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Description Contains manga spoilers, GaaNaru and ShikaTema. If you're cool with that, go ahead.

This is kind of my first fanfic, as the comics (one of them still unfinished) I've drawn for the fandom before have been either scripted by other people or meta. So here goes my Author's Note. Read it after you've read the comic, lest you be spoiled:

I tried to give most characters who show up a little different costume from their current canon attire, seeing as they're probably as much as ten years older, though with some you may not be able to tell and with some I had to keep them more recognizable and less realistically changed. Shikamaru is wearing a Sunagakure flak jacket in the second panel. He and Temari have a home in both villages, I think, spending a year here and another there or something. Not being kages like the other international couple featured, they can do that.
Oh yeah, and Karin. I want her in Konoha, living happily ever after.

I made up the cactus. There's one called silver torch, which looks pretty neat, and you can imagine it's the same but with colours (other than green) reversed. Since this is a fictional universe, they can have fictional plants.

I like Gaara's palanquin thing from the third Shippuuden movie, though I find it a little out of character he would travel in one instead of on foot. I figure the people escorting their dear beloved kage insisted, and he found it kind of touching and went along with it to make them happy.
It's a little repetitive that he's talking with Kankuro again, considering that at-the-moment-unfinished comic where he also does, but I couldn't picture Temari having this conversation and didn't want to use a minor character/practically-OC. (I also like drawing Kankuro's nose.)

Matsuri is one of Gaara's bodyguards there, and Sari's regular job is probably not being Shikamaru and Temari's brat's babysitter, but I wanted to include her, too. Their buddy Ittetsu is Gaara's secretary, as you may recall from the other earlier comic. They are also Gaara's friends, though they're not introduced specifically in that context.
Free cookies salted tongue for you if you recognize the other four characters I also felt compelled to include and who are (eta: in panel 13, not 2. I thought it'd be obvious...).

And more imaginary free food if you somehow didn't guess the outcome beforehand, considering how much attention Minato's teleportation technique has been getting in the manga recently. Would you be willing to believe I came up with this before the chapter where the related seal's inclusion in a certain other parent's demon one was revealed?
(And one earlier version of the idea involved Gaara having it as a tattoo, too. But I thought a necklace would be more convenient, as he can just take it off if he doesn't want Naruto to pop in by surprise at the moment.)

Ahem, anyway. Naruto needs to learn hiraishin. Because of this.



My materials were as close to completely traditional media as possible: pens, ink+brush and correction fluid (lots of it), and this was also an attempt to break away from digital art for a while again.


Happy GaaNaru Fanday!
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Comments: 216

zippura In reply to ??? [2011-04-01 19:47:40 +0000 UTC]

joku osaa kuvata fluffia nii-iin ihanasti että mun favekansio räjähtää jos jatkan sun gallerian selaamista pidemmälle...

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AerieTigre [2011-04-01 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

A-freakin-dorable. Warm fuzzies abound! X3

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kosmonauttihai In reply to AerieTigre [2011-04-01 14:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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unseenangel101 In reply to ??? [2011-03-21 04:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, your brilliant! Not only is your art style brilliant and so is your humor! Your just bloody brilliant!

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kosmonauttihai In reply to unseenangel101 [2011-03-21 08:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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unseenangel101 In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-03-25 21:26:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^ your awesome

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mags-duranb In reply to ??? [2011-02-14 00:10:01 +0000 UTC]

I like both characters and surprisingly enought I've loving the idea of them together, woah! thanks to make discover that. The story was beautiful and cute *_* and your style is very unique I like it and your thick lines too. The last part of the comic was my favorite, the night atmosphere was very well done and stunning for me *_* to favs~

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kosmonauttihai In reply to mags-duranb [2011-02-15 17:15:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I'm glad I've had a hand in your coming to appreciate this pairing, it's my very favoritest of favorites. :)
Thank you for such a nice comment.

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evvelevve In reply to ??? [2011-02-08 20:01:36 +0000 UTC]

this makes me want to cry... it's so moving... i usualy don't like yaoi (or well shounen ai) but i acctually love these to together! it's so emotional! and your style and drawings makes me love them even more Erittäin hyvin tehty! Olisin varmasti ostaa, jos minulla olisi rahaa... sorry if my finish is wrong! i only know a little finsih, my cousins have thaght me xD

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kosmonauttihai In reply to evvelevve [2011-02-09 18:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm so glad to hear you find this touching, and that you like my beloved OTP. They are very inspiring for aww-inducingness like this. :)

Din finska är ganska bra, jag vet inte om min svenska är alls bättre. Jag tycker att jag ska inte trycka och sälja den här seriebilden, men det glädjar mig smumschmårphligt att veta att du skulle köpa den.

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wikigiuli In reply to ??? [2011-02-02 18:26:46 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaw....

i'm not a particularly fan of yaoi, but this story is so moving!!! ^^

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kosmonauttihai In reply to wikigiuli [2011-02-08 18:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the super-late reply!

Anyway, thank you very much. And I'd like to mention that neither am I (see comments as well). This pairing is my OTP, regardless. :)

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wikigiuli In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-02-08 18:59:54 +0000 UTC]

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Trauma-sama In reply to ??? [2011-01-20 16:08:53 +0000 UTC]

That was the cutest thing I have ever seen! T_T

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Trauma-sama [2011-01-20 16:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Voi kiitos.

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Trauma-sama In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-01-22 12:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Ei mitään. Tajusin noin kolme sekunttia viestin laittamisen jälkeen, että olisi voinut ehkä laittaa palautteen toisellakin kielellä... -.-

Gah, rakastan tuota tapaa, jolla piirrät Gaaran. Ressu näyttää niin haavoittuvaiselta.

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Trauma-sama [2011-01-23 19:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Nää, pistä vaikka swahiliksi, kyllä netistä jostain käännösresurssit löytyy. :)
Oi kiitos jälleen. Onhan tuo (hiekka)kuorensa alla aika lutupehmis, ja kerta piirrän sen yleensä Naruton kanssa, seurassa missä tämä puolensa todistetusti pääsee eniten esiin, niin ei hellanlettas. :D

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Trauma-sama In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-02-08 09:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha, laitan Turun murteella.

Gaara on ehkä upeimpia Naruto-hahmoja. <3 Ja GaaNaru on ihana paritus. Ja "hellanlettas" on ehkä kuvaavin sana heidän suhteelleen.

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Trauma-sama [2011-02-08 18:11:13 +0000 UTC]

On, ovat ja on, eikös! :)

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lisedengrumme In reply to ??? [2011-01-08 23:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Your style is simply awesome. Watching you.

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kosmonauttihai In reply to lisedengrumme [2011-01-09 14:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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InuyashaZukoFluffy In reply to ??? [2010-12-31 13:38:08 +0000 UTC]

hehe, i'm not really on GaaNaru, but i thought i'd be funny to try reading something like that... I was... cute ^^ x3

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kosmonauttihai In reply to InuyashaZukoFluffy [2011-01-02 13:22:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it.
I wasn't supposed to be into GaaNaru either, when I started watching the series, but they are just so damn cute.

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InuyashaZukoFluffy In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-01-02 15:52:50 +0000 UTC]

LOL, yeah, i agree ^^ But i like NaruHina too...

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kosmonauttihai In reply to InuyashaZukoFluffy [2011-01-02 17:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that's cute, too. :)

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InuyashaZukoFluffy In reply to kosmonauttihai [2011-01-02 20:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Hehe x3

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UzumakiAndrea123 In reply to ??? [2010-11-23 23:14:00 +0000 UTC]

AW! That was so awesome!

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Seiryuu-san In reply to ??? [2010-11-22 07:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww That was so cute.

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linni23 [2010-11-08 12:21:15 +0000 UTC]

I love it!! This is sooo good!

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AppleAlchemy In reply to ??? [2010-10-29 15:19:07 +0000 UTC]

D'awwww you're making me really love this couple~!!! <3 Expect fav spams because I also love your art style~!

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kosmonauttihai In reply to AppleAlchemy [2010-10-29 21:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks. I'm glad to have assisted in your conversion.
Fav spams are appreciated, contrary to sometimes-popular belief.

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MejCat [2010-10-28 13:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for posting this piece. There is finally a person out there who portrays this couple as more than just Sex. You gave the emotional, and rational reasons for this couple all in an adorable in character package. Keep up the amazing work!

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kosmonauttihai In reply to MejCat [2010-10-28 16:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you're welcome. I love these two together for a million reasons, and there's definitely more to the couple than sex (not that there's anything wrong with there also being sex, but yes, I see what you mean).

I hope you'll find more fanworks that depict other aspects of their relationship (I have). :)

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MejCat In reply to kosmonauttihai [2010-10-29 02:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, totally. I'm glad you portray the more meaningful sides of their relationship and I will continue to browse your gallery for fluffness. Oh, and to quote you, "Just so you know, I wished for a hamburger."

"Do you want me to get you one?"

"No, you stay right here."

That was adorable!!!

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yeaboikat [2010-09-22 00:09:50 +0000 UTC]

awww~~
i love it!

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HazukiNinja In reply to ??? [2010-08-26 15:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous! ^^ I love this comic to death
4 characters... Hinata, Ino, Chouji, aaaaaand... Kiba I think? Not entirely sure ...
yay for abusing ellipses!
Anyways, I'll break down why this is so kickass:
The Drawing Style: It's so different but I think I'm in love Just the... for a lack of a better word, quirkiness of it, draws you in! The thick black lines that you use also make an emphasis on everything that is really attractive. Some of my favorite parts are Ino's ponytail, Gaara's nose, people's arms and hands, and the sixth panel. The angle is mind-blowingly perfect
Plot: So. Goddamn ('scuse the language). CUTE!!! Yes, I am on fire because of the sweetness. And it's not the sugary, sticks to the back of your throat disgusting sweetness; it's like the first bite of a homemade apple pie, still warm from the oven with a little (or a lot of) whipped cream on top. Naruto's sneaking idea for putting the seal on the necklace was genius, as is your supposed creation of it before it was even published What I really adore though, must have been Gaara walking through his life and figuring out what he needed. THAT was the true heart-melter for me
This. Is. Fanart. Nirvana. I worship you
Now I will go continue to raid your gallery

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kosmonauttihai In reply to HazukiNinja [2010-08-26 18:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Not the four characters I meant, but yeah, you recognized the ones in the second panel splendidly. Have yourself an apple (as a pie if you so desire).
Or maybe a fire blanket.

I do love drawing Gaara's nose, and arms and hands (and feet). For a comic drawn by me this includes a shockingly small amount of closeups of hands.

Thank you for the comment.

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HazukiNinja In reply to kosmonauttihai [2010-08-27 05:16:44 +0000 UTC]

lol, okay then My bad!
I'll still take the apple though
Could I have a pie blanket instead perhaps? Or maybe a flaming apple.
The way you draw human anatomy just plain rocks
Yeah, after raiding like your entire gallery, I sorta noticed that you have a thing for hands It's all good; I would (did actually) admire all the hands in your gallery too

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zombieskully In reply to ??? [2010-08-24 16:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Okayokay better comment because this deserves it. Rather than my random flailings:

Someone else mentioned it, but the way you emphasize some things with darker strokes than others is just fantastic and makes this super easy to read. Your line quality is also fantastic with the thicks and thins and I want to pet them. Maybe nom on them a little too.

I love that you used traditional media too. I could never do something like this. I have no patience. I can't even drag myself to make comics using digital, hah. The ink you used gave it such a beautiful texture and you pulled off the different lightings really well.

Uffhh and the way you used textures with pens. You even had it diminish with space! Along with your line thickness. That looks soso nice. The poses and angles you chose for each panel were like...perfect as well. I'm a total sucker for dynamic angles even though I always use boring ones in my own art.

As someone in a long-distance relationship, I can really appreciate this plot. The story was just too cute and the use of the hiraishin was just great haha. I wish I knew that jutsu. lol ;-; I like how Naruto said it was a wish because he'd either know that Gaara'd wish for him, or it could be that he is willing to show up and grant Gaara ANY wish he made with his own two hands, which is also like omgihavediabetesallofasudden cute. It was also great what you put for his reasonings and whatnot for those other things he could have wished for, I feel like he'd really feel that way hehe. Especially the things he knew he had to work on on his own. A certain someone inspiring him to work at things himself hehe.

I'm gonna be my biased lil self and spend a paragraph on Naruto now. FFF >U> Omg you do him sooo in character all the time. I feel like he would be this devoted to his lover, no matter who they were, but especially with someone like Gaara, Sakura, or the like, since they're so close to him. You brought that out so well in like...anything you do. I just wanna pinch his cheeks and snuggle his face until he can't breathe! Ugh, so adorable! He's just so goofy and sweet and even how you portray him gives that off.

I've always loved how you drew them. Your style DOES make me spew happy faces from my eyes. I believe I've raved about it before though hehe. Though I rarely comment, I always make sure to catch up in your gallery (like today! 8D)

But yes, keep it up~ People like you are what continue to keep my faith in Naruto fans from dropping to like..0% |D

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kosmonauttihai In reply to zombieskully [2010-08-25 08:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu! Long and thoughtful comments make me all aflutter.

This is why I like inking with a brush so much; I can vary the line width so easily as long as I can keep my hand steady. Actually I don't have the patience to use digital media much, traditional is my comfy blanket. I envy how you can draw and paint and create atmosphere and scenes and add detail and texture all on the computer. I'm still only learning to pick colours when it comes to digital art.

Naruto did kind of arrogantly yet completely accurately expect Gaara to wish for him, but he'd bring his darling Kazekage the moon and then some if asked. I can imagine him being so very devoted and attentive and loving when he really loves someone, and ahh, I just wuv him! He can be such a bundle of WAFF when he wants to. And Gaara, too! I love how a big part of their character descriptions is how they want love and to take care of the people they love, and hahaha save the world! Together!
They're a total toothrot.

Aww, and people like you, too. :) Let us proudly uphold the reputation of Narutofanpersons!

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zombieskully In reply to ??? [2010-08-24 16:17:19 +0000 UTC]

AUUUGHHHHHH
I LOVE YOUR STYLE SO MUCH IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNNYYYYY
-CLAWS AT BED- NARUTO'S ARRMMMMMSSS UUGHHHH
and this idea is SO cute
just like all your others
KANKY~ Being such a cool big brotherrr ;-;
You keep making me wanna draw Naruto/Gaara dangit |D

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kosmonauttihai In reply to zombieskully [2010-08-25 07:57:41 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOURS, TOO!
Do draw Naruto/Gaara dangit! >:D

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Gaaras1Girl1719 In reply to ??? [2010-08-19 09:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Normally I don't like Yaoi, and by "not like" I mean I haven't come across any non-cannon yaoi that I didn't hate, but even I've got to admit that this was adorable.

And unbelievably well drawn too, you are an amazing artist. And the "I wished for a hamburger" line was just awesome. You my friend, are full of win.

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Gaaras1Girl1719 [2010-08-19 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I didn't really like shipping much until I ran into Naruto and Gaara, either.
Must be that "mysterious power" to change and win over people. :)

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Gaaras1Girl1719 In reply to kosmonauttihai [2010-08-20 01:53:56 +0000 UTC]

LoL, it must be

I'll try to check those links you sent me though they probably won't work with my computer. (I've got dial-up on a good will computer) but I'll try next time I've got a couple of hours to kill!

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Angevelinka In reply to ??? [2010-08-17 13:05:17 +0000 UTC]

This is so... beautiful. I love the way you added shading to the parts of the night, they make it look so real for the light in the desert. And the details here are overkill, I can't believe everything is just done by hands... you're either genious or nut, and I guess one didn't exclude the other. As history proved.
Anyway, to not stray away from the topic... I'm amazed by the way how many things you included in the background, and that counts esepcieally as pattern on Gaara's room's walls and the leaves that cover the first bigger frame. I didn't guess what was going to happen in a way what kind of seal is going to be used (I pay so little attention to Naruto's parents that it would be funnier if I actually remembered this jutsu) but I thought that it would include summoning Naru or something of his belongingsXD I love especially the goofy smile after his explaining on two silent frames on the right side of the page - the expressions reeally go well in your style with those twoXD Kankuro looks stunning and as Shika and Tema's daughter... I wouldn't be surprised if she really would look like thaXD (of course, if Shika and Tema will EVER get some action to have a get together. Who knows about this anymore). Lovely, lovely work, with enormous bravo added toward your workXD

P.S. If I see right, the other four are Ino, Kiba, Hinata and Sakura, right?XD Ino looks so much like a happy go lucky American girl from the teenagers shows from thereXDDD

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Angevelinka [2010-08-18 09:08:08 +0000 UTC]

I am most definitely a nut. Whether it's hazel or pistachio or something else remains to be seen.

The jutsu is Naruto's dad's signature one, which he made famous in the Kakashi Gaiden chapters. Basically the user can teleport to any place that has that seal Naruto put in the necklace. Summoning is a little inconvenient for them in the long run, what with the one being summoned having no control over when it happens. With this jutsu Naruto can choose when to teleport, and Gaara can invite him over when he especially wants him to, or if he doesn't want Naruto there at the moment he can take the necklace off. And, I'm not sure what are the exact rules on who can summon whom. I think Pain (Animal Path) has been the only human character shown to be able to summon a living human being (Konan).

I kind of like the ShikaTema kid's design, too. I think she's my first Naruto OC now. :)

Yep, those are Ino, Kiba, Hinata and Sakura (and Karin and Chouji) in the background. In that question I meant the four characters in panel 13, though.

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Angevelinka In reply to kosmonauttihai [2010-08-18 10:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Nuts are quite and add in life so I guess that's an interesting thing to be one

Ah yes, I know it. I read Kakashi's Gaiden Still, I'm unimpressed by it and Naruto's dad so farXD So my opinion standsXD But it's good to know what Naruto does here.
It's convenient to know that it all depends on wearing the thingXD About the human summoning though... I'm sure it's not such a big deal as it happens here and there (Iruka is summoned by a seal also and he is not the best ninja in the drawerXD), though when it comes to Pain everything he did was 'above awesome'. So, who knows

A very cute OC I admitXDDD

Ah, thoseXD Well, I'm sure I don't recognize them as much as I wished to, so I'll just keep quiet about thatXD

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kosmonauttihai In reply to Angevelinka [2010-08-18 12:29:23 +0000 UTC]

You know, I totally forgot about Iruka being summoned by the exam scrolls. And probably a bunch of other occurences. In any case, as Gaara tries to put into words there in the comic, this couldn't have been summoning because he and Naruto don't have a summon contract.

I don't blame you, as they were only six years old when we last saw them. And yes, this is a hint. :)

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Angevelinka In reply to kosmonauttihai [2010-08-18 12:51:11 +0000 UTC]

It's easy to missXD
Well, it suits with the logic of itXD

Ahhhh, those were his collegues from the accident with ball!XD That's clever, I wouldn't recognize them at any point as I never expected to see them portrayedXDDD

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