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upd 17-th feb: translation found.This idea came after i had read one poetry by Esenin... "The fox" - "Лисица" .
I saw a fox while reading this. Little bleeding and dying fox one step to its home... I was really impressed. After reading that, i`ve just started to draw this!
-_- to much forest last time, eh? Maybe i just missing forests?
...This is the first time i drew snow with a tablet... Is it looking like a snow or not?
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Лисица:
На раздробленной ноге приковыляла,
У норы свернулася в кольцо.
Тонкой прошвой кровь отмежевала
На снегу дремучее лицо.
Ей все бластился в колючем дыме выстрел,
Колыхалася в глазах лесная топь.
Из кустов косматый ветер взбыстрил
И рассыпал звонистую дробь.
Как желна, над нею мгла металась,
Мокрый вечер липок был и ал.
Голова тревожно подымалась,
И язык на ране застывал.
Желтый хвост упал в метель пожаром,
На губах - как прелая морковь...
Пахло инеем и глиняным угаром,
А в ощур сочилась тихо кровь.
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Translation. I can`t make it with rhymes or without mistakes, please forgive me
On crushed paws she hobbles to her burrow,
And rolls herself up into a ball near it...
As fine blood was streaming
From opaque face to glowing snow.
Echoes still the shot in prickly air,
Still sways that forest`s morass before her eyes.
From undergrowth, the wind has quickened
And strewed sonorous taps...
Like a black bird the darkness overcasts her,
That wet evening has become sticky red...
Head restlessly moves up,
Tongue pauses on her wound
Yellow tail like fire has fallen into snow,
The feeling of the rot in her mouth...
Taste the smell of hoarfrost, clay...
Noiseless blood was streaming down.
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Poetry by S. Esenin, art is mine, translation by me and ~AkaTsukiSakuya
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Comments: 37
fluffycrystal99 [2010-10-17 02:52:47 +0000 UTC]
its so close please make it !!!!! (starts crying harder)
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Ksantor [2010-08-03 22:06:04 +0000 UTC]
Атмосферный рисунок..
Открытие в стихотворениях Есенина для меня.
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Nekothedeviant [2010-03-24 21:31:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, amazing!
I just love it!
I think you really catched the athmosphere
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mahoro-ando [2010-02-28 12:42:30 +0000 UTC]
this is very lovely lol this is all i could understand of the poem
Fox:
In a fractured leg prikovylyala,
Nora curled into a ring.
Keen proshvoy blood dissociated
On the face of the dense snow.
It all blasts in the prickly smoke shot
Swayed in the eyes of the forest swamp.
From the bushes hairy wind vzbystril
And scattered zvonistuyu fraction.
How Jelnov, over her haze tossed
Wet night was lindens and al.
Head was rising alarmingly,
And the language on the wound froze.
Yellow tail fell in blizzard fire
On the lips - as carrots Apr ...
Smelled frost and clay fumes,
And oschur blood trickled softly.
lol XD
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ksenyan In reply to mahoro-ando [2010-03-01 20:00:28 +0000 UTC]
That`s why i tried to write translation of it x)
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mahoro-ando In reply to ksenyan [2010-04-14 09:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Lol You did a good job at least XD
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ComradeK [2010-01-07 04:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Again, an interesting style, and with a sad little bit of story behind it.
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Yuki6 [2010-01-02 12:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Nice, oryginal character of job ^^. interesting style of drawing
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AkaTsukiSakuya [2009-10-08 19:49:46 +0000 UTC]
I can't very well translate, as my mind tends to wander and the tense changes, but I think this may be slightly more understandable. I'll try to fix it better when I'm alert
On crushed paws she hobbles to her burrow,
And rolls herself up into a ball near it...
As fine blood was streaming
From opaque face to glowing snow.
Echoes still the shot in prickly air,
Still sways that forest`s morass before her eyes.
From undergrowth, the wind has quickened
And strewed sonorous taps...
Like a black bird the darkness overcasts her,
That wet evening has become sticky red...
Head restlessly moves up,
Tongue pauses on her wound
Yellow tail like fire has fallen into snow,
The feeling of the rot in her mouth...
Taste the smell of hoarfrost, clay...
Noiseless blood was streaming down.
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Kayago-the-demon [2008-12-08 16:57:09 +0000 UTC]
This is a lovely piece and the background only brings out the beauty in it that much more. Nice work.
Is there a place that has the poem in English by chance?
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ksenyan In reply to Kayago-the-demon [2008-12-13 11:19:14 +0000 UTC]
no i didn`t find this on english =\
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LinaDioskur [2008-12-04 07:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Зверь крупноват для лисицы, те более тонки. А рисунок нравится ^^. Природа вышла красиво и поэтично.
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Enaya-TheWhiteWolfen [2008-12-04 03:23:34 +0000 UTC]
Мне почему - то вспомнился рассказ "Домино"
^_^ Очень красивый рисунок
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Sidgi In reply to Enaya-TheWhiteWolfen [2008-12-04 19:24:04 +0000 UTC]
Нууу...Домино более счастливо закончился.. х_Х И живучий хад..)
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