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Published: 2010-02-12 03:01:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Don't say you love me.
Don't call me baby.
Don't call me honey.
Don't call me yours.
Don't call me at all.
Don't try to talk to me.
Don't make me forgive you.
Don't talk to me sweet.
Don't swear you won't do it again.
Don't make me smile.
Don't make me laugh.
Don't break me like this again.
Don't call me pretty.
Don't think about me.
Don't talk about me to your friends.
Don't think I'm okay.
Don't assume I'm not okay.
Don't act like you control me.
Don't say you can fix this.
Don't pretend it's not your fault.
Don't blame me for any of this.
Don't make promises you can't keep.
Don't tell me you care.
Don't tell me you don't.
Don't think I care.
Don't think I don't.
Don't make me mad like this.
Don't hurt me anymore.
Don't force me to write these anymore.
Don't want me to?
Don't give me reasons to.
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Comments: 8

ColdnessCalms [2010-02-12 03:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Gah, women are DENSE.

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kurtskoolaid In reply to ColdnessCalms [2010-02-12 03:03:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks
bjork is amazing.

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ColdnessCalms In reply to kurtskoolaid [2010-02-12 03:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Bjork's the best. I've only been stalking her for a few years now.

Hopefully this doesn't come off as rude or anything, but there are a few obvious typos in the poem that you should probably fix They just detract is all

Take care.

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kurtskoolaid In reply to ColdnessCalms [2010-02-12 03:07:32 +0000 UTC]

you must be refering to the punctuation?
its not rude at all.

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ColdnessCalms In reply to kurtskoolaid [2010-02-12 03:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, the punctuation, and the typos.
Like the lack of space between the words 'dont' and 'call' in the second line
Or the word 'done' instead of 'dont' a few lines down.

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kurtskoolaid In reply to ColdnessCalms [2010-02-12 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]

alright. fixed. (i think)
(:

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ColdnessCalms In reply to kurtskoolaid [2010-02-12 03:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, since we've gone this far, I may as well go grammar Nazi on you. I's should be capitalized, and so should the first letter of each line, and there are still a few donts that need apostrophes (not the first line of each sentence, there are some within the poem), and, and, and yeah that's it

You don't have to actually go and fix those, I'm just giving you a hard time

Buuuuut you probably will anyway. Especially since this comment is here. Imagine, if someone saw the poem, and then saw this comment. You would seem SOO lazy!

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kurtskoolaid In reply to ColdnessCalms [2010-02-12 03:38:57 +0000 UTC]

...
alright. perfect.

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