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Published: 2014-07-22 15:28:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 857; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Still practising design and presentation for my portfolio. Some insect or insectoid creatures. Tell me what you think about the design and presentation.Related content
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Kritzlof In reply to Rheic-ocean [2014-07-22 19:14:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm glad you do!
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Wraeclast [2014-07-22 16:13:04 +0000 UTC]
In my opinion, I think grounding your concepts will help bring everything together. Added some type of cast shadow as well as an occlusion shadow (I've noticed you add cast shadows occasionally, but rarely occlusion shadows, which is the one that really grounds the object). Overall I really like seeing all the experimenting with the concepts layout/design. Good work!
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Rheic-ocean In reply to Wraeclast [2014-07-22 18:42:58 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to butt in, but could you tell me what occlusion and cast shadows are? They sound pretty important and I'm trying to learn all I can.
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Wraeclast In reply to Rheic-ocean [2014-07-22 18:50:05 +0000 UTC]
There the shadows that are the very darkest, they aren't very noticeable, but there the ones that make a figure/object feel grounded. For example put your hand flat on your table, the occlusion shadow is the dark shadow that is made between your hand and the table. Hope it helps some ^^
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Rheic-ocean In reply to Wraeclast [2014-07-22 20:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Right thanks that helps loads. Cheers.
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Wraeclast In reply to Rheic-ocean [2014-07-22 21:05:52 +0000 UTC]
No problem, glad I could help ^^
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Kritzlof In reply to Wraeclast [2014-07-22 18:27:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the critique, I'll try to think of that
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Wraeclast In reply to Kritzlof [2014-07-22 18:29:19 +0000 UTC]
No problem, can't wait to see more work, its nice seeing you improve ^^
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Kritzlof In reply to Wraeclast [2014-07-22 18:38:07 +0000 UTC]
Made a quick fix and added some shadow under them. It really helped, thanks! I'm glad you like it
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Andermatron [2014-07-22 15:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Now this is really cool! I think adding the extra details was a good idea, it certainly adds more life to the picture as a whole, without overshadowing the actual characters. Really well done
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Kritzlof In reply to Andermatron [2014-07-22 18:28:43 +0000 UTC]
That's great to hear, thank you!
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