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Koshou — Alone From The Beginning 5
Published: 2011-08-09 16:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 8309; Favourites: 194; Downloads: 36
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I think her entire form disintegrated but since she's immortal her body recovered
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Like regenerative healing?
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wow this is a great comic! wish you had continued
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"Over the mountain, the ominous cloud
coming to cover the land in a shroud,
hide in a bushel, a basement, a cave,
but when cloud comes a'huntin',
No one's a safe...
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You know who theoretically created cloud hunt right? Yup Simon!
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love your art style, emphasized the horror behingd that show.
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I loves me some apocalypse... and this is so touching and sad...
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If they ever start going into and, ya'know, providing details on the mushroom war, i have this much to say:
Adventure Time is going to get REALLY DARK, REALLY FAST.
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Not necessarily...I'm just say'n, s**t would get REAL.(Just not sure how.)
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You should make another page of her continuing her life of survival after the war..Just saying.Nice ending though.
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but... there is nothing to read. O_O
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This comic is really, really great. Wordless comics can sometimes be hard to pull off but you've done an excellent job, I can very easily follow the events without the aid of dialogue or narration (to the point that dialogue and narration would actually be a hindrance). Its very well-drawn and really seems quite in character to me and is a very interesting take on events that have been hinted at in canon.
Really great work.
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That was a great comic and such a touching end.
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sorry to tell you this but this kinda sucked i bearly know the story line and it has no word
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watch the show, then come back, and a strip doesn't need dialog to be good.
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I do Watch the show. The Comic doent make sense So STFU
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makes sense to me....so tempted to feed the TROLL!
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Wow excuse me rude.
Just because you don't want to take the time to actually read it doesn't mean it sucks.
It's incredibly straightfoward, the only person who apparently doesn't get it is you.
If you have any constructive criticism, I would be happy to hear it. But for some reason I'm doubting that you do.
Also, it was never meant to have words in the first place and comics don't always need to have them anyway.
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i find it harder to find out the story line if doesnt have words
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I wrote this comic with the fact that there would be absolutely no dialogue the entire time. Throughout the process I was keeping clarity in mind at all times. if you have any suggestions to make the events clearer I would love to hear them. not just "it sucks because I don't get it", thanks.
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im how about she not gettng hit by a nuke cause if cloths was destroyed so would Hambo
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please tell me how you even manage to get yourself dressed in the morning.
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Hambo got left behind on the bridge, he wasn't with her when she was hit by it.
The idea was that she set the nuke off slightly earlier than usual. So, while the area was still devastated some things remained mostly intact. Marceline and her belongings she had on her, including her clothes, got the worst of it because she was right there.
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THATS WHY IM TELLING YO TO ADD WORD I DIDNT KNOW THAT HAMBO WAS LEFT THATS WHY IT NEED WORDS GOD
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Except we see her leaving Hambo behind in page 2: [link]
It doesn't make sense to use dialogue to convey something that easily can be (and WAS) shown in the artwork.
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Also the bridge was destroyed and all the humans on it to so Hambo Was destroyed
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the bridge was "destroyed" in the sense that it's in a lot of pieces all over the place, not vaporized.
if you'll notice, Hambo didn't exactly escape unscathed either.
I'll give you that thing with the humans though, I mostly had charred body parts scattered around because i thought it would look cool but it does raise some continuity issues.
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i still think it needs words so will you PLEASE ADD WORDS!!!!
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or pacing
or story-telling
or anything about comics at all ever
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so despite the fact...
that i've repeatedly explained...
that i intended for there to be no dialogue from the start...
and every problem you had...
was still easily remedied by a little reading comprehension...
you still want me to add dialogue...
not because it would help the story...
not because it's legitimately distracting...
not because the events really are unclear...
but because you
just
don't
like it
you want me to completely redo it because i thought that Marceline talking to herself about events that are easily SHOWN and don't NEED to be told was unnecessary
am i in the ballpark here? because if that's the case then i gotta say
fuck no it's not your damn comic
come back when you have an idea of how constructive criticism works
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T_T i have never seen a comic with out words im and im telling the truth and i do like it im saying it just need Words
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wtf dude? do you live with your parents? do they spoon feed you everything?
this comic was perfectly understandable.
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no. fucking deal with it and stop trying to tell people what they can and can't do with NOTHING substantial or genuinely helpful to back up your whining about how you don't like being out of your comfort zone.
also, read more comics
there are hundreds out there that don't use words at all. it's not that hard to understand.
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I really loved these. I think you should do more like it. Like nuild the backstory of Marcelline. What happened right before and right after the Mushroom Wars.
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