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Published: 2013-10-13 05:46:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 9808; Favourites: 169; Downloads: 0
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Description Normally I like to post two pages at a time, but I didn't want people waiting even longer since this page is done and 16 isn't.

A break from the action, now we can start progressing towards Earth

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Comments: 84

ArwingPilot114 In reply to ??? [2013-10-19 01:20:57 +0000 UTC]

GU. 

I must know where his Magic Trailer comes into play!!  

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KrisSmithDW In reply to ArwingPilot114 [2013-10-19 01:31:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL it's gonna be a long while actually, he's trailer-less for a while   There are definitely plans for it, but he's solo at the beginning

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ArwingPilot114 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-19 01:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay. SOLO PRIMEEEEE!! YEAAAH!! -insert heavy metal music here-

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KrisSmithDW In reply to ArwingPilot114 [2013-12-04 04:54:48 +0000 UTC]

LOL XD

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OtakuRavage [2013-10-13 13:50:07 +0000 UTC]

haha! Jazz ratting out Ironhide when he's trying to be all serious

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KrisSmithDW In reply to OtakuRavage [2013-10-13 19:55:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL very true XD

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HologramXXX [2013-10-13 13:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I totally love this page, especially the last panel! So freaking awesome!!! (I'm prolly going to say that about all of them!)

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KrisSmithDW In reply to HologramXXX [2013-10-13 19:55:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL glad you like 'em

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Fanatic97 [2013-10-13 12:51:55 +0000 UTC]

TO EARTH! 

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Fanatic97 [2013-10-13 19:54:52 +0000 UTC]

YUSSSS Very very soon

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Fanatic97 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-13 21:28:44 +0000 UTC]

YAYZ! 

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Spikeprime [2013-10-13 11:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, the illustration, details and colours look great here. the stylisation is nicely cartoonish, yet wonderfully detailed and mechanical--but the scale looks... off, somehow. I get that the foreshortening is supposed to place Ironhide in the foreground, but the size difference between BB and OP makes 'Bee look barely shorter than Optimus, and 'Hide looks like he's either the same height or even taller than Prime. Is that intentional? Seems like kind of a weird choice to me.

Story is progressing nicely, and the dialogue seems to flow well, though I question the majority Autobots 'enjoying' the violence and killing, seems rather more a thing a few soldiers would say, like the Dinobots and similar, but that's mostly a Decepticon thing to say (I have similar problems with IDW in that regard).

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Spikeprime [2013-10-19 01:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that was a booboo on my part, I was trying to fit them all in and didn't think much of it being as close up shot, kinda muffed it up.  Ironhide is a lot closer, but he's a bit shorted than Optimus in a full shot.  But this whole thang is a learning experiment, I'm hoping as I progress to look back at the older pages and see how far I've improved.  And then maybe fix them, lol.  But there is a definite scaling which (I hope) will show itself better when you see a full body shot of them all together (which there is one that comes up in a page or 2 I think).


I was sorta going more for the type of banter they had in the old G1 cartoon, Prime included.  More lightening the mood than enjoying it.  If that makes sense, I sometimes don't make much sense, lol.  Dunno how well I'll pull it off, but it remains to be seen, worth a shot!  Still all stuff I'm trying to figure out as I go along.  I'm an amateur for a reason, lol  The next page (which was supposed to have been posted at the same time as this, but wasn't quite finished as I was way behind) has some dialogue pointing out that the Seekers aren't actually dead, just out of commission.  Might have use for them down to road, lol.  Next page actually goes up in a few minutes from now

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Spikeprime In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-19 07:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I look forward to the thing being put up.

I've got a similar situation with my own TF comics, still trying to figure out the styling and how to demonstrate that kind of scale, though I've gotta admit you'r doing better than I am in having a distinct, interesting style for these comics

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XianiMoon In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 10:16:59 +0000 UTC]

"Wheeljack's sky spies" O.O
OMM Wheeljack you adorable genius!!! \(^.^)/ *fangirling*
Though I'm a Decepticon, there are some Autobots who I consider *whispers* awesome... V.V
And I'm really happy you've done another page! Thank you for that, it makes my spark glow with joy! :3

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KrisSmithDW In reply to XianiMoon [2013-10-13 19:54:39 +0000 UTC]

lol oh yes, Wheeljack builds ALL TEH GEAR

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kimmylia In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 10:13:42 +0000 UTC]

yes a next panel looking good as Always, great artwork

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KrisSmithDW In reply to kimmylia [2013-10-13 19:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Thankya!

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KaijuDuke In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 09:26:35 +0000 UTC]

awww yeah, great page! The artwork continues to impress and the dialogue seems natural and gives much needed life and personality to the characters :3

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KrisSmithDW In reply to KaijuDuke [2013-10-13 19:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Glad ya like the dialogue, I was rewatching season 1 episodes of G1 and Prime DID have a sense of humour back then

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Triceratonfan4 In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 07:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Another amazing page, Kris. Looking forward to the next one.  


(I can so hear their G1 voices when I read this . Are those the voices you had in mind while writing and drawing this or have you got other ideas as to what they would sound like?)

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Triceratonfan4 [2013-10-13 19:53:20 +0000 UTC]

For the most part, yes  Been rewatching old season 1 eps of G1.  Which is why Prime has the line he as at the end, he DID in fact have a sense of humour back then  More John Wayne than super-serious-all-the-time.  Ironhide is a like a slightly more grizzled version of his G1 voice, Jazz is the same, Bumblebee is slightly younger version of what he sounded like in G1.

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Triceratonfan4 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-14 05:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.


Yeah, I really liked how Prime was back in G1. (I absolutely adored seeing him playing basketball with Spike and then against his fellow Autobots! Favourite Optimus memories ever.)

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Triceratonfan4 [2013-10-19 01:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Same here, I loved all that stupid stuff XD

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Spiritstrike91 In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 06:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Wheeljack's Sky Spies? Hehe, getting down to inventing without having them blowing up in his face, eh?

Of course not, Jazz! Since Ironhide is reckless, he's prone to jumping headfirst into scrap without thinking. Think he'll have Movieverse Ironhide's legendary trigger-happiness or HIS cannons? Oh that would be badass.

Jazz, your quirky smile is just kawaii! Look that face! You cannot resist the charm.

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Spiritstrike91 [2013-10-13 18:47:38 +0000 UTC]

The prototypes would have blown up in his face


There might be a reference to the movie cannons, but for the most part Ironhide has a big ass combat shotgun and combat knife.  He is very impulsive and quick to get in a fight fo sho.

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Spiritstrike91 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-14 05:15:04 +0000 UTC]

A shotgun for the zombie apocalypse! I bet he has a boner for murder too. *coughsSargecough*

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Spiritstrike91 [2013-10-16 05:17:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL XDD

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Spiritstrike91 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-16 05:22:14 +0000 UTC]

What? He's red, he's got a southern accent, and he has a shotgun. Therefor, he's Sarge from RvB, only his plans don't involve killing Grif or whoever is orange in your comic.

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KrisSmithDW In reply to Spiritstrike91 [2013-10-19 01:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Huffer maybe?  He's borderline yellow/orange?

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Spiritstrike91 In reply to KrisSmithDW [2013-10-19 01:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, if that joke appeared in your comic, I will piss myself laughing.

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MrWonderWorks In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 05:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Well I Can't For The AutoBots' Ark Debut!

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KrisSmithDW In reply to MrWonderWorks [2013-10-13 07:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Coming up very very soon

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