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Published: 2013-10-13 05:46:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 9808; Favourites: 169; Downloads: 0
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Normally I like to post two pages at a time, but I didn't want people waiting even longer since this page is done and 16 isn't.A break from the action, now we can start progressing towards Earth
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I must know where his Magic Trailer comes into play!!
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LOL it's gonna be a long while actually, he's trailer-less for a while 
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haha! Jazz ratting out Ironhide when he's trying to be all serious
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Wow, I totally love this page, especially the last panel! So freaking awesome!!! (I'm prolly going to say that about all of them!)
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Hmm, the illustration, details and colours look great here. the stylisation is nicely cartoonish, yet wonderfully detailed and mechanical--but the scale looks... off, somehow. I get that the foreshortening is supposed to place Ironhide in the foreground, but the size difference between BB and OP makes 'Bee look barely shorter than Optimus, and 'Hide looks like he's either the same height or even taller than Prime. Is that intentional? Seems like kind of a weird choice to me.
Story is progressing nicely, and the dialogue seems to flow well, though I question the majority Autobots 'enjoying' the violence and killing, seems rather more a thing a few soldiers would say, like the Dinobots and similar, but that's mostly a Decepticon thing to say (I have similar problems with IDW in that regard).
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Yeah, that was a booboo on my part, I was trying to fit them all in and didn't think much of it being as close up shot, kinda muffed it up. Ironhide is a lot closer, but he's a bit shorted than Optimus in a full shot. But this whole thang is a learning experiment, I'm hoping as I progress to look back at the older pages and see how far I've improved. And then maybe fix them, lol. But there is a definite scaling which (I hope) will show itself better when you see a full body shot of them all together (which there is one that comes up in a page or 2 I think).
I was sorta going more for the type of banter they had in the old G1 cartoon, Prime included. More lightening the mood than enjoying it. If that makes sense, I sometimes don't make much sense, lol. Dunno how well I'll pull it off, but it remains to be seen, worth a shot! Still all stuff I'm trying to figure out as I go along. I'm an amateur for a reason, lol
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Cool, I look forward to the thing being put up.
I've got a similar situation with my own TF comics, still trying to figure out the styling and how to demonstrate that kind of scale, though I've gotta admit you'r doing better than I am in having a distinct, interesting style for these comics
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"Wheeljack's sky spies" O.O
OMM Wheeljack you adorable genius!!! \(^.^)/ *fangirling*
Though I'm a Decepticon, there are some Autobots who I consider *whispers* awesome... V.V
And I'm really happy you've done another page! Thank you for that, it makes my spark glow with joy! :3
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lol oh yes, Wheeljack builds ALL TEH GEAR
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yes a next panel
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awww yeah, great page! The artwork continues to impress and the dialogue seems natural and gives much needed life and personality to the characters :3
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Glad ya like the dialogue, I was rewatching season 1 episodes of G1 and Prime DID have a sense of humour back then
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Another amazing page, Kris. 
(I can so hear their G1 voices when I read this 
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For the most part, yes
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Awesome.
Yeah, I really liked how Prime was back in G1. (I absolutely adored seeing him playing basketball with Spike and then against his fellow Autobots!
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Same here, I loved all that stupid stuff XD
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Wheeljack's Sky Spies? Hehe, getting down to inventing without having them blowing up in his face, eh?
Of course not, Jazz! Since Ironhide is reckless, he's prone to jumping headfirst into scrap without thinking. Think he'll have Movieverse Ironhide's legendary trigger-happiness or HIS cannons? Oh that would be badass.
Jazz, your quirky smile is just kawaii! Look that face! You cannot resist the charm.
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The prototypes would have blown up in his face
There might be a reference to the movie cannons, but for the most part Ironhide has a big ass combat shotgun and combat knife. He is very impulsive and quick to get in a fight fo sho.
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A shotgun for the zombie apocalypse! I bet he has a boner for murder too. *coughsSargecough*
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What? He's red, he's got a southern accent, and he has a shotgun. Therefor, he's Sarge from RvB, only his plans don't involve killing Grif or whoever is orange in your comic.
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Huffer maybe? He's borderline yellow/orange?
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Oh god, if that joke appeared in your comic, I will piss myself laughing.
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Well I Can't For The AutoBots' Ark Debut!
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Coming up very very soon
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