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ky-nim — Pkmn: The Original Dragon, VAHIROM (v2)

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I updated this primarily for the stats/ability/etc. To see the old version of Vahirom, click here


Back in high school (mid/late 2000s) I had designed fakemon so having one for this nuzlocke comic was something I wanted to do, especially knowing the BW/BW2 lore mentions a single ancestral dragon that gave form to the tao trio we know today. Here are some "fake" stats and moveset for you guys to have fun with.

!!!PLEASE NOTE ME BEFORE USING THIS DESIGN/LORE IN YOUR WORKS/RPS/ETC!!!I would really love to see this fakemon be applied in other projects so it would actually make me happy if you sent me a little note if you do plan to borrow this info....but let me know!!!!!!!

NAME/DESIGN/DEX ENTRY ORIGIN: TThe median letter between R and Z is V, so the name was always meant to start with a V. Since this dragon is supposed to be the predecessor of the tao trio, I picked the first vowel (“a”) to symbolize that this was the first/original dragon of the tao trio. One of the Japanese words for gray is “haiiro” (灰色), which I modified (kinda like how the word “shiro” was incorporated in Reshiram and “kuro” for Zekrom). And since “hiro” has a pronunciation similar to Reshiram, the pronunciation of the end of the dragon’s name had to be similar to Zekrom (hence the “-om”). I suppose "Rem" is a consideration but in Kyurem's name, but the japanese roots for that part is 零 rei (zero) and 無 mu (nothing), which is the opposite of the Original Dragon's "completeness." Furthermore, because Kyurem was a forgotten byproduct of the dragon’s splitting (the games do not really acknowledge Kyurem until BW2 happens), I did not make a conscious effort to try to incorporate that into Vahirom’s name. I do realize the pronunciation for the fakemon is slightly different if you read up the Katakana (reads as "Vahaiiromu"). The English name goes as "Vah-hi-rom" but the Katakana pronounciation is fine too. I mean, if you look at the Romanized Japanese names of Reshiram/Zekrom/Kyurem, they are slightly different from the English name.

On the other hand, the design (with color scheme) is reminescent of Kyurem. In fact, the final design I chose is a mix of the two Kyurem forms you see in BW2, which I thought would fit better for the Original Dragon's form. Even the shiny form is a shoutout to Kyurem's shiny version. But the head in particular is a bit of a fusion of Zekrom/Reshiram/Kyurem specifically. If you want details on what design parts came from what, click here

In addition to the design reference, Kyurem is also used as a loose basis for Vahirom's dex entries. I tried to combine a bit of the Kyurem myth/rumor about how it supposedly landed via a meteorite and fell in the Great Chasm (meteorites can be composed of ice and/or metals). I will not go into detail about this in the comic, but I wanted to imply that the "incorrect" Kyurem myth mentioned in the games was a byproduct of time: the story of Vahirom landing in Unova was warped into present day's Kyurem tale since the Original Dragon's existence has been split into today's Zekrom and Reshiram. So many people to collectively forgot about the "true" story; besides, most stories around the Original Dragon focuses on its role in the Great Unovan War. Even though the Grey Shepherd eventually had befriended it, the town still upholds the superstition that something bad will attack them at night...especially Kyurem does exist in present day (supposedly) and probably was hostile due to certain historical events.

The title "Infinite Gray Pokemon" comes from me trying to form a title that is the opposite of Kyurem's (Boundary Pokemon) and using the same title scheme as Reshiram (Vast White Pokemon) and Zekrom (Deep Black Pokemon). Gray is added because White + Black = Gray.

STAT/ABILITY/TYPING: Since 2015, I have realized that trying to "balance" a fakemon is a pointless endeavor especially since Gamefreak/TPC will constantly powercreep itself. I changed up the BST a little bit from my old version but decided to just do whatever I want with the ability/signature moves lol

I picked Dragon/Steel as its typing because Steel moves are super effective against Ice types (Kyurem) and Steel moves are resisted by Electric types (Zekrom) and Fire types (Reshiram). When it split, Vahirom became stronger for the two hero kings by becoming the types that Steel cannot defeat while the "shell" that was left behind is weak to it. At the same time, the Steel typing offsets the expected 2x Dragon weakness to 1x, which means Vahirom is stronger than the three dragons in some respects (the trio are all 2x Dragon weak, even with their secondary typing).

Plus, the fact that Kyurem lived in a time where DNA splicers existed kinda gave me an idea that the Original Dragon would symbolize technological advances (i.e. similar to Stone Age -> Bronze Age). And in the case of this Pokemon, it helped bridge the Pokemon/human societies together to advance both societies. Finally, I am not sure if this is obvious in the picture, but the "blue" parts are supposed to look more steel-like (i.e. darker and more "solid") in this Pokemon, as opposed to the breakable ice parts Kyurem possesses (i.e. in BW2, the wings can break to reveal its true wings, which are used to absorb Reshiram/Zekrom through the DNA Splicer). I have my little theory on the DNA Splicer, which I am hoping to expand on for my comic Episode Grey.

CHANGES MADE IN THE TAO TRIO MYTHOS: I have already implied this before, but the timeline of Vahirom's existence is slightly different from game canon. The game canon has it so that the Original Dragon had befriended the twin kings that created Unova and later was split apart by the same twin kings due to their ideals vs. truth war. But I thought it would be better to have this Original Dragon be a Pokemon that helped the twin kings' ancestor , who helped create the Unova region; then it became a companion for the royal family for several centuries after. This way, I thought the Original Dragon would have a higher importance/significance in Ancient Unovan history.

FINALLY, A HUGE SHOUTOUT TO MY FRIENDS WHO HELPED ME OUT! Thanks for giving me valuable input on the stats, movepool, and other minor details! You're all amazing and I cannot thank you enough ★

Design Feedback:
MaeMacabre - Protocol00 - ShadeofShinon  - zerodeath98  

Pokemon Ability/Signature Move/Metagame Feedback:
hitoshura0  - xiihangman  - Zeronos12  - protojimmy

Japanese Name/Spelling Feedback:
RitsuBel  

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Comments: 395

Reaching-Dawn In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh WOW! I wish this was real!! Your take on Unova's history is so perfect

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MadHatterPunk In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 16:52:17 +0000 UTC]

WHY ISN'T THIS A THING!?!!?!!!?!!

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kittenAX [2015-02-11 16:31:47 +0000 UTC]

awsome

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Iakop [2015-02-11 16:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Love the concept of this! You also got all three Pokémon integrated in the design really well!

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CleverPast [2015-02-11 15:40:08 +0000 UTC]

It actually is pretty competitively viable, either as a tank, Stealth Rock shuffle support or a full-on ResTalk wall.

I need this in Ubers now. It can even be like Kyurem's Mega Evolution. 

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Prime-Riyu In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 14:28:24 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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ZahlenO In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 13:32:27 +0000 UTC]

... Metagross? Is that you?

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ky-nim In reply to ZahlenO [2015-02-11 13:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Metagross's grandpa

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Larwolf In reply to ky-nim [2015-02-11 14:33:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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VortexNebula13 In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 13:13:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't see why some people are complaining, this guy is spectacular! a very original design with the creativity and imagination to combine all three dragons into this guy, im tempted to create my own fakemon now!

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kage-niji In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 12:22:33 +0000 UTC]

I was actually wondering about the Original Dragon the other day, this is awesome! Definitely looks canon, and all of its abilities suit it well.

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Pyrosaitan1 In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 11:45:27 +0000 UTC]

this looks like one of the XY dragon legendaries

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awsomedopy12345 In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 11:41:48 +0000 UTC]

I think the Origin Strike should have been Origin Bolt, but otherwise it is great

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ky-nim In reply to awsomedopy12345 [2015-02-11 21:54:30 +0000 UTC]

For some reason I thought "Strike" was in both of Zekrom's signature moves (Fusion Bolt/Bolt Strike) as opposed to "Bolt" woops

Maybe this can make up for the fact that people keep saying that I put too little Reshiram in the design b:

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LaLaMoe In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 11:10:43 +0000 UTC]

 

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ketoryuu In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 10:39:03 +0000 UTC]

i think it resembles black kyurem too much

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ky-nim In reply to ketoryuu [2015-02-11 12:34:27 +0000 UTC]

If you don't like it design your own buddy :u

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Quilaviper In reply to ky-nim [2015-02-22 00:35:36 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU, SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS!!!  

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Chantel-sky [2015-02-11 07:23:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool!

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TrollingPopTart588 In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 05:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh god. Well, time to zoom in. Great art... XD

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TrollingPopTart588 In reply to TrollingPopTart588 [2015-02-11 05:43:29 +0000 UTC]

I may attempt to use a ROM hack, but maybe I can try to make a sprite of this. Just to let you know.

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ky-nim In reply to TrollingPopTart588 [2015-02-11 15:03:08 +0000 UTC]

ooh ok! Link me when do either of those

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TrollingPopTart588 In reply to ky-nim [2015-02-11 18:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Alrighto~

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Rtheo1 In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 05:41:26 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!
Keep up the awesome work XD!

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ramza91 [2015-02-11 05:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is friggen impressive. It really feels like it fits in with the lore too. Something I didn't expect from a 'fakemon'

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WhiteWarbler In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 05:20:02 +0000 UTC]

thats pretty cool man, but the ability doesnt quite fit since the only supper effective hit it can take would be from ground attacks, what the pont of havin a "filter" if most of the attacksare goona do neutral damage, please dont take me wrong you did an amazing job

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ky-nim In reply to WhiteWarbler [2015-02-11 12:33:28 +0000 UTC]

It's weak to fighting as well sooo w/e

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WhiteWarbler In reply to ky-nim [2015-02-13 04:22:14 +0000 UTC]

k. 2 types, my bad. still.

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Rtheo1 In reply to WhiteWarbler [2015-02-11 05:42:37 +0000 UTC]

It's weak to fighting and ground, two of the most common attackers, so it's ability actually really works for it.

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LostbunniesofWendy In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 04:39:59 +0000 UTC]

I will spend my last pokeball on this one!

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Vergolophus In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 03:38:15 +0000 UTC]

This is just what I wanted-- I have been searching ENDLESSLY for a great depiction of the original dragon that made the perfect combination of Reshiram, Zekrom, AND Kyurem all together. The idea of the dragon being Steel instead of Ice is a nice touch-- Really driving home the idea of a meteorite and how Kyurem could be an empty, cold shell of what was left behind. Everything was well done and put together, even to the point of stat arrangements and the concept of the dragon being more defensive rather than offensive.

What really drives it home is the lore, which we do not get enough of in Pokemon. You really did tie down the loose ends to the war, and I love the incorporation of the technological advancements coming from this Pokemon, seeing as the world of Pokemon is very futuristic.

Just fantastic!

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RexiDoodle In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 03:29:03 +0000 UTC]

I think I cried when I saw this. Oh wait, I still am.

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ILKCMP In reply to ??? [2015-02-11 01:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely stunning.  The sheer amount of thought that went into this is amazing.  If I could make any suggestion whatsoever, it would be to change the '-rom' to '-rum.' It would keep your original intention of sounding similar to the '-rom' in Zekrom's name, but would set it apart as well.

Bravo!

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ky-nim In reply to ILKCMP [2015-02-11 02:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Nah I already told my reasoning for the "-rom"

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ILKCMP In reply to ky-nim [2015-02-11 05:11:27 +0000 UTC]

I get it, but it just seems too similar.

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ky-nim In reply to ILKCMP [2015-02-11 12:35:42 +0000 UTC]

then design your own fakemon because I ain't changing it.

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Scarecrow113 In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 23:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool.

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Naxal710 In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 23:39:00 +0000 UTC]

This looks SO FREAKIN' PROFESSIONAL!!!! If I didn't know any better, I'd say Ken Sugimori himself drew it!

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Deventi0n In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 19:47:59 +0000 UTC]

I love the design and the level spread of the movepool.  

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AJ-Suvaku In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 17:49:12 +0000 UTC]

The Pokemon company needs someone like you.

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TheBookworm27 [2015-02-10 15:47:30 +0000 UTC]

This looks freaking awesome. I love all of the insane detail to this, it looks like it really could be an actual Pokemon. It looks so cool!

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JumanjiShuniko In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 14:34:28 +0000 UTC]

OH
MY
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

GNFDKHGFDNIKSHGNFDJKGNKDJGGNDJ I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS... BEAUTIFUL AND FATAL THING! If Vahirom as real, for sure I would use him! And his nickname will be... Rain Cloud. He did not look anything like a cloud, but I put that name anyway. Just as I called a Zekrom... Black ~RANDOM COMENT~

Anyway, I expected no less. It looks like a real artwork, and the moveset is ... <333333333

Keep the good job!

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Heartlesscrow42 In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 13:02:34 +0000 UTC]

SOMEONE ANYONE GET THIS WOMAN TO NINTENDO                                  amazing work     I love it 

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kirakinn In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 11:24:18 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool@!

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Void-Wolf In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 07:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Majestic and noble, kinda like a king.

Very well done.

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MrBoomheadshot In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 06:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Over original and Very creative on this.

great job on this!

I had on old Idea for a Perfect kyurem which is Vahirom. There is an odd looking scientist who was finally able to create ether a Special DNA splicer. Or is able to modify the DNA splicer To a new way to allow one to get Vahirom.

There was two ways to get Vahirom. One was By fusing both Reshiram and Zekrom into Kyurem so that way it can now become PERFECT! Or the second way is to permanently lose ether Reshiram or Zekrom. (your call on who you sacrifice.) and is just able to get the full DNA of the other without the need to fuse it as well. (this second method is my idea because some players Love their Reshiram or Zekrom. and would also love to Get a Perfect Kyurem which is Vahirom. But he/she does not want to sacrifice their favorite Gen 5 Legendary Pokemon in order to get one.)

It was an idea. that is all.

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WhiteWings In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 03:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating o.o~

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ImDatNinja [2015-02-10 01:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Not only is that good, it's extremely creative, and a very realistic interpretation of the original storyline and the Unova Progenitor Dragon. Not only that, but you had its competitive viability in mind (unlike whoever created Mega Rayquaza). Its typing, name, everything about it displays amazing creativity.
Hats off to you.

And for some reason, the Steel Typing and emphasis on defense (herp Barricade) reminds me of...Attack on Titan... for some odd reason.

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Falcrow-42 In reply to ??? [2015-02-10 01:36:06 +0000 UTC]

 When i finally get my white nuzlocke finished and planned, would it be alright if I used this?

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ky-nim In reply to Falcrow-42 [2015-02-10 07:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Just credit me when you do!

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