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koyomel-doughnut โ Rin and Len
Published: 2009-01-21 10:39:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1892; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 0
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I drew this about 1 and a half month ago,i guess
Tool:water color,color pencils
Commission me!!! [link]
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Very nice work! I really don't have that much to say about this since you did a splendid job at conveying both emotion and depth. But anyway, I'll try my best to give you some tips. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
1. I'd like to see more shading in the clothes, since the hair and faces are shaded more heavily than the clothes. It would balance things out a lot more.
2. I'd also say you should add some texture to the outfits, since clothes always have some sort of pattern to the fabric. It would make it look a bit better that way. But some people don't do that because of their style, so this one really doesn't matter that much.
3. The shines in the eyes seem to be a bit big. Once again that may just be the style, so this one really doesn't matter either. Bit I'd tone them down a little bit.
4. Len's face seems a bit small compared to Rin's. I would work on fixing his mouth since it seems a bit too far up.
5. I really like the colour choices you used but the blue seems to blend into Rin's hair. I'm not sure how to fix this problem since I really don't colour my traditional drawings much. But I'd work on making your lines smoother and not to use markers that bleed/expand out.
Well I think that's it for now. I hope this will be a bit helpful.
= w = I really do like the piece. And I think you really have a good eye for depth and shading. The hair looks gorgeous! <3 Well anyway, I thank you for reading this longggggg critique! a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/l/iโฆ " alt=" " title="ilavplz"/>
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Thank you soo much!! <3 you know, I submitted this deviation like 2 years ago and fiiinalllyyyy someone critique it for me!!! i'm really appreciated <3
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No problem! Q v Q Woah really!? I had no idea! XD I just hope you find some of it useful. LOL!
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thank you so much
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You are welcome. ^^
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youยดre welcome! >w<
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omg!! so cute!!!!! I love the way you draw eyes <3
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These are cute! I like the texture from the color pencils.
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thank you!! and yeah color pencils saved this picture's life!!!
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thank you ^^
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No problem, just saying what I feel about it! You did a great job on it, and the Kagamine twins are my favorite of the Vocaloids
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thank you very much!
hehe,I love them ,too
they are so cute,aren't they
but maybe i love Meiko's voice the most ...hmm..
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Yeah, I like her voice too ^^ It's very nice~
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have you ever used that software?
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A friend of mine has All of the Vocaloids out now, lucky girl, so sometimes I watch her use it ^^
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wow.Is that fun?
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Yeah XD It seems like hard work, but also like it's very fun to do >w<
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really?
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Awww, that's too bad v.v;;
My friend imported them, that's why she has them
I hope you can at least find a trial version
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thank you very much.
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รด, ss thรญch bแปฉc nร y
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cam on ss
may ma em day? duoc mau` toc len,khong thi da no do? lu` roi >w<
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