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Published: 2008-06-27 07:05:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1320; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Eh, it sounded a lot cooler in my head. Fuck it.Related content
Comments: 16
The pencil is the letter "I"!
I like this. Cool typography.
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..I think it still sounds good outside your head. Nice concept. :3
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Aww, thank you so much!
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Thank you very much, my good sir.
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great choice of colors and use of texture.. well done
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Thanks a lot bud!
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Cool idea and nice quote but there are a few technical things you could work on.
The kerning and ligatures (spaces in between your letters, and spaces in between the letters you've made into one) are not consistent. It takes about 3 seconds but really improves the visual aspect of the piece. One other thing is that the sizes of the fonts appears to be random. When including different font sizes take into consideration your spatial references and how big things are in relation to your new sized object. It'll make the composition flow a lot better and be a tad more structured.
Hope I didn't bore you to death! I like this piece, keep on working. I expect to see more soon.
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Yeah thanks, good advice. I might tweak with it some more. When I do work at like 1-2am it usually is a lot more random and hodge-podged.
Like you said, about a 3 second edit.
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