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Published: 2016-10-30 23:45:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 823; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Neon Genesis EvangelionGodzilla like
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Another awesome work.
For this piece, I would've though more on the focal point and composition. You have the mech which is the main subject, the eye is drawn to it's face and then automatically follows the horn to the midground and then from there, my eyes are really overwhelmed by the amount detail going on that I don't really know where my eyes should follow next. Even then, anything that's on the left is more detailed than the mech itself so sometimes, I look at that first before I look at the mech itself. And the biggest drawback in my opinion is the values. Everything on the piece is the same value, the mech is the same value which really makes the piece look flat. Remember that the further the objects are in the background, the lighter and less constrasty they should be.
Again, really nice job, just remember what your main focus it.
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Again, I thank you for your time
I'm amazed that you have in-depth knowledge about this kind of things. You'll be a great artist if you see things that others don't, Glad I bump into you.
I'll keep your advises in mind the next time I'm doing something like this. Cheers!
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No problem, I guess this critiquing this was a sorta challenge for myself to see how well I know my fundamentals and what I've learnt in the past few months
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yeah, I'll do another one for that
Thanks Faiilcon!
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