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Published: 2006-04-09 23:16:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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There's a dead bird sleeping on the streetThe cat moved in to watch it bleed
As the sun set in the West
The world ended in the East
And the story fell apart at the seems
Pages blew accross all the seas
And now it seems it's all gone
It seems that I was just a pawn
In this world known to man as the in between
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Comments: 9
Giver [2006-04-30 15:53:35 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting. I love the imagery with the cat and bird, and the West and East sides of the world. Very cool.
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Worldbuilder [2006-04-18 14:04:15 +0000 UTC]
Oooo, nice poem ^_^. Smooth transition from line to line, only slightly morbid (which I do enjoy) and a slight metaphysical meaning behind it all.
Very nicely done.
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Kyleniebob In reply to Worldbuilder [2006-04-18 23:36:49 +0000 UTC]
^^ Yay!
I'm glad you liked it.
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sharebear9204 [2006-04-11 22:30:51 +0000 UTC]
That sucks. You bitch.
Haha. I'm typing to myself on Heather's name!
Heather: That's good you asshole!
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Kyleniebob In reply to sharebear9204 [2006-04-11 23:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Haha! I stole the mouse and keyboard.
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