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kkunkitty — His Outstretched Tentative Hand
Published: 2012-10-29 01:48:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 9262; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 3
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Description He hesitated for a second with an outstretched tentative hand. She lay motionless on the ground as if sleeping soundly. Her auburn hair lay around her and the air became colder. He didn’t mean to startle her but now she lay before him, unaware how close he was to her. Her mother had always told her to be careful and be alert while by herself. There was no way her mother would approve if she stumbled upon this scene.

But he couldn’t stop his outstretched tentative hand. It was inches away from her head. He knew her mother would tear apart his soul if he dared to touch her. However, her mother wasn’t there. Her hair looked soft and her features were calm. She was irresistible to anyone. He was sure many of the others yearned for her. But, him? He was unwanted. He was God of the Underworld. No one would look in his direction, especially not her. But he still desired her. Many nights he thought of her running through the forest that separated their worlds. She smiled as bright as the sun and sparkled like the stars at night. She was perfection.

In some way, he thought she was perfect for him. She would complete him. He was a cold breeze and she was a blooming flower. She might have just the right traits to neutralize his. But of course that would never happen because no one liked the God of the Underworld.

His outstretched tentative hand made contact with her head. The waves of her hair moved underneath his hand. He took off his glove and touched her head again. It was like velvet under his fingers. The smooth tresses of her wavy hair were soft and silky. He looked to her face. Still in its calm state, he moved his outstretched tentative hand to touch her cheek.

But he stopped himself. He was not allowed this much freedom because he was the God of the Underworld. Why would he be given the privilege of finally being near the one he desired? There must’ve been a mistake in fate. Fate was never this nice to him. But there must’ve been some reason for this to be happening.

The back of his outstretched tentative hand touched her cheek. She was warm and her warmth coursed through his body. It sent tingles up his arm and something in his gut twisted. All he knew was the coldness of the Underworld. This warmth was new to him. He was scared but liked it at the same time. The feeling seemed to wash away all the loneliness he felt. He was happy in this moment and wished the moment wouldn’t pass. But eventually she would wake up and run away from him.

The feeling in his gut was gone. He didn’t know what it was but it left him uneasy. He didn’t have much time until someone came looking for her, most likely her mother. But even then, he couldn’t make a move. This moment was so perfect and he didn’t want it to end. He leaned down and kissed her forehead.

“I hope to see you again,” he whispered with his outstretched tentative hand letting go of her hair.
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Comments: 53

dragonkiss114 [2015-07-20 01:02:59 +0000 UTC]

This is so romantic and poetic!   It's absolutely beautiful!   

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kkunkitty In reply to dragonkiss114 [2015-07-30 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it.

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dragonkiss114 In reply to kkunkitty [2015-07-30 19:05:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  

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xblubirdx [2014-12-07 18:03:25 +0000 UTC]

This is great

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TiffanyIsNinja [2014-07-21 19:52:57 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful!!!  

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kkunkitty In reply to TiffanyIsNinja [2014-07-22 06:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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BloodoftheTitan1 [2014-04-16 12:50:41 +0000 UTC]

BRAVO! MAGNIFICENT!    

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kkunkitty In reply to BloodoftheTitan1 [2014-04-16 16:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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BloodoftheTitan1 In reply to kkunkitty [2014-04-18 01:44:18 +0000 UTC]

No, it is I who must thank you.   

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Natsumi-Nyan [2014-04-08 01:57:17 +0000 UTC]

 Wonderfully done!  

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kkunkitty In reply to Natsumi-Nyan [2014-04-08 02:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I appreciate it.

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Natsumi-Nyan In reply to kkunkitty [2014-04-08 03:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  

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Corvus--Vulpes [2014-01-29 00:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful take! This was the exact way I saw it!

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kkunkitty In reply to Corvus--Vulpes [2014-01-29 03:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That's cool that you imagined the same thing. He just looks hesitant and unsure. That's what I was seeing with this picture.

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trixitrail [2014-01-25 04:12:04 +0000 UTC]

where is the sequallll it is too good to end with onlly this one !!!! it needs a book !!! or a movie.... ahhhhh 

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kkunkitty In reply to trixitrail [2014-01-25 05:12:01 +0000 UTC]

There's more but I've been slowly working on it. 

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trixitrail In reply to kkunkitty [2014-01-26 20:46:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe good :3

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AugustAngell [2013-11-07 16:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Awh! The feels. <3 ToT

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kkunkitty In reply to AugustAngell [2013-11-07 16:48:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it.

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lunarsoul14 [2013-10-15 21:04:58 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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kkunkitty In reply to lunarsoul14 [2013-10-16 01:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's kind of cheesy.

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lunarsoul14 In reply to kkunkitty [2013-10-16 22:12:05 +0000 UTC]

its cute

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TsarevnaMaria [2013-09-08 20:03:24 +0000 UTC]

omg this took my breath away.... such imagery!

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kkunkitty In reply to TsarevnaMaria [2013-09-08 20:17:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TsarevnaMaria In reply to kkunkitty [2013-09-09 00:02:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! You're an awesome writer

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Nominy13 [2013-09-05 16:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Vary nice..

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kkunkitty In reply to Nominy13 [2013-09-05 18:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Nominy13 In reply to kkunkitty [2013-09-06 13:03:49 +0000 UTC]

-nod-

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kimanah [2013-08-11 08:42:52 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats awesome! <3

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kkunkitty In reply to kimanah [2013-08-11 16:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I appreciate it.

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t1774ny [2013-06-15 06:36:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you wrote it from Hades' perspective! I would love to read more of this story!

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Madame-Enfer [2013-05-20 02:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Naw that was all sadlike

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kkunkitty In reply to Madame-Enfer [2013-05-20 03:28:33 +0000 UTC]

You think it's sad?

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Madame-Enfer In reply to kkunkitty [2013-05-23 08:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Not miserable-sad. But, I dunno, maybe I'm reading my own history of loneliness into it

Anyway, I thought it was very emotive and well-done!

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kkunkitty In reply to Madame-Enfer [2013-05-24 00:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I was a little worried that it made you upset.

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Madame-Enfer In reply to kkunkitty [2013-05-25 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Nono! I loved it.

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amy2544 [2013-05-19 08:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I read all of them so far(I hope it's not finished yet though I read till the 6th one) and I really think you should make this a book- and ask permission to use Hades and Persephone 2 for the cover if you can.

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MoonstreamFeline [2013-03-09 17:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I liked the picture too and looked at this story taht was linked on it I like this story/poem. chilling and suspenseful.
Good job!

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kkunkitty In reply to MoonstreamFeline [2013-03-09 18:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.

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MoonstreamFeline In reply to kkunkitty [2013-03-10 12:36:39 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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viktoriagr [2013-02-16 19:22:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the story

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kkunkitty In reply to viktoriagr [2013-02-16 20:22:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.

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BaneEden [2013-01-21 16:52:58 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, I love it I would also love to read a part 2

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kkunkitty In reply to BaneEden [2013-01-21 18:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks so much. I really appreciate it. After getting two people who want me to write more, I'm tempted to come up with a sequel.

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BaneEden In reply to kkunkitty [2013-01-21 19:04:33 +0000 UTC]

I will be looking forward in reading the sequel and no problem^^

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DeadStickGuy [2012-12-24 10:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work! I'm a fan for life. Who is the lady model by the way?

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kkunkitty In reply to DeadStickGuy [2012-12-24 18:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I really appreciate it. The lady is Persephone. I don't know if you read the description but it was based off the picture by of Hades and Persephone.

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DeadStickGuy In reply to kkunkitty [2012-12-24 18:34:22 +0000 UTC]

wow cooll will u do the contest?

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amy2544 In reply to DeadStickGuy [2013-05-19 08:43:30 +0000 UTC]

XD you didn't read the description

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niipon [2012-11-05 05:09:29 +0000 UTC]

yes! I love this!!! you should definitely continue it! i would love to see more of your stories and stuff on here!!!

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