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Published: 2007-04-19 19:13:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 337; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description Tonight I can Write the most beautiful lines.

I can write for example,
"The sun and celestial bodies dim in subjection to her.
Gods dream of her radiance."

Tonight I can write the most beautiful lines.
I love her, and sometimes she accepts my love.

Hair as dark as the moonless night
It dances in the night's breeze.
Her's is a beauty, a gift, I could never deny.

Lips soft as the pettles of a rose speak of bliss past.
To kiss just once would bring heaven to hell.

Tonight I can write the most beautiful lines.
I love her, and sometimes she accepts my love.

Every movement she makes is a ballet,
With her grace only surpassed by her stillness.

The seas settle to give her rest.
To see her sleep is to wittness the glory of an angel.

Through nights like this I held her in my arms.
As if a peace of me she fits in my embrace.
We warm the dark cold night, I never wanted to let go.

Tonight I can write the most beautiful lines.
I love her, and sometimes she accepts my love.

With the eyes of a child she pears into my soul.
My hearts keys she has found and swung open its doors.
Her smile warms my cold heart.

She is my inspiration, and my tourment.

To know that I do not have her.
To feel that I have lost her.
To think that I never had her.
To know that she belongs with me.

Tonight I can write the most beautiful lines.
I love her, and sometimes she accepts my love.

Only in her presence do I ever truly exist.

As a frantic child searches for its mother.
My heart searches for the key to hers's.

The night is vast, empty, and alone.
To think of never having her, never knowing her is a worse fate.
Eternity is so short, and forgetting is so long.

Tonight I can write the most beautiful lines.
I noΒ Β longer love her, and sometimes she loves me.
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Comments: 6

peterdawes [2009-05-06 01:52:58 +0000 UTC]

this is my favorite neruda poem. i love the turnabout. well played!

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Knightmare81 In reply to peterdawes [2009-05-06 13:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav and add to watch. Yeah its my favortite poem too

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Knightmare81 [2007-05-23 22:43:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks. now if i could only draw the visuals i think of

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Scarlett1313 [2007-05-23 22:32:53 +0000 UTC]

This writing leaves me an amazing visual! A definite !

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Void-W4lker [2007-05-13 20:36:14 +0000 UTC]

you are very good at this. I love how poetic and delicate it is and how you describe things in a way we can feel on our hair and fingertips. Just beautiful!

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Knightmare81 In reply to Void-W4lker [2007-05-14 23:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I always like hearing from people that i don't know. Seeing what they think of things. I just posted another poem you should check out

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