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Published: 2014-10-03 00:01:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 596; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 3
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Kenny and Rena. A little later in the story, so they're a bit older.Related content
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Hello! What a lovely piece of artwork you have here.
You did a really good job portraying the mood of the picture, the expressions and the poses of the characters really make me feel a sense of melancholy, and the washed out colours of the background really adds to the atmosphere of the drawing.
I love your painting style and the way you drew the hair. I especially like the pinks and purples you picked out for the girls clothing, they're really vivid and eye-catching! I also really like the way you painted the bushes in the background, they look so fluffy and almost kinda cute. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
The only real problem anatomy-wise is that the girl's torso is just a tad too long, and the man's arm seems a bit too long at the top, but other than that everything seems fine!
You've done a great job, keep it up! Your art is magnificent!
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Thank you! I definitely had some anatomy issues here haha. Mainly because of the pose that I kept holding onto and couldn't get to work... Sigh! Hopefully i will improve in that area soon
Thank you so much for your input, it means the world to me!
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I love this picture/colouring!
I am new to this, so I am not familiar with the story, though I am definitely intrigued, and will read!
The only thing I *might* change, is the fact that she has no nipples. While I completely understand the "mature content" thing, and trying to reach a broader audience, as a viewer, I feel like she's comfortable "bearing it all". So in the "original" I'd leave those in/add them. Only because it subconsciously adds to the obviously trying, yet comfortable with each other vibe. Does that make sense?
I'm not all about the nipples, lol.
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Umm... I'm a little confused! lol, she's wearing a shirt. Totally not what this picture is about. Thanks for the compliment, though! The color of her shirt is a very different color than her skin tone on my computer, I hope it's not too similar for everyone. Maybe I should change that?
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Oh no! Β That's not what I meant at all....sorry, late night, might not be as coherent as I'd like!
Her shirt is totally fine! Β There is definitely a contrast. Β And it looks good!
I'm not sure how to explain what I mean....
What I mean is, I feel like where the nipple should be, it's blurry, so in my mind's eye, I'm filling it in. Β Whereas in "reality" it's there, and they're both okay with it. They're both comfortable. Β
Hmm...on second thought, maybe I'll wait until the morning to describe what I mean. Β This isn't coming out as I'd hoped.
The picture is amazing, and I'm not trying to take away from that. Β I hope you didn't take what I said as an insult. Β Like I said, I'll give it another go in the morning.
Do you have a story listed on here? Β I'm definitely intrigued and feel maybe a background on the two would help me explain.
Sorry again if it came across as rude/offensive, not what I was going for!
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Ohh! I see what you mean now! lol
Yeah I didn't understand what you meant, I'm sorry! And I wasn't offended, just very confused xD
And yeah, it makes sense what you're saying. Her clothing is pretty tight and there should maybe be some indication of nipples in that area. Hmm. I genuinely never thought of that! I will have to give it some attention in my next pieces and see how it goes.
And thank you for the watch, and for the critique! I always really appreciate people taking time to comment on my work
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