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Description Creepypasta for Dummies: Creating A Slenderman Proxy OC

Bonjour, howdy, and konnichiwa to all! First of all, the idea for this Creepypasta for Dummies was given to me by the wonderful so I just wanted to give her credit where credit is due. Also, some of the advice given here may appear in a slightly different format in my other articles, but I wanted to bring together all the relevant info on proxies into one handy-dandy guide.

Now then, I think it would be fair to state that the most common type of creepypasta OC is the proxy. What is it about proxies that fascinates us so much? Personally I think the key component is Slenderman himself. Let’s face it, Slenderman is cool to the core, plain and simple. He’s mysterious, creepy-looking, he can teleport and interfere with recording devices, what’s not to like? Everyone loves Slenderman. So I think the most essential factor of a good proxy OC is what their relationship with Slenderman himself is like.

First off, let me just say that making them Slenderman’s love interest is not silly. It’s not silly, it’s downright stupid. Call me crazy but Slenderman doesn’t strike me as the lovey-dovey type. I guess it could be a good move if you’re just looking to troll people, but if you’re actually being serious…yeah, that’s a minefield you do not want to wander into.

So now that you know what not to do, let’s focus on what you should do. An important question to ask yourself is why Slenderman selected them for proxyhood. Or to be more specific, what does he have to gain from them? Are they skilled in tracking and survival? Are they a former member of a police or paramilitary unit and know their way around hand-to-hand combat? Perhaps they have some supernatural power of their own. The point I’m trying to get at is that Slenderman does not suffer fools, and he wouldn’t select any random person with no special skills or talents to be a proxy. There needs to be a reason why they were chosen.

Another question to ask is how they interact with the other proxies. These are commonly accepted to be Hoody and Masky, although a lot of people add Ticci-Toby as well because he is quite popular (my apologies that the fandom was such a dick to you, ). Remember that these characters are still human on some level and will thus behave differently than Slenderman.

The next logical step is to ask how they became a proxy. It is probably assumed that at some point they wandered into his forest (I like to call it the Slenderwoods), but what were they doing there? Once they were chosen, so to speak, how did they feel about their new calling? Do they welcome their new life or do they resent it? How do they survive, assuming they live in the Slenderwoods? These are just a few of the questions you should probably ask. I’m sure you’ll think of many more while designing and revising your character.

Appearance is another deciding factor. Most proxies wear masks or facial coverings resembling masks, which makes sense given that the canon proxies do as well. Proxies should have simple, durable, utilitarian clothing and equipment. A corset and stockings wouldn’t last very long in the forest during wintertime, to say nothing of the person wearing them. Try not to have an overly garish or multi-coloured colour scheme either, unless there’s a good reason. For instance, ’s proxy Razorback (which you can see here: 66myth.deviantart.com/art/Razo… ) has a rainbow colour scheme to her hair. This makes sense, however, because she was a punk before she joined up with with her master. Razorback may not be a proxy to Slenderman specifically, but she's a good example that a bright colour scheme can potentialy work provided it makes sense.

Remember that proxies are not friendly people, as anyone who has watched Marble Hornets knows. They are murderers and rogues, completely devoted to their master the Slenderman. I would advise you not to get too bogged down in frivolous details like eye colour, how they kill people, and sexual orientation when you are first fleshing out your OC’s ideas. Stuff like that isn’t very important to most people and can wait until later once you’ve jotted down what makes your proxy unique.

One last bit of advice that I cannot stress enough is that you shouldn’t be afraid to change your proxy over time. A first draft is always the worst one, because at this stage the idea is still only partially-formed and may even have several glaring errors. Constantly edit your characters and their pastas if you want to have a truly great OC.

I’ll sign off by including the thumbnail to my own proxy OC The Ferryman, and two from . Check them out, and while I obviously don’t want you to steal any of our ideas, feel free to take inspiration from him.
Creepypasta Profile: The Ferryman
Name: The FerrymanNicknames: Michelle MathieuRace: HumanAge: 17Rank: Proxy.Brief Description: Michelle’s traditional French name was the subject of considerable mocking in school from day one, which only foreshadowed the torment he would receive for over a decade. His unprovoked abuse cost him anything resembling a social life and the beatings were sometimes so vicious that he had to be rushed to the hospital. Far from being insecure, his victimizers were just horrible people who mocked him for his clothes, accent, traditional Catholic faith, pacifist nature, and social awkwardness.Teachers called him a tattle-tale whenever he tried doin... CREEPYPASTA OC SUMMARY: Ravon (OUTDATED)THIS IS VERY OUTDATED! DO NOT USE THIS PLEASE! Name: Ravon Whitechapel   (Birth name: Ravon Nightingale) Nicknames: Rav, The Masked One, The B*tch in Black (An insulting nickname) Gender: Female Age:   19?-20? (Appearance wise) Species: Human Occupation:  Proxy (Slenderman) Weaknesses: Human Weaknesses, too much strain on her blind eye using her Empathic powers can deplete her energy and make her exhausted and weak, Can break under emotional pressure Strengths: High pain tolerance, Can hide her emotions, Gymnast flexibility and sense of balance, pin-point accuracy, healer abilities are at a master level, Psychic immunity Pow...
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MaxTGT [2020-05-18 16:37:21 +0000 UTC]

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discord79 [2019-05-23 06:16:24 +0000 UTC]

i have a proxy i made for slender [hes not human well not anymore he got possesed by a demon on halloween night after his ex cut his breaks

The Chesire Cat  [ hes still being worked on

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GreyRoseKit [2017-08-20 08:30:50 +0000 UTC]

My OC isn't a proxy but has many proxies such as Iggy
Iggy or Iggs
Iggy is 16 and he is a computer programmer who doesn't have too many friends because he constantly practices. But months ago Iggy moved to a private school and away from his friends so Iggy was alone. All he had left was his skill until he decided to 'leave' this world when he was going to my OC gave him two choices.
1. Live in isolation forever 
2. Help me and you won't be alone 
Iggy took option number 2 and lost most of his memories but Sofia let him keep his talent. Sofia normally keeps him around to hack people's accounts to drive people to 'leave' forever 

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Nightingale12345 [2017-08-16 03:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I’ve made a creepypasta and I think it needs to be tweaked a bit before making IT a story about her.

 

My OC’s name is Marcelle Ravendale (by Kina Shen), very ironic to the name Mother Marcy/Marcelle (Due to her motherly personality). She’s heavily influenced in goth, witchcraft and Wicca but is quite shy and passive during her human years.

 

Because of her witchy nature, one of her more religious friends are very disturbed by her and when her mother finally discovered Marcelle’s religion (Wicca), she manipulates her daughter into leading her into the forest and killing her. As mARCELLE dies she does some kind of voodoo, witchy, mumbo-jumbo thing and gives/sells her soul to the dark arts.

 

During her rebirth she visits her infant past, whereas she finds out that her mother had difficulties with her birth (resulting in a premature birth, very sickly and frail) and called upon Slenderman to give her a chance at life in exchange she would be his wife/secretary/? (mainly wife). Take heed that she had no powers or abilities during her normal life even though she was gifted a healthy body/system. Now incarnated as a ghoul the first being she sees is Slenderman in which he gives her a proper explanation. (Just as you I’m following the Fancanon)

 

She's more like the mother figure of the Slender Mansion, hence the 'Mother Marcelle' or ‘The Mother’ seeming as she has a soft spot for children. It also compliments her now porcelain/ceramic body. Is it weird that she now has a porcelain-doll body? And whenever she gets wounded she is cracked instead of bruised, meaning she is quite vulnerable to bullets or anything that can pierce through a human body. Also, she doesn’t really have a weapon if not counting her tarot card deck that's lined with a blade (she's a tarot reader).

 

She does eventually kill the friend that betrayed her but there was an entire investigation that opened up, resulting her to be the prime suspect cause of well… duh, she’s the last to see her (wink). In the midst of things the friend’s mother hires an exorcist/detective/priest couple that’s determined to prove Marcelle’s guilt. One by one the remaining friends in the group disappears, (Marcelle’s doing)

 

Her powers… I’m working on that.

 

I just guessed it is a minimum of curses, telekinesis and empathy (bestowing a sense of fear into victims). She also has a knowledge of herbs (apothecary) so she does make mixtures/concoctions that gives her victims a negative effect. I don’t know how though, maybe she spins the mixture in a cauldron in the middle of the Slender Woods XD! Or maybe a smoke-machine! Please, help me. If I need to go back to the drawing board then I will, the story was supposed to minor in romance, (Giving Slenderman a human form [As well as brothers] played by Valery Kovtun to make it less weird.)

 

She’s also tall (to make it less weird there too), about 6’2 and moves like Jack Skellington (Nightmare before Christmas)

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JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-11 18:25:28 +0000 UTC]

I've made a basic preview of my Proxy OC called Marked, it's only around 700 words long, nothing too fancy. Just telling a bit of his job and what he does. 

I'm thinking about doing a whole series, but I need people to review over the small idea I have and give me some critiquing. 

Would you be willing to help?

The idea I had for him was that Tristan was a basic, every day guy who wanted to know why his friend Kyle took his own life. Only to cause his own life to plunge into the same madness Kyle had before hanging himself. After surviving 3 to 4 years of torment from Slender, he was forced to become a proxy. His somewhat happy with his position, his job tile of Marked is where he finds new victims for Slender. Willingly taking the white pill to forget his past and keeps himself from remembering. He's a Stalker Proxy, and is not good in one and one fights.

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-11 21:33:44 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I can help.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-12 01:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it means alot. The preview is on my profile... or would you prefer me to give you the rundown of my character?

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-12 09:37:32 +0000 UTC]

I'd prefer if you could give me the rundown.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-12 10:29:24 +0000 UTC]

My character is named Tristan Barton. A freshmen at college in a very local town, so a community college. He becomes a proxy after at least 3 to 4 years of being stalked, harassed, and tormented by Slender. Having been broken to the point he really had no will to fight off Slender's control anymore, he becomes Marked; the Proxy in charge of keeping track of evidence of Slender and choosing new victims of those who kind said evidence. Kind of like how in most videos of Slenderman, it starts with someone finding pictures of videos, which often leads to them being stalked also.

Marked as a character isn't the most strongest, he's, what I call, a Stalker Proxy. He only 5 foot 6, and rather whispy and thin, built more for running and hiding in some rather tight spaces. While he can fight, he prefers to flee as he's not Hitman Proxy.

Tristan as a character was just your average guy studying a career to get out from his parents house. He was quiet and had only one close friend in Kyle. That was until they started college together, and Kyle took his own life after being tormented by Slender since he was child. Tristan, having to go through his dead friends things, come across the photos and videos Kyle took of his stalker, and soon he starts to go through the same hell Kyle did. So now he's having to piece together what was really wrong with his friend, while trying to stay sane also.


But that's what I have so far, still needs some work.

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-12 10:42:49 +0000 UTC]

That actually sounds really good, honestly. I only hope that you don't end up accidentally copying Marble Hornets at all. Other than that, he seems like a really nice OC.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-12 11:09:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm basing it off of the original idea of person finding clues to friend/family members death or disappearance and thus starts being haunted by Slender, as it's mostly cannon on how Slender goes about things.

But other then that, it's a working progress of how the story will go. One idea is that it'll tell his story through him as a proxy while he's stalking another. Parts of his life he remembers doing before he was a proxy.

Another is telling his story from beginning to end, before he was a proxy and how he became one.

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-12 12:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good to me. Honestly, this seems like a fine plan. Keeping it fairly basic is a good idea for a first pasta, and a tried-and-true standby is a Slenderman Proxy.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-12 18:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Tried-and-true? Sorry I'm not that good at reading between the lines.

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-12 19:43:07 +0000 UTC]

As in, it's a proven concept that's been shown to work well. It's a good choice for beginners, too, since the basic framework is already there and it can be as simple or as complex as you want.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-12 22:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well thanks

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-13 10:50:57 +0000 UTC]

This really does seem like a neat character. Got any other questions?

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-13 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Would a style set up be better with third person/first person pov

Or as journal Entries and Recordings of Tristan writing or talking about experiences.

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KomradApex In reply to JadeSpeedster17 [2017-06-13 23:22:46 +0000 UTC]

If it's your first pasta, I'd say go with whatever format you feel most at home with.

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JadeSpeedster17 In reply to KomradApex [2017-06-14 00:55:05 +0000 UTC]

Kay, I think that abut sums it up. I'll let you know if I have any more questions. Thanks for your help

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FadingCanine [2017-05-19 15:27:17 +0000 UTC]

I want to say thank you for this. I'm revisiting the fandom after a long hiatus and now reviewing my old characters. They weren't bad per say..but had a lot of clichés and half filled, half assed backstories. This is really helpful.

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KomradApex In reply to FadingCanine [2017-05-19 16:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! It's great that you can tell what your own weaknesses are. A lot of people can't do that.

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Samehxx [2017-03-14 11:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Hi! My oc was originally planned to not be human...I didnt really find a creature that would fit him, so would it be fine to make my own? would it also be fine if he wasnt human?

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KomradApex In reply to Samehxx [2017-03-14 11:56:10 +0000 UTC]

You can do whatever you want, at the end of the day. It's your character.

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Samehxx In reply to KomradApex [2017-03-15 10:31:41 +0000 UTC]

oh ok then...

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Kiss-Land [2017-01-11 14:42:11 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Sorry to bother, but I need one advice.
So, I'm working on a proxy and i wanted to make it so that he dies and gets his face eaten by dogs, but he's a good asset to slenderman, so slender revives him as a zombie, but as punishment for failing the mission he revives him with the dogs faces replacing his real human face.
I was wondering if that's overpowered, because in other guides I've seen they can't be anything but human, but my oc won't have any powers so I'm not sure if that would still be op.

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KomradApex In reply to Kiss-Land [2017-01-13 09:25:16 +0000 UTC]

I guess that's alright. Even an immortal OC isn't overpowered provided they aren't constantly in a position of superiority.

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Kiss-Land In reply to KomradApex [2017-01-13 21:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Alright thanks, because I didn't want to take him down.

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LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-09 00:05:23 +0000 UTC]

hey um having some trouble. im trying to make a proxy but i have no idea what her code name should be. her job is stalking targets for slender. ill post a sketch of her sometime.

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KomradApex In reply to LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-09 14:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Is there anything else you can tell me about her?

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LittleNightmarecp In reply to KomradApex [2017-01-09 20:04:59 +0000 UTC]

She wears a black mask with white details on it. her real name is Amanda palmer. Her talents are: stealth, becoming 'friends' with her targets.

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KomradApex In reply to LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-09 20:08:53 +0000 UTC]

I'd advise not going for a name that's overly girly or "cute". I'd also avoid stuff that just sound cliche, like "Midnight" or "Psycho ____".

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LittleNightmarecp In reply to KomradApex [2017-01-09 21:15:56 +0000 UTC]

OK. Thanks. Someone suggested friend stabber,back stabber, Amanda the backstabber.

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KomradApex In reply to LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-09 21:17:07 +0000 UTC]

I'd also advise going against overly showy names. Sometimes, something that's more subdued is best.

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LittleNightmarecp In reply to KomradApex [2017-01-09 21:28:22 +0000 UTC]

So nothing with Amanda or plamer in it. Right?

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KomradApex In reply to LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-09 21:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Actually, just using a character's real name and nothing else can be fine, often. It keeps things simple too.
Of course these are just my own opinions, but I do believe them to be sound.

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LittleNightmarecp In reply to KomradApex [2017-01-14 17:08:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your help

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KomradApex In reply to LittleNightmarecp [2017-01-14 17:19:18 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Necropolis-of-Cuties [2016-09-11 01:20:25 +0000 UTC]

okay I wanna make a female proxy for slenderman but i don't know of a good proxy name well it will be "Ms." something for the proxy name part and for the drawing/designing part i'll use a avatar maker cause I can't draw humans(well I might try to get someone to draw her for me but yeah) so yeah I have one proxy named Hana The Hula Dancer one but idk if she is a good proxy for slenderman

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KomradApex In reply to Necropolis-of-Cuties [2016-09-11 14:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Uh...a hula dancer?

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Necropolis-of-Cuties In reply to KomradApex [2016-09-11 15:23:32 +0000 UTC]

yeah I was bored and came up with her, don't really have a back story for her I just put her personality,likes,dislikes, and age on the presentation thing
Her: alyssathomas.deviantart.com/ar…

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KomradApex In reply to Necropolis-of-Cuties [2016-09-11 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]

I hate to be negative but she doesn't really look scary, and her outfit isn't very practical for her line of work. She also looks way too pristine to be someone who's been living away from civilization.

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Necropolis-of-Cuties In reply to KomradApex [2016-09-11 15:54:42 +0000 UTC]

well I had to use a avatar maker to make her as I said before 'I CAN'T DRAW HUMANS' and besides she doesn't need to look scary to be a proxy just insane and have medical problems like ticci toby is twitchy or masky and hoodie with their problems and she is from hawaii and she wears hawaiin clothes more then practical clothes duh

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yeIIer [2016-09-10 01:04:07 +0000 UTC]

I have a character whom I consider to be a proxy, but I have no idea where to start without revealing stuff about the series he's in. I have a lot of masked characters but he's the only one who actually works for the Slenderman (well, the Faceless/the Master in-canon). He's the guy in my icon, in doodle form... <.<

As far as the human character goes, he is blissfully unaware that he's a proxy, and is actually the nicest character in the series before the Faceless starts to take hold of him. By the end of the series he's a wreck of humanity and he's not at all like he was when the series began. Man, it's hard to talk about this story without giving away spoilers. o_o Basically, learning that he was working for the very thing he thought he was fighting really destroyed him.

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KomradApex In reply to yeIIer [2016-09-10 11:21:13 +0000 UTC]

I see. That's a solid idea for a character. :3

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yeIIer In reply to KomradApex [2016-09-10 18:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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YU-GEN [2016-08-03 09:06:26 +0000 UTC]

i just created this character and some shit, i don't know if it's good or not, i just kinda made it lmao
sta.sh/0rg1o64wnqy

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KomradApex In reply to YU-GEN [2016-08-04 22:53:49 +0000 UTC]

They seem a little cartoonish and "exaggerated". If that's what you're going for, be sure to hammer it home, but if not I'd suggest making them more of a realistic type of character.

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ILoveDecepticons [2016-04-21 14:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Hey. It is it alright if I put links to this and your other CP OC tips on a page in the CP OC wiki I made? I'll give you credit!

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KomradApex In reply to ILoveDecepticons [2016-04-21 23:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Sure, and thanks for asking for permission. :3

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ILoveDecepticons In reply to KomradApex [2016-04-22 00:03:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks, and you're welcome!

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