTC]
It's ok XD
Ikr! She is awesome! I want to see her new kits
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KittyStorage In reply to DarlekFan [2012-03-17 22:11:15 +0000 UTC]
YES! I want too.... QwQ erins, make her preggie...
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DarlekFan In reply to KittyStorage [2012-03-17 22:15:25 +0000 UTC]
XD LOL! If the Erins don't then im gonna send Tigerstar on them!
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KittyStorage In reply to DarlekFan [2012-03-17 22:30:42 +0000 UTC]
yush...and then he'll use brute force Tigerstar-style XP
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jetpak12 [2012-03-16 16:15:36 +0000 UTC]
THAT LOOKS SO COOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and good job on the expereshons on the fase and bodys
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KittyStorage In reply to jetpak12 [2012-03-16 22:11:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^
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KiddosNightmare [2012-03-16 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]
omg.... where the hell are they o.O
and i dare you you mysterious cats ! Do not harm our little couple xD they are just too cute together
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KittyStorage In reply to KiddosNightmare [2012-03-16 22:12:04 +0000 UTC]
I will eat them if they hurt those little darlings :3 Afterall, I have the power over the words here
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