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“Lo mejor será que actúes como si hubiera sido un sueño Calabaza, no me gustaría que nuestra rutina se arruinara… al menos aún no.” Shego observaba desde el exterior de la habitación de Kim.Saltó del árbol en el que se encontraba y comenzó a caminar de regreso a su escondite. “Aún es muy pronto… para que sepas cómo me siento en verdad… respecto a ti.”
Mientras tanto Kim Possible aún seguía observando su mano, pero aún así cerró los ojos y una sonrisa se formó en su rostro. “Ahora lo veo… Shego muchas gracias.”
Detuvo sus pasos cuando sintió un fuerte palpitar en su pecho, sin pensarlo colocó su mano sobre su corazón y sin que se diera cuenta un leve sonrojo se formó en sus mejillas. “Qué fue…”
Aún cuando están en lados opuestos, sus corazones las acercan cada pelea un poco más, sin importar los errores que puedan cometer, al final lo que sienten la una por la otra puede traspasar cualquier línea dibujada por el hombre
¿Y? ¿Les gustó? No temas decirme lo que piensan
PS: ¿Me ayudan con unos
"You'd better act like it was just a dream Pumpkin, I’d not like to ruin our routine... at least not yet." Shego watched from outside Kim's room.
She jumped from the tree where she was and started walking back to her hideout. "...It’s too early for you to know how I really feel... about you."
Meanwhile Kim Possible was still watching her hand but she shut her eyes and a smile formed on her face. "Now I see... thanks a lot Shego."
She stopped her steps when she felt a strong beat in her chest, without thinking she placed her hand on her heart and without realizing it a slight blush formed on her cheeks. "The hell was..."
Even when they are on opposite sides, their hearts close them a little more in each fight, no matter what mistakes they may commit, in the end what they feel for one another can cross any lines drawn by the men
So? You liked? Fear not to tell me what you think
PS: Will you help me with some
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Comments: 36
Krystal-of-Nol In reply to hadeswife [2012-04-06 21:34:08 +0000 UTC]
You mean a forgiveness 05? sorry but no.
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to shortsista [2011-05-12 17:17:04 +0000 UTC]
Muchas gracias, glad you like it
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MisfitMeghan [2010-12-09 01:36:45 +0000 UTC]
D: You're a great artist and you have potential in your writing, even if you don't do fullpage comics like this, would you consider writing a fanfic and adding pics to it every now and then? I'm sure you could go far with this story!!
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to MisfitMeghan [2010-12-10 22:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and trust me, it what I'm trying to do now with 'Uncertain Future'
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Levia-the-Dragon [2010-07-29 07:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Awww, and Shego gets a little lingering surprise...
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to Redtor [2010-07-23 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Gracias compatriota que bueno el icono
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ebrithil-skulblaka [2010-06-01 10:51:46 +0000 UTC]
I think I kind of get it but I have a habit of not being able to understand the more simple things. w00t for short fic!!!! *does yay dance*
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to ebrithil-skulblaka [2010-06-01 15:24:42 +0000 UTC]
That's ok, it's not like my idea could be the only one, maybe I have one you have other or it could be the same, so not worry about it
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to wolftrap2334 [2010-06-01 15:23:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, glad you like it
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wolftrap2334 In reply to Krystal-of-Nol [2010-06-02 04:14:46 +0000 UTC]
YOU Sould make a ittle story
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to wolftrap2334 [2010-06-02 05:34:29 +0000 UTC]
Of course, when I'm not so much busy maybe in a couple of weeks
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wolftrap2334 In reply to Krystal-of-Nol [2010-06-02 23:55:58 +0000 UTC]
ah ok being busy are a pain
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to Rose829 [2010-06-01 15:21:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks glad to read that
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ili137 [2010-05-30 18:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Great work my friend
!! .. Gran trabajo de mi amigo
!! .. sry not soo good with spanish
..
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to ili137 [2010-05-30 21:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, it's ok I can read english but thanks
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Lady-Poison-Dreams [2010-05-29 03:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Jejejeje q te puedo decir, demasiado buena la historia y estaré esperando los mini Fics... lo único q no me convenció fue el último "cuadro" con las caras de ellas dos, pienso q faltó algo... no sé al de un fondo o unas palabras finales... pero son detalles
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Krystal-of-Nol In reply to Lady-Poison-Dreams [2010-05-29 21:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Gracias, bueno podrían haber unas palabras finales, pero se supone que estos comics son solo dibujos quizás en el fic ponga algo como para cerrar: una frase épica!
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