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Kyanri — Scenedog Lineart WIPWIPWIP
Published: 2010-06-29 04:00:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 608; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 5
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THIS IS A WIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CRITIQUE PLEASE!!!!!But I'm lovin it
lol thought I'd try my hand at drawing in the scene dog style
It's looking pretty good so far 8DI'm also adding different tails and hair and fur and stuff too :3 And you'll be able to use it when I'm done
BUT DO NOT I REPEAT DO NOT USE THIS LINEART NOOOOOW!!! IT'S NOT DONE YET D:
I got a lot of inspiration while drawing this from Luna-temari, Blue-kiba, and nequita c:
Anyway, the main reason I uploaded the WIP is because I would REALLY REALLY LIKE SOME CRITIQUE!!! SO please critique it PLEASE...And I know the legs/paws are messed up, they're totally killing the piece...Been trying to fix them but they've not been cooperating...Can someone please help me with them somehow???
AND PLEASE SOMEONE TELL ME HOW TO DO A CLEAR BACKGROUND?!?!?!?! D: D: D:
ART IS MINE DUN STEAL ITS ILLEGAL D:<
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The atamony for this piece is really the good the only thing I could suggest is adding eyes either floating above or add a color chart other then the feet, thought they are the right size they are not quite the right shape. X3 thought its really cute. And I think a few more feet(toes) should be showing in this pose. Also the back leg the one that you can see the most looks a bit thick on the leg part as dose the shoulder. The shoulder blade should be a lot smaller. ^_^ Hope that helps. Thought I think scene dogs are suppose to be skinny so yeshh ^_^ Great job
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Oh, and yeah this is a wip, and I have multiple hair desgins, this is the only one where it covers the eyes, but I'll put an eye thingy for it
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I love the hair on this one haha ^_^ looks amazing on it ^_^ Yes Don't know if it would help or not hehe ^_^ thought you could leave it on even when the eyes on it, the eyes could be their own color chart haha ^_^
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Thankyou!!!
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Your welcome ^_^ Oh alrighty then ^_^ Yes it would help with the lineart. Thought I wouldn't recommend adding claws. It makes it harder to color the lineart X3
Yes but it depends after you edit the leg you may have to change how skinny it is( Right know it looks the right size) Yes it is hehe I really hope it helps haha ^_^ not use to giving advice thought I think its called a credic or what ever I perfer it to be advice for some reason to me credic sounds mean X3
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Yay thankyou :3 OKay. I think I'll add claws, but maybe I'll just color them in all black? So you dun have to color them X3 I'll just have to see how it turns out once I like the leg :3 Yah critique does sound kinda mean 
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Your welcome ^_^
Yeah it would work hehe ^______________^
ME TOO
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