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Published: 2003-12-08 01:43:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 48; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 23
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This is more of an emotion song rather then an insightful one. Basisicaly it is about how when we start off we are fine. Not alot of color or life, but we " get by". Someone comes along and we feel more colorful and full of life. Then they leave and we feel like we are and have nothing. Some people choose to stay and wait in this empty. I say the only way to survive is to get out by yourself. Then when you get out you discover that you have more color and life then you did before this person came into your lifeHope that makes sense, otherwise you can always raise an army of zombies to destroy me.
So don't wait people, crawl out if you have to, it's to only way to survive.
PS that was a little strong,
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Comments: 19
frozenferret [2004-08-31 16:27:36 +0000 UTC]
The "bridge" section was probably my least favorite part, the rest was thoroughly enjoyable. Lots of good imagery and a fitting title.
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Wyn-- [2004-02-02 15:28:26 +0000 UTC]
the only thing i see wrong with it is the fact that you listed verses and chorus, i just think listing what's what takes away but i like your song, cant hear the music but it reads good
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Koal In reply to Wyn-- [2004-02-02 23:07:28 +0000 UTC]
That is a good point, I really don't need it in there, I mean, it's really only there for me.
Thanks
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1stf00t3r [2003-12-22 05:39:34 +0000 UTC]
now this is a fine piece of lyric ... i love the flow of it - brilliant
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Koal In reply to pupasoul [2003-12-15 00:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm working on the song part of it and it needs a lot of editing, I am going to try and cut it down and make it more concice (I hate spelling english).
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toxicnacho [2003-12-09 07:46:16 +0000 UTC]
You should like....download yourself to deviantart and live a new life without the university and the other thing...youd have a traveling circus of whatchamacallits in no time.
Sweat all you'd like!
heh.
huh.
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Koal In reply to toxicnacho [2003-12-10 00:36:26 +0000 UTC]
That is an interesting thing to say for a "comment". Thanks? I believe you aren't threating my life....?
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dragon-love [2003-12-09 02:26:03 +0000 UTC]
That's super cool On to the faves. I think i would be soo cool if i could hear the music with it. *pist* record a single! teehee
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Koal In reply to dragon-love [2003-12-10 00:37:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I wish. I'm actually going to be doing some recording in the summer, but it is still very rough.
Take care.
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dragon-love In reply to Koal [2003-12-22 15:18:21 +0000 UTC]
That sooo cool. Will you keep me informed about your recording ness? i'd really like to hear about it. later days!
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Koal In reply to nanna [2003-12-09 00:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I think it's a little long, my song for it is over 5 minutes, I'd like to cope that down to 4, but it is still fresh.
I like the new icon, entertaining.
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euphoria066 [2003-12-08 02:15:33 +0000 UTC]
wow!!!! and I say it again, wow!!!
my zombo army will have to save their energy to destroy someone is who isn't such a freakishly talented writer. this is amazing. I AM IMPRESSED.
this is great, it's got excellent imagery and descriptions and feelings and woahhhhh...
yep! I fave!
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Koal In reply to euphoria066 [2003-12-09 00:04:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It's my second fav, I am still working on the singing part. I am trying to do new things with my voicee', and they are coming along ok.
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