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KM-Rasco — The Raging Red Dragon by-nc-nd
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Published: 2017-06-05 23:58:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Fear the raging red demon, fear the heat of it's Fire
Know it's smell and beware the sound of it's heavy Bay,
There is no respite from it's rage, no mercy from it's ire.

No animal nor man can stand the might of it's pyre
The following roar a sign of the coming doomsday,
Fear the roaring dragon, fear the heat of it's Fire.

All creatures, small and big silently call ceasefire
When the demon issues a call to hunt on this day,
There is no respite from it's rage, no mercy from it's ire.

The winds carry the soot and ash ever higher
These are  only remains from his first foray
Fear the raging red demon, fear the heat of it's Fire.

The red demon alone can destroy an entire shire
Yet it's destructive display lures more devils to the fray,
There is no respite from it's rage, no mercy from it's ire.

Only by the culling of land or the devil doth expire
doeth the display end, all pray that it remains that way
                Fear the raging red demon, fear the heat of it's Fire,
                There is no respite from it's rage, no mercy from it's ire

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Comments: 24

TheRedHeartRebel [2017-06-06 21:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Very well constructed!
I loved it!

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KM-Rasco In reply to TheRedHeartRebel [2017-06-06 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, it;s kind of you to say.

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TheRedHeartRebel In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-06 22:47:54 +0000 UTC]

No worries my friend😉

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KM-Rasco In reply to TheRedHeartRebel [2017-06-06 22:56:28 +0000 UTC]

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kdpxva [2017-06-06 14:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Very nice flow and very well written. For me, you have successfully created a mighty atmosphere and sense of powerlessness in the face of something greater. Awesome poetry!

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KM-Rasco In reply to kdpxva [2017-06-06 17:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad that I managed to create the atmosphere I was going for.

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kdpxva In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-07 00:09:59 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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kaiser-34 [2017-06-06 09:34:29 +0000 UTC]

you have talent.

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-06 10:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Why it's kind of you to say

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-06 10:26:36 +0000 UTC]

how long have you been doing this.

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-06 11:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Writing for as long as I can remember, however creating poetry for nine years which I started doing to help with creative block that holded my prose work.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-07 01:58:32 +0000 UTC]

i used to write country songs it was a lot of fun especially singing the onstage.

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-07 11:05:46 +0000 UTC]

I can see how that would be fun.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-08 01:14:31 +0000 UTC]

the best of fun. what about you do you sing.

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-08 01:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I do not, used to play guitar but that's about it.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-08 01:20:53 +0000 UTC]

the banjo for me.

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-08 10:49:38 +0000 UTC]

it must have been fun to play and sing your works.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-09 00:04:07 +0000 UTC]

yes it was, but now i just do writing and drawing. What a bout you. 

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-09 10:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Writing.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-10 00:46:46 +0000 UTC]

do you have a a specific type, or what ever inspires you  

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-10 12:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Poetry and Stories but their contents are largely based upon what inspires me at any particular, with poetry I traditionally use fixed forms to create my pieces.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-11 04:24:36 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what fixed forms are, but it sounds nice. You have a passion for this and i respected that, i hope we can be friends.  

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KM-Rasco In reply to kaiser-34 [2017-06-11 11:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Fixed forms are Haiku's, sonnet's, Villanelle's, Sestina's and are structures based around rhymes, syllables and iambic pantementers to create a piece that's powerful.
Thank you.
May you have a pleasant day.

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kaiser-34 In reply to KM-Rasco [2017-06-12 06:09:18 +0000 UTC]

ok cool. and you to

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