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force-of-nature [2013-01-20 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]
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I really like this piece, however, I am a little distracted by the text, although this is original.
The techniques employed here are fantastic, I like the almost voyeuristic perspective, creeping up on the creature from behind and portraying a more authentic and personal view of the animal. The depth of field is fantastic and the vignetting helps draw attention to the dog and his posture.
I am not sure how I feel with regards to the text, it feels a bit pointless. The font is fine but it's the inconsistent capitalisation and odd use of full stops and brackets to signify the action, which is quite obvious from the image itself. The actual content of the lexis used is too basic to add anything to the image. Perhaps some more thoughtful and intense use of language would be more appropriate here. I'm not completely averse to text on images, but I just feel this could be done slightly better to improve the impact of the piece.
The tone to the image gives it a fabulous sense of how cool and destitute the scene is and the way the dog is off centre is a great piece of composition, which almost emphasises the lonley feel to the image overall. I really do feel empathy towards the subject. A good shot.
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konstantingl In reply to force-of-nature [2013-01-20 17:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for attention My main language is Russian, and here is problems with english, i can't be thoughtful
i hope it would be later
And thank you again! it's very very necessary for me, it's inspirate me
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force-of-nature In reply to konstantingl [2013-01-20 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome for the critique. I guessed your main language was not English, but hopefully you can understand my points! I hope they help!
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konstantingl In reply to force-of-nature [2013-01-20 17:27:05 +0000 UTC]
it's really help me i take my mistake, words really excess
thank you, and sorry for english again
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Shadowelve [2013-03-04 20:30:21 +0000 UTC]
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Akeschnyder [2013-02-28 22:53:26 +0000 UTC]
I love it (and I didn't even noticed the text until I read the comment/critic lol
Reminds me so much my husky when she was "singing" to the moon.
Thanks for bring some memories of her with your photo
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konstantingl In reply to Akeschnyder [2013-03-01 04:40:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you i put some text on photo at first, and then download second edition of this photo. critic is correct
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Akeschnyder In reply to konstantingl [2013-03-01 09:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Aahh that is why ... well I didn't even noticed this one so good job!
I am still in love with the photo, my dog was black/greyish and white.
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konstantingl In reply to Akeschnyder [2013-03-01 16:54:19 +0000 UTC]
what is name of your dog?
look at this photo [link] , it's the same dog
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Akeschnyder In reply to konstantingl [2013-03-02 09:21:16 +0000 UTC]
You have found the photo
Her name was Anghara Gisla
and omg that photo is stunning as well! well done! (wait I am gonna comment there)
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aerendial [2013-02-16 19:47:49 +0000 UTC]
this beautiful and inspiring work in this journal 'mute able or mutable.' [link]
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Aggzicle [2013-01-22 18:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Could you not upload the picture on its own with the text in the description; I agree with the critique with that it's quite distracting but the photo's really nice
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konstantingl In reply to Aggzicle [2013-01-22 18:33:47 +0000 UTC]
remove text on photo, but don't understand you about text in description my english is bad sorry.
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