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KPRS4ever — Ready for Action (Practice Sketch)
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Published: 2016-05-13 17:28:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1890; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 15
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I have been observing the Kim Possible model sheets and have been playing around with emotions! So, I drew this last night! Hope you guys like it! It's Kim in the new mission outfit I designed
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Looks good for the most part. The only thing I see that could use some work is on the feet, they need to be a little lower from the ankle (or slope the top of her foot to her toes a little bit to slim it, not a big deal it trips me up all the time too) It can get confusing as the characters feet go from being rounded, like you have here, when they're wearing sneakers but go the other way when they're in boots, idk.
The important thing is that you've mastered the upper lip, which anyone who has done this for a while can tell you is a fine line between lip and mustache e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Good job!
(Don't pay attention to the ratings, I don't like giving them but dA requires them for critiquing)
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Thank you so much for the critique! Yeah, feet are really tough for me, especially when drawing them at different angles 
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Hi! Very nice work here! Those model sheets are so helpful, and I can see that they've helped you a lot. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I gave you all stars for vision here, because I love how you changed her outfit, and as I said before, I like her pose. You made very good use of the model sheets as references here without copying anything.
Your originality was great too. The new outfit makes it unique. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The reason I gave you 3.5 for technique was just because it could use a little shading, line variation, and texture. Overall, the technique wasn't bad, it just needs a little work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
For impact, I gave you 4.5 because I feel it would pop more with a background and some color. But I know that this is just a sketch, so those are things you can add later if you feel like finishing this. I hope you do! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much! You give some good advice!
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Well i cannot critique the proportions because it is cartoon style, it wasn't supose to be so accurate nore i was watching Kim Possibe to know werry well how it should be like. First of all you should use the line weights (as well as shadows) its wery importan, because right now the drawing looks very flat. Line weights can make drawing to pop up even without using shadows . The nex thing that should be counsidered is the pencil strokes (there is many tehniques to use with pencil its not that basic) what i can can see now is that the directions of pencil stroke isn't very optimal the stroke aren't well adjusted to a shape of drawing. Think about: It is coplicated to draw round shape with straight strokes.
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Here's why it looks the way it looks. This wasn't meant to be a full on drawing. It was just a little sketch. It was more for practice. My watchers wanted me to post my practice sketches to see how I am doing on drawing the charaters. This isn't how my art usually looks
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It makes hard time to critique a sketch,hope u aren't mad at me
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I'm not mad
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I'm afraid I don't as of now. Sorry
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I love her face expression and battle stance. I definitely like the shading
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Looks like she's about to punch a henchman.
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