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Kyleniebob — Escaped
Published: 2004-01-25 07:16:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description I stood there
Like I was concreted to the floor
I was unable to move an inch
Too terrified to unlock the door
It strikes me with a leather strap and I flinch
I couldn’t see it’s face or hear it breathe
But I knew who it was
I could sense it’s vengeance as it struck me again
It was a thing of many forms
But known well in one
Evil it was
More dangerous than a gun
It struck me again and I began to bleed
But I would not give in! I would not plead!
This time when it struck me I could not feel the blows
I knew then my savior came to save me finally
I felt the welts disappear from my skin
And I knew I had escaped the world of sin
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Comments: 2

neocon [2004-01-25 11:02:03 +0000 UTC]

That's a good piece,flows really ducky and i do like
the idea .Nice work,keep it up

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Kyleniebob In reply to neocon [2004-01-25 23:32:52 +0000 UTC]

thankees.

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