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Maleperduis Military Base
Zootopia Outskirts
Noon
The black uniform was pressed into crisp lines that fell over his body like a second coat of fur, brass reflecting the sheen of studios polishing that made General Valter proud of whichever soldier had done the job for him this time. One paw moved to adjust his various ribbons and medals proudly as he examined himself in the mirror with a practiced eye. One finger-pad ran over the bridge of his muzzle, checking to make sure that the artificial touch up to his fur coloring was impossible to detect before he tilted it this way and that. A smile that was as warm and charming as any he had ever managed parted his aged muzzle at the male in the mirror, whiskers lifting as he showed just the right amount of bleached white canines. The vanity was not without reason. He had fought his wars, had kept the peace in Zootopia for more than two decades now. And he had done so with the respect of his men, a mind for tactics, and looks that managed to charm even the unreachable Administrator.
It had been years since the last time she had visited his office. Years since she had convinced him, with both pleasure and logic, that she was the right vixen to lead Zootopia into a new golden age. The pleasure had been a perk and a condition, though her reaction to his advances had been anything but reluctant. All thoughts of her giving her body to him simply to gain his help had been washed away under the heat of her passion, the taste of her mouth when she had taken the lead and guided him towards his own desk. The memory of that evening of passion remained, as clear to him as the scent of her fur and the sound of her desire when she had called his name with her claws raking down his back. They had both been younger then, though she more so, and in the following days he found that her thirst for power easily overcame her thirst for pleasure.
This was one reason that he was still pleasantly surprised by her acceptance of his invitation to share a meal and relive the pleasures of the past. Turning back to his desk, he ran the conversation over in his mind again to savor the subtle nuance of seduction. The thought did occur to him that she knew he was responsible for the attempt on the lawyer’s life, something that he had been sure would please her. And from her reaction, and her invitation, he had been correct. The grin that crawled up his muzzle when he realized that the advice he had been given from their mutual friend had been genuine was delighted. He would have to repay this favor and repay it soon.
The soft tone of alert drew his attention from his thoughts to the monitor attached to the surface of his wide and elaborate desk, drawing deep orange eyes to the screen as it flared to life. Leaning forward, the leather of his chair creaking slightly in the silence, he tapped Incoming Message on the screen. The slightly annoyed expression, as he steeled himself to dismiss almost any emergency rather than disappoint his dear Administrator, relaxed into a smile when he saw the golden crest slowly rotate on the screen. As a member of the Council, the crest was a familiar if uncommon sight and in this situation a welcome one. Assuming that Kyubi was letting him know that she was on her way, he lifted his paw again and placed his pad against the screen to allow it to read his pad print.
When the image of the fox like crest remained unchanged, he frowned slightly in annoyance and tried again. Again, it didn’t clear to show him the message so he punched the button on his desk, dialing for his adjutant. Because the line was direct and always ready to be opened, he waited until the connection clicked through before he spoke without waiting for a greeting.
“Captain, I have a very important communique coming through and the screen is not responding. I need someone here to fix it now. Redirect the message to my phone if possible.”
The lack of response was unusual, so he raised his finger from the button and pressed again to ensure that the connection had been made. Ears twitching slightly, realizing that he was hearing the normal background noise from the other side of the line, he almost spoke again. His attention was drawn away from the monitor, however, by the very slight sound of something sliding down the wall outside of his door. Frowning, as it wasn’t the first time he had caught one of the honor guard sitting down on the job, he spared the screen one last glance before he stood from his desk. It figured, he decided as strong strides carried him to the door to discipline the lazy solider on his way to find out why his adjutant wasn’t responding. Things always managed to go wrong when he needed them to go perfectly…
His train of thought was cut off when he opened the door, only to have it abruptly stop. The jarring impact caused pain when his fingers slipped over the knob, furthering his annoyance when he realized that the door had only opened a few inches. It also set off alarms in his mind, sharpening his senses as he slowly released the handle and stared at the crack in the door. Eyes that were no less sharp than they had been in his youth narrowed when he saw the almost invisible wires that held the door closed. They were needle thin and translucent, something that could easily have been missed in a moment of panic for a lesser mammal.
He was not a lesser mammal.
There were dozens of them at a quick count and, from the rigid hold of the door when he had tried to open it, he doubted that they would budge. He was trapped in his own office, on his own base. The idea that it could be the ever-growing resistance was first to enter his mind but was quickly dismissed as he turned and calmly walked back to his desk without a word. Slowly, calmly opening the top drawer as his eyes made a quick scan of the room, he retrieved the holster that held his sidearm before he returned his attention to his desk. Orange eyes dropped to the still spinning crest of The Administrator on his monitor and paused there when the rotation came to a stop as the eyes faced him.
A sudden flicker of the screen, followed by warping of the image, came just as the lights in his office did the same. All of them pulsed, almost quivering before blinking out. Even the buttons on his desk and the face of the digital clock on the far wall grew dark. There was no sound to it, beyond the sudden silence that fell when the almost unheard hum of the lights went quiet. With his shades drawn in preparation for his pleasant afternoon of conversation and sex with a beautiful vixen, the darkness was almost complete before the screen flared to life again.
The golden crest was gone, the color drained from it to leave a bone white mimic in its place which began a single slow rotation before it, too, came to a stop facing him. The red of what served for the eyes flared brighter, causing the fur on the back of his neck to stand on end as he drew the shining chrome weapon free to savor the familiar weight in his paw. The feeling of dread was one that he had not experienced in years of command and politics, but he welcomed it like an old friend. There was a reason he held the seat he did. There was a reason for every medal and ribbon on his chest, every bar on his collar, and every scar on his flesh. Even with the whispers of rumor, warnings that red eyes meant death, he had no intention of bowing down or cowering.
A ghost of motion in the corner of his eyes was all he needed to level the gun on the face of one wall, his paws as steady now as they had been the last time he had marched the fields himself. Both eyes open down the sights and ears erect, he did a slow sweep of the room as he stepped out from behind his desk. Another ghost of motion came, causing him to swing his aim towards the door, where he found that the lights in the hall had almost been put out. Tension tightened his gut. The complete lack of sound even though he knew he was seeing motion was disorienting. He had never known anything to move in such perfect silence that it couldn’t be heard in a soundless, dark room. Frustration and the inkling of fear that started to squeeze through his calm had him turning the weapon at the next motion. The flash and roar of the single shot he fired filled the room with light for less than a second, but it was enough for him to see… something. A shape, a figure. And when the black descended again, the glow of luminescent red eyes less than a foot from the barrel of his gun.
Red eyes. It was not only referring to the crest, then.
“Yurei.”
Even as the word escaped his lips in a bare whisper, he leveled the barrel between the eyes only to have them vanish as he pulled the trigger again. The grip of a paw on his wrist was strong, fast, and ruthless as it twisted the weapon from his grasp before he could react, sending it sliding across the carpet. He swung out with one paw, his claws curled in the hopes of drawing blood, but there was nothing there to receive the blow. The snarl was mostly one of surprise when the scruff of his neck was gripped, two paws holding him secure as the backs of his knees were kicked out. The hold on his scruff kept him upright when he crashed to his knees painfully, yelping sharply as his head was drawn back and his feet were pinned by the weight of his assassin. Any attempt to resist was lost when he saw the glimmer of the long knife slide towards his throat, felt the bite of pain when it slid into his neck just below his muzzle.
Then there was a moment of stillness. He expected death, waited for the warm spill of blood to run through his fur and saturate his perfectly prepared uniform with crimson, but that moment didn’t come. The grip on the back of his neck was still firm as he stared at the ceiling without moving, finding it difficult to breathe. When he tried to speak, to question the one who now had him at their mercy, nothing more than a whine of air escaped him. It wasn’t until he felt the brush of a muzzle near the base of his ear that he felt real fear. The voice was soft, low and quiet, but cold enough to make the air around him take on an icy feel.
“Your vocal cords have been severed. My blade is sharp, so you will not bleed until I decide it is time. Struggle, try to turn your head, and you will cut your own throat.”
To test the truth of the words was to risk his own life, though he had little doubt in them. Panic tried to rise, but he ruthlessly shoved it back as he tried to think of some way to survive. No thoughts of the next day, or the next week. Just to survive the next minute would be a triumph, even if a painful one.
Why, Kyubi?
As if to answer his silent plea for answers, the voice spoke.
“Your mistake was thinking that you were her equal when you were little more than a tool,” the voice whispered, the closeness of the mouth to his ear almost intimate. In a way, it was. There were few more intimate acts than ending the life of another.
“She never wanted you.”
The last words struck him in his final moment. There was a cold anger behind them but also a hint of what might have been a longing for confirmation. As if his killer as trying to assure himself of the truth behind them even as the blade slid smoothly and effortlessly through the flesh of his throat, slicing it open until the full blade was able to slide free of the gaping wound left behind.
Blood choked him as his heart tried in vain to provide the blood flow his brain had suddenly been denied, quickening in his death as soupy crimson spilled through the fingers that clutched at the wound in vain. The weak gurgle was all he managed when he was freed, the weight lifted from his back and the paw releasing his scruff as his lungs filled with blood. He quickly stumbled to his feet, spinning around so suddenly the droplets of thick crimson life rained over the surface of his desk. The cold of the voice was replaced with a much deeper cold that crept quickly over his body, the dark of the room growing darker as bright orange eyes started to dim. General Valter struggled in vain to make their last vision the face of his assassin, his head turning with agonizing slowness as he took a few weak steps towards his desk. Yet even as he reached it, the paw placed on the surface to support himself leaving a bloody print, he was denied even that when he saw that the dark office was as empty as it had seemed moments before. Blackness started to cloud his vision - a blackness that in his vanity he had never prepared himself to meet - as he used the last of his strength to sketch in the surface of the desk in his own blood.
One of the most powerful mammals in Zootopia, General Nathanial Reinhart Valter, slumped forward over the desk as his final breath gurgled free from his muzzle, never knowing if his last attempt to be heard was successful.
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“We have vague reports of some sort of small scale attack at Maleperduis military base,” the perfectly white vixen said into her microphone, sharp blue eyes seeming to meet the eyes of every viewer watching the news cast. Well behind her in the distance the air-base loomed across the night sky in all its intimidating majesty, marred by the flashing of emergency lights and the barricades that had been thrown into place to keep the camera from getting too close. “Though our sources tell us that there was only one fatality, the base remains on high alert. There has been no statement from the ZAF or the Council on what took place.”
Nick remembered it had not so long ago that he had considered looking up the arctic vixen for the sake of distracting himself from the idea of helping a bunny get herself killed. Having watched multiple reports and come into close enough contact with her to be questioned, he knew that it would have been a mistake. She was the sort who needed answers and was very good at finding them, something that was apparent in this single report. She was the only reporter on the scene, in what otherwise would have been a very hushed affair. Who her sources were, he could only guess, but the fact that she had been the first on scene for almost every major event of the last year did give him some clue. Whether or not it would become an issue in the future depended on how interested she was in Judy. Or him.
Muting the TV when the report ended with a promise of more information as the story progressed, he leaned forward to look down at his phone for a long moment.
From the desk of The Administrator
Your results are excellent Nicholas.
He considered the message and the golden crest that marked the header of the message in silence before he slid his paw up to the Delete icon. Once he was sure that the message was gone, he returned his attention to the television.
Council Member, General Valter, believed dead.
He didn’t bother to unmute the TV as the vixen returned, this time interviewing a large brown wolf in a ZAF uniform with other reporters who had managed to arrive in time for what might be the only unofficial statement. Knowing that they would be given nothing of substance beyond what they already knew was a given, largely because Nick knew there would be no evidence for them to sort through. Nothing beyond a dead body and a lot of questions, anyway.
His ears twitched slightly when the sound of a folder being slapped onto another folder from the bedroom was followed by the creak of bedsprings. She had not left the bedroom for most of the day, pouring over the files that Bogo had delivered as promised, rummaging through her notes, coming out once to grab a sandwich and talking on her phone a few times. Something told him that she had been avoiding him, an idea that was perfectly understandable given his behavior the day before. Her father had not annoyed him so much. The blatant dislike of foxes was just another part of being a fox. But hearing her mother even imply the belief that she would have to whore herself for his protection had increased passive disinterest to anger. Anger that led him to squash the idea that he would want sex as a form of payment before it was able to root itself firmly in her mind. A move that he had decided was necessary to ease the growing tension he had seen in her every time he was close to her.
What he had not planned for had been the quick and obvious rise of arousal in her scent when he had broached the subject or his own sharp reaction to it. Maybe it was because bunnies lacked the heightened sense of smell, but the rush of that sweetly feminine scent had struck him like a very soft blow to the libido. When he had seen how she struggled not to react to how close they had been in that moment, the desire to taste even the slightest bit of her had been overwhelming. So overwhelming that he’d nipped her ear and almost failed to resist the desire to do more when the arch of her back and the hitch of her breath had told everything male about him that she wanted him.
That had passed. A temporary insanity on both their parts, one that would not rise again so long as neither of them pressed the issue…
Which might have been a simplification, as he felt a fresh jolt to his system when she walked out of the bedroom wearing her night shirt and no pants covering toned, gray legs. Not that she seemed to notice or even care as she walked into the kitchen area without a glance in his direction and pulled open the mini fridge. Taking a moment to blink away the surprise as she stood beside it before deciding on the carton of celery juice, he considered the way she moved as she set the carton on the counter. Her mind was clearly still in motion from the far off look in her eyes and the fact that she paused every few seconds to tick her ears as if running through a mental checklist. It was when she reached into the cabinet above her head for a glass that the night shirt slid up her hips. Not far enough for the fabric to pull over her tail and uncover the curves of her rear, but enough for him to catch the barest hint of white panties before she plucked a glass from the shelf and turned to pour.
What concerned him was the fact that he had been hoping to see more and the fact that when she took the first drink she watched him from the corner of her eye.
She knows I’m watching. Wants me to see her. Teasing? A test? Curiosity?
“You could dress yourself,” he said, mimicking her words while keeping his tone lightly sarcastic. He didn’t take his eyes off her, however. Simply watched when she turned and leaned her hips back against the counter with the glass in her paw and her ears perked in his direction.
“I could say the same for you. Again,” she commented, making a broad gesture to the fact that his shirt was unbuttoned with the sleeves rolled up his arms even as he sat in the middle of her office space.
“I can’t be expected to wear a suit all day waiting for you, Carrots,” he replied, his muzzle curving into a toothy smirk as he stood, tail swaying noticeably behind him as he walked towards the kitchenette and her. “Unless you would rather I do. In which case, I am going to insist that you put some pants on. Just to be fair.”
She didn’t move away or even move to the side when he came closer to her. To her credit, simply scorched her rear over a bit on the counter when he reached for the mini-fridge himself. He would need more time to decide if she was being brave or if she had reached a point where she understood that he wasn’t going to eat her. Or ravish her. “If we’re going to be living and working here, I don’t see any reason we both can’t be comfortable,” she replied, giving a slight shrug when he pulled a bottle of soda from the fridge and turned to lean against the counter beside her. “Though I still don’t understand this open-door policy of yours. It’s not as though these walls are so thick that you wouldn’t hear me cry out.”
“Hm,” was his only reply for a moment as he considered exactly how comfortable they would really be in such close quarters when she made unintentional comments like that. Then he turned his attention to the small flat screen on the wall. The scene playing across the screen was of multiple trucks, all carrying the markings of military Criminal Investigation Command, blew past the reporter blockade on their way into the base. “The tiger that tried to kill you on the streets was a decently skilled fighter. Probably military trained. He was also a blunt attempt by someone who believed that you would be an easy target. That is to say, they did not expect you to have proper protection if any at all. This is the result.”
He motioned with one paw towards the TV, where her gaze lingered when she saw the words that still scrolled slowly by. He saw the frown form when she stepped away from the counter, leaving the glass behind as she walked over to pick up the remote. She looked vulnerable when she unmuted the report, wearing a light blue night shirt and a look of concerned concentration on her face.
“We have confirmation from military sources that Council Member Valter has been killed,” the vixen was saying, that slight edge of excitement in a tone that she tried to keep somber. “We are not being given any further information at this time but as you can see from the CID vehicles that passed by only moments ago, it seems likely that foul play was involved.”
“Now, everyone knows you’re being protected,” he said, drawing her gaze to him when he took the remote and muted the report again. “It is hard to cry out when your muzzle is taped shut or they slide a knife across your throat before you see their face.”
“Is that what happened there?” she asked and he was glad to see that she didn’t seem disturbed by his words so much as she was focused on the drifting subject.
“I don’t know what happened there,” he admitted, even if he could harbor more than a few guesses. “But killing him with no other fatalities? That is why the doors stay open. My ears may not be as sharp as yours, but your average mammal will easily dismiss subtle sounds. Mental filters that some have been trained to understand and can use to mask their movement as background noise.”
“Like this ‘Yurei?’” she asked, her ears quivering slightly as she glanced at the screen before she returned her eyes to him with a slight tip of her head. “Did they do this?”
“Hm,” he grunted, scratching the side of his muzzle as he considered the idea before lifting his shoulders in a slow shrug. “I can’t say for certain because I don’t know who Yurei is. But given then rumors, it is possible.”
“So, the door stays open,” she concluded for herself, keeping her eyes locked on his until he nodded. When she forced her attention away from him, she looked back at the screen. “Do you think that has anything to do with me? Do you think I caused it? You mentioned the tiger…”
Her voice softened a bit, making it impossible not to have her aversion to killing come to mind. Though this time, her words were not an attempt to make him see her side of things. It was simply concern on her part. Concern that she was the cause of more death in the city. More death that had never been her intention. And while a part of him was tempted to remind her that being here was her choice, he remembered that he didn’t want to see the city itself drag her down until she was just one more broken product of The Foxes Den.
“It may have something to do with you,” he replied, setting the remote down before he reached down to place one paw on her shoulder. When she looked up at him with haunted eyes, he was almost stunned by how small and soft she seemed without her suit and hard-nosed attitude. “We can’t be sure of that yet. But that doesn’t mean you caused it.”
“If I had not come to Zootopia, possibly two might not be dead,” she amended, shaking her head slightly even if she didn’t move away. “I can’t ignore that.”
“No, you can’t,” he agreed, dropping his paw away before his perception of her vulnerability made him want to pull her closer. “But if you had not come, Otterton would simply rot in prison. If you had not come back, the tiger who tried to kill you would have been sent to kill someone else. Weaselton wouldn’t have come to your door, but he would have harassed other mammals because that’s what he does.”
She searched his face, maybe trying to decide if this was another one of his ‘You should run while you can’ speeches. “I’m the flame.”
“And the moths are circling,” he agreed, walking to the counter to retrieve her glass of celery juice and his bottle. Once she accepted it when he returned, not taking her eyes off him, he continued, “You didn’t create this city or the rot that eats it from the inside out. Your presence has caused a change in focus for many. Caused them to expose themselves as they try to reach this new… Light among them.”
“That’s all very dramatic,” she mumbled, a small smile crossing her muzzle as she raised her glass for a small sip to hide it.
“Your first day in the city was nothing if not dramatic, Carrots,” he replied, opening his own drink and raising it slightly towards her. “Just be ready. The longer you stay, the darker corners you will expose. And the darker the corner, the bigger the moth.”
Nick wondered a moment later, when the half-dressed bunny returned to her room and her work, if that wasn’t exactly why she had been invited to the city, to begin with.
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Comments: 51
EliteBULLDOG [2017-05-22 21:39:20 +0000 UTC]
So is that just a title or is this really the end of the story???
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Kulkum In reply to EliteBULLDOG [2017-05-22 22:25:48 +0000 UTC]
The comic was posted in two parts. I posted the story in two pieces. The story is far from finished.
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kelleydesu [2017-04-27 06:05:36 +0000 UTC]
Again, you slay me. I am enthused about writing again and it is all your fault. Thank you.
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PINKROSEUTENA6 [2017-04-27 06:03:57 +0000 UTC]
Is that why kyubi sent yurei to kill him cause he he tried to kill Judy so does she support her?
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Koraru-san [2017-04-26 23:40:34 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you wrote this XD
This is getting intense.
Please let Nick and Judy lose their paths again haha
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ProximaCentari [2017-04-26 17:23:07 +0000 UTC]
I suspected her scent was picked up by Nick. Of course the hints about that were as subtle as a sledge hammer. To read what he thought about it was interesting. I wondered why he rooted his teeth on the base of her ear. Now that makes sense. It must have taken serious will power for him to turn away from her.
With the comments about her Dad and Mom, it seems reasonable that he heard her entire conversation with her parents above the white noise of the shower. That's good hearing.
Speculation:
I think he sniffed the liquor to distract himself from her scent and clear his head. He never consumed it right there and may have sipped it later.
I suspect too that she knows about her scent. Without pants covering her, and walking around, her scent is wafting through the small building for Nick's nose. (pheromones anybody?) For what purpose?
. She wants to toy with Nick? Like playing with dynamite.
. She's comfortable with Nick and wants to be comfortable? Possible.
. She's attracted to Nick? Probably, and is teasing him. Many times people set up the situations hoping the other person will act to accommodate and meet half way. She's hoping to find out a little more about how he feels (and the feel of his teeth - she's been thinking about it - it's bugging her.)
But that is all pure speculation for the amusement of Kulkum and TheWyvernsWeaver .
Thanks for the continuation of what is an awesome story.
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PTsvengeance [2017-04-26 08:17:47 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting where this is going. Very unpredictable. Really like the originality of this story!
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PTsvengeance [2017-04-26 08:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Really liking where this story is going! Its not predictable at all! Amazing writing!
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LandsBeyond [2017-04-26 02:45:24 +0000 UTC]
I am so engrossed in this story. Thank god you are still writing it. I would forgo sleep and skip work to binge straight though.
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imafoxylilringirl [2017-04-25 17:43:32 +0000 UTC]
This is uploaded on my "dice roll fanfc reading day". That cracks me up. Eyes and finally adjusted enough to read more than the comic. You and Weaver are in perfect sync as always.
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InsidiousAgent [2017-04-25 17:42:17 +0000 UTC]
Awesome.
This chapter was just quotable line after quotable line.
Well bloody done.
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ReaderNo31142 [2017-04-25 17:22:06 +0000 UTC]
This story is so amazing, sir...
Can't wait for more
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AZREAL258 [2017-04-25 16:19:39 +0000 UTC]
This story is getting amazing I was glued to this screen.
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ShockWulf [2017-04-25 07:21:02 +0000 UTC]
INTRIGUE! SUSPENSE! MORE QUESTIONS!....answers? MAYBE!
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nekoshappiness33 [2017-04-21 15:55:20 +0000 UTC]
I'm dying! The vixen means business! Is he Nick's "Papa" from the last chapter?
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Koraru-san [2017-04-21 02:46:33 +0000 UTC]
The price for believe that you have the same power when you only were a step to reach the top.
A women with power is dangerous, more if the thirst for power is insatiable, but Nathanial you must see this coming since she had sex with you to get what she wanted.
Great chapter Kulkum!!!
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MrFalloutDropout [2017-04-20 05:01:05 +0000 UTC]
Dang....awesome Kulkum...absolutely fantastic!
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ReaderNo31142 [2017-04-19 23:50:42 +0000 UTC]
Great new chapter (well, part of a chapter), sir
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ProximaCentari [2017-04-19 19:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Per Kulkum and Weaver: "Yurei" means "Ghost".
Per Wikipedia (not the best source), from "Kyubi no kitsune" means "Nine Tail Fox", since "Kitsune" means "fox", "Kyubi" mean "Nine"? The Administrator's name is "Nine"?
"Valter" is old Germanic to mean "ruler of the army".
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angelic-rhapsody In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-20 00:06:32 +0000 UTC]
For clarity:
"Yuurei" (幽霊) translates to ghost, spectre, phantom, or other such words along the theme.
"Kyuubi no kistune" (九尾の狐) is indeed the Nine-tailed fox. "Kyuu" means Nine, and "Bi" is Tail. "No" indicates possessive, and "Kitsune," as I'm sure you're already aware, is Fox.
The Administrator's name, therefore, would be "Ninetails."
As for the rest of the information you provided, I had no idea about any of that. That's really cool. Thanks for sharing!
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ProximaCentari In reply to angelic-rhapsody [2017-04-20 02:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the clarity! I just looked stuff up on Bing and Google. Hence, all the question marks on what I posted.
And thank you for the brief lesson in Japanese.
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Daee17 [2017-04-19 14:27:12 +0000 UTC]
I...I'm a bit conflicted. I don't know if you were going for this, but I feel sorry for Nathaniel...
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ProximaCentari [2017-04-19 12:50:10 +0000 UTC]
From Wikipedia:
Maleperduis, also spelled Malperdy, is Reynard the Fox's principal hideaway in the medieval tales of this figure of legend. The name of the castle is most likely an old misspelling of the French word "Millepertuis", meaning "St. John's Wort", which was considered a sacred plant during the days the Reynard cycle was first written.
So...
St. John's Wort Military Base.
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angelic-rhapsody [2017-04-19 12:46:24 +0000 UTC]
"...brass reflecting the sheen of studios polishing..."
"...studios polishing..."
Studios: Plural of Studio
Studious: Showing great care or attention
Thought I'd mention.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-04-19 12:44:05 +0000 UTC]
I noticed that too. I suspect it's a key point. Perhaps Nick is part of that resistance?
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-19 19:03:44 +0000 UTC]
doubt it, so far it's looks like Judy's speech made Nick fight for something. What do we know it's that "yurei" isn't a name given to Nick's proliferics skills but rather a special killer team created to assasin and destroy any threat to the administrator. Another huge thing it's that i think "Mother" it's the subjective title given to the Yurei group owner, so the administrator is the "Mother" of this special squad.
Who then is the "Father" that Nick spoke off at the previous chapter? another "creator"? perhaps the one who instructed them with all the skills they develope? meaning that all the other ´Yureis´ are brother and sisters?
As for resistence, whenever a goverment tries to oppress there's always ssome force to push back. Regadless of the subjectiveness or intentions of said goverment. The resistence i'd beliave it's a group of animals who wishes to get the Fox web of lies to the light, how they adress this it's entirely of the social observation. Another thing that entails that it's the fact it's a "Resistence" instead of an "insurgence" so they are probably on the defensive and protecting, a major group of mammals that atack their ideals with force but they is probably an angle to them.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-04-19 20:07:47 +0000 UTC]
I guess I'm trying too hard to fathom Nick's reason to help Judy.
I'm not sure where you got "Mother", but that's an interesting angle.
Is Nick's "Papa" Mr. Big since he said to the Polar Bears (Kevin and Raymond) that he would call them later? Or is it his real Dad?
Why did the Administrator want Valter killed for sending the tiger to kill Judy? She said out loud "Welcome back" when she saw Nick kill the tiger on the news. Could it be she knows Nick personally? Perhaps he was a previous "Yurei" as you indicate and disappeared when he killed one too many innocents?
Another angle based on the previous paragraph (and this is a stretch). Perhaps Nick is the Administrator's son. Papa is his real Dad and neither have anything more to do with "Catheryn" since she's power hungry. "Kyubi" means "Nine", perhaps that's a way to make sure all members of the Council are anonymous and Nine is the leader?
I have no idea if any of this is anywhere near the mark, and it's all my speculation.
Kulkum will reveal it, in his own time.
But speculation is fun.
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-19 21:14:56 +0000 UTC]
theories spice our lives. Could be, but i'd doubt Mr Big could be "papa". That'd be too much of a stretch. Well As for Killing Valter, so far she doesn't like the openess of his strike, too much attention and lack of foresee on the subject, he should've spected to havo some sort of B-plan, but his arrogance was as big as his tail.
The "Welcom back" is what lead me to beliabe Kyabi it's mother, as that's what family says when a family member arrive home. and "Papa" could be some resistence link. So far it's showed that Nick it's interesed on Judy's intention.
Something i just notice it's Catheryn and Judy's both share some parallele thirst for power and control. Catheryn rules with iron paw to control the mases while Judy uses Law as a method to step over others. As Judy herself said, the Otterton case it's only the beginning. Some interesting Paralleles, that Nick might know and be interesed, maybe he sees something on Kyubi on Judy, and maybe Catheryn it's an old flame? Nick is old, 32 or older.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-04-19 22:14:37 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if the Administrator's name is Cathleen (I mistakenly used Catheryn). That was shear speculation based upon "Proud Mask" and the supposition that she's really Nick's Mom in this Canon. And upon further reflection, I'm abandoning speculation in the name and her and Nick's relationship. I believe Nick knows who the identity of the Administrator or at least has worked directly for her. I like your speculation that Nick was once an assassin who has stepped away from that post for reasons that will become clear if I'm correct.
I don't think Judy is after power. She's after justice for a wrongly convicted otter whom she believes was framed.
"Kyubi" I believe is Japanese for "Nine" and is probably a short name for "Kyubi no kitsune" which means "Nine Tail Fox" and that is based upon a Japanese legend. This also ties in Naruto (albeit obscurely). I speculate here that Kyubi is her assumed name, kind of like a rank and "Nine" is the highest rank.
As for "Papa" and Mr. Big. It could be that "Papa" is a term of endearment for the Tundratown "God Father" known as Mr. Big. But again that is shear speculation.
Uhm... 32 years is not old. Far from it in fact.
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-20 11:20:10 +0000 UTC]
It's the more likely as both the tiger called him Yurei and now we have a more enigmatic Yurei, so it could be the "new one" or a task force under the administrators control, and that means that there are more than one "Yurei".
That Nick know at most, he's well versed on his enviroment, how far this goes it's to be seen.
Thirst for power could be reflected differently, to seek justice and fight everything counts as control. You've to admite, the fact that they share such traits makes the story more meaningful for the reader as we've see 2 sides of the coin. Maybe Kyubi at first seeked Fox acceptance on society, but you know what they say. Power corrups anyone.
I'm well aware of the Nine Tails mythology, so it's the fact that they are created as an spirit fox that had been spirit for over 900 years. They are master deciever and mischiefs, able to use leafs to transform apparence and lurk unasuming travelers. Would make it harder to stabllish the table power, besides, that will stretch the lenght of the story, i don't think Kulkum would like to create another 8 more important relevant characters. I'd reckon that Kyubi could be a title given to her for Kyubi no Kitsunes are the most know mythological Foxes.
The "Papa" sounds too casual to adress someone as Mr Big. I'd be surprised if that where the case. Still i found myself in the "Could be someone on the admistritators eye", a spy that works for Nick with a code name to know the towers movements.
In a world of lies, assumptions and shadows? getting to 30 it's a miracle.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-04-20 12:46:23 +0000 UTC]
"Power tends to corrupt, and absolute power corrupts absolutely." - John Dalberg
I like your idea that Papa is a code name for an insider for Nick.
Our entire thread is filled with speculation, that I'm sure gives Kulkum and TheWyvernsWeaver something to chuckle about. I can hear them thinking: "Whoa! This is out there!"
I see you're in Venezuela, I'm sure getting to 30 would be a miracle. Hang in there. I hope your country turns around soon. What is happening there, shouldn't happen anywhere. May a leader who wants freedom for your people rise up.
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TheWyvernsWeaver In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-20 14:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Speculation greatly flatters me, and I am sure Kulkum as well. Carry on. XD
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ProximaCentari In reply to TheWyvernsWeaver [2017-04-20 14:38:37 +0000 UTC]
*snaps a salute* Yes Sir!
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-04-20 13:00:04 +0000 UTC]
That exactly.
Sounds apropiated to contact your insider after a day such as that, he nows has eyes in the ZPD too. HE's someone who wants to know where the snake will plop, so he can position himself just right.
Pfff, As if they don't speculate on the fic they follow, i bet it's as lost as i am for the infection comic made by charlotteray. Or that he's speculating in many other fics that are just blossoming, like the The Masked Fox , Electric Eldritch Eidolon ,Wilde Heart and many others. He is after all, a reader such as you and I. HE's restricted to only his imagination for the stories he doesn't make.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-05-08 17:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've been reading them and enjoying the new canon's.
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-05-08 18:39:19 +0000 UTC]
i've a problem with wild hearts for now, while ia preciate the story plot it's starting t o wane like the conspiracy or embrace it, letting too many OC's start to stole the light of the show and we're being lead into other side stories that we could rather skit.
Also, the whole pull and shove it's kinda getting annoying with Nick and Judy.
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ProximaCentari In reply to Roa-Hate [2017-05-08 19:30:11 +0000 UTC]
I know of what you refer to. For Nick to have some block that makes him incapable of feelings of love seems a bit stretched. Leonard Nimoy in one of his books (I think "I am not Spock") stated that there was a young man that adopted the "Vulcan way" of logic. He became quite popular with the ladies (oddly), but he couldn't break out of it and eventually killed himself.
If Nick, or any one of us, couldn't feel, we would succumb as this young man did.
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Roa-Hate In reply to ProximaCentari [2017-05-09 11:05:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that was pretty much the stupidiest part of the fic, i know the author wanted to make a conflict but if the conflict isn't a conflict on itself then it's pretty much words.
They've never re-adress this and Nick it's obviously in love with the bunnies such it makes all the dialogue moot.
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ProximaCentari [2017-04-19 04:07:42 +0000 UTC]
Something tells me this assassin and Nick will do battle. And it will be over Judy. May-hap Judy will be of assistance (if I know my testicle kicking/taser wielding Judy's)
Something tells me also that Nick and the assassin either know each other, or of each other. We'll see when Nick becomes aware of the symbol Valter drew with his own blood.
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Kulkum In reply to im-in-the-details [2017-04-19 00:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Because this is the first half of the chapter, I will post this chapter on FF.net as soon as both parts are finished (same for A03) Sorry!
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im-in-the-details In reply to Kulkum [2017-04-19 00:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Don't be sorry lol I was just wondering. Kudos for the quick reply, talk about fan service amiright?
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LandsBeyond [2017-04-19 00:14:10 +0000 UTC]
Goosebumps. The hair on the back of my neck is literally standing on end.
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Kulkum In reply to LandsBeyond [2017-04-19 00:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's a high complement.
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