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KumoriNinja08 — DNAngel Dark Side revisited 2 Dark
Published: 2014-07-31 05:35:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 364; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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For Dark Mousey Month~ There was a contest for this too but I think I'm a little late to the party for that ahaha. I plan on adding Daisuke to this later on. Enjoy for now ouoDNAngel and all associated characters are (c) by Yukiru Sugisaki
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wow! I think this is the best work you've done yet! Especially looking at your gallery - your people proportions have gotten AMAZINGLY better to the point where drawings like these really show off your skills!!! I'm happy for you! Your practicing has paid off! You put so much detail into this work, and all the small things pop out in different ways. It's like, the more I look at it, the more it works. It works very well as an artwork, and the subject material makes me very happy as a massive dark fan. I hope you don't mind some critique, but if you don't, then I'd love to share some: I think you should practice face structure more - the eye locations are out of place when compared to the angle of the face, and it makes it look like his eyes are lopsided. His mouth is also not in the middle of his face when compared to the jawline, and because the mouth looks un-strained, it makes it seem like his mouth is dislocated. I have trouble with these things too, but perhaps try drawing different types of faces for practice? Another option is to rotate the image horizontally as you're drawing to glimpse how symmetrical the drawing looks once in a while (that way, even if you don't want symmetry, you can see where you're at with it). The clouds right behind Dark's head also seem odd, because they're so line-ey, it almost looks like thunder is shooting out from Dark's head (lol). The curtains and the moon look great, though. You have so many other great things about this picture that the flaws in it seem disorienting. I can still recognize Dark, though, and I would have to say that this art as a whole and all of the details in it still very much show a solid picture. I love the blue/purple/yellow palette, it gives the drawing a "cool, disheveled and lazy" feeling. So much so that I'd love to be in the place that this drawing takes place. The colors in this part really drew me to this art in the first place. That said, I think you're color choices are slowly getting better, too. I love the outfit you gave him, too - the ideas of the clothes that you draw are really cool (looking closer, there are even wings on the edges!). Nice job!
Also, have you ever read the manga? It's even better then the anime! ^^ I hope you enjoy it if you do decide to read it~ making it past the first two books or so is the challenge, but it keeps getting better after that <3 cheers!
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Ty so much for looking^^ Yeah I have issues with facial and overall body structure. It's something I'm still trying to work out better. Ah, flipping horizontally, now that might actually help. I usually try for an inverse flip, but I think that is what has been throwing off the overall balance of my art lately. Thanks for the tips^^ Yeah, different faces I should try out too. A lot of them are a little stagnate too as of recently. As for the clouds and curtain, I just need to figure out how to draw backgrounds as a whole so they actually look like clouds and curtains etc. But yes, I'll do what I can to improve on all these things. My skills are doing the best they can to catch up to the incredible visions I have in my head afterall QuQ
Ty for the encouragement and constructive critic too^^ I really do appreciate it and hope to learn and improve from here on out^^ <3
-Ninja
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I nearly squeed on seeing this. Excellent job capturing the exceedingly charming handsome phantom thief.ouo
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Heehee ty~ Ofc, I love capturing Dark's essence and do the best I can each time^^
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Welcome.^^
Honestly who wouldn't? I mean he's Dark Mousy voiced by the brilliant Vic, what's there not to like?ouo
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Ikr, just all the liking XD <33
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omg.....*drooling* yaaaaassss!
*ahem* very well done! *squeak!*
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Ahaha glad you like him so~ Ty C:
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Aieeee immediately sent into sea of nostalgia from thisss (aka wandering on youtube to watch clips of it XD )
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Lol my intention for this XD I was actually watching the anime while drawing him too for extra inspiration
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LOL yw for the gorgeous |D //hitt
Tyyy glad you enjoyed >u<
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Ty >u< Was trying to define it a little more this time
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