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KuroHane — Body Structure: Practice 1
Published: 2005-05-15 01:19:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 664; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 24
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Im not good at drawing the whole body of a character, and i discovered that i dont really try to in my drawings xD So i decided that i should start practicing positions and improve!I really need you to criticize this one!
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Hey youre way better than Me, So dont feel bad! Like the eyes too! : )
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Looks great, she's very proportionate too *whistles at her, grinning, imagining.. then coughs* Ehem anyway good luck with practicing ^_^"""
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jajaja *points* perv!!! xDDD
Thankies!
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OMG THAT'S LIKE
GREAT!!
I love the shading and the highlights are very cool
and the outfit ROCKS!! XD
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wanna my comment? i think you did a great job with shading and body proportion. just focus on her hand legs a bit k? ^^
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As far as the proportions it seems well done. The foreshortening of her right forearm is good but need to be bulked up a bit to actually feel three dimensional. Also her left leg seems to bend a tiny bit the wrong way. You need to show that there's a joint in between it. Also the back of that leg can be made to be lat, you don't have to illustrate that there's a bum there, you can just draw straight up without worrying about a curve. Everything else is great, shading and face are all top notch, but could use with a bit more highlights to outline the shape of the breasts and knee joints. Well done and keep up the good work.
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Wow!!1 thanx a lot! U really helped me a lot! ^^
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Most welcome, it's a splendid picture.
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That's really very good! Two little things though. Her right arm wrist-thing is a little flat which makes her arm look a little flat. And her right foot is at a slightly not normal angle. But otherwise, it's really good!!!
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This is awesome, but I agree with the people before me, the legs do seem a bit long, but if that's your style, that's completely fine!
Another thing I notice is that on the arm closest to the screen, the foreshortening on the arm seems just a bit off, I dunno why, but it looks flat to me, but this is a great pencil sketch anyway!
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thanx a lot!!
i'll try to improve all that details! MWAHAHAHA
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i trhink its way cool but seeing as u asked... i think the leg shape is a lil off and the feet are too small. other than that i think it sooks good
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woaaaaa....
se ve bastante bien, me da gusto ke ya tas mostrando personajes propios ñ.ñ....
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el brazo derecho esta algo corto y chico (bueno eso pienso) la postura esta bastante bien pero intanta dar menos lineal los trasos como los de las piernas, ke no parescan tan rectos si no ke se note tienen rodilla >.< .....jejejeje ( a mi no me sale eso todavia pero en ese proseso voy xDDD )
M.....los pies se ven igual muy planos intenta dar dimensiones de zapato de frente o el pie medio volteado ke kede mas natural con el resto del cuerpo ( ke te kedo bastante bien.....) Ahhhhh yo kiero dibujar postuuras asi de naturles >.<....!!!!
ñ.ñ el sompbreado me gusta bastente, muchas felicidades
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jajaja muchas gracias!!! Seguire intentando MWAHAHAHA
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n_____n bieeeen
nos vemos!!!!
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this is a very good picture and you have great potential in your style! good job! ^^
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Greetings.
I can offer a few suggestions:
When drawing full bodies (any art for that matter), always think 3-D. Her right forearm looks flat to me. Simply draw the clothing article on her forearm more round; this will enhance the appearance.
Her lower right leg seems to unnaturally curve. Keep in mind the body's anatomy; bones can't bend. Try straightning her lower right leg and then create the bend in the flexible region of the ankle.
Remember that the shoulder is part of the arm; it isn't glued in one place. It moves with the arm, but not like the arm. I suggest dropping her left shoulder backwards a tiny bit. This is only a minor problem I observe; since you asked for heavy critique, I added it. It looks fine the way it is.
Other than those three things, I think you did an excellent job on the other angles of her body. Great shading too.
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Thanx a lot! 
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This is really nice! The only critique I can give is that her leg thats straight seems a bit too long, other than that this is a great pic! ^^
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jajaja thanx!!
I thought so when i saw the finished drawing xD thanx a lot!
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That looks better than most everything I do, and I do full body all the time...
I have want to curse you but the urge to simply state "Bravo" wins out. Good job!
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Awww... thanx a lot!! jajaja its a relief that the "bravo" won! xD
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