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Published: 2006-06-16 02:20:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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It ingulfs youLike an unwanted darkness
It tears you
Deep wounds in your throat
It sneers at you
Makes you wimper in mixed emotions
It confuses you
So easily that you want to deny that it's there
It banishes happiness
Into a whirlpool of feelings that almost seem to drown it
It cages the heart
Binds it tight until it seems to sufficate
It infects you
A type of unseen spirit-eating leprosy
It leaves you
Eventually dieing down when you aren't alone
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Comments: 15
Cattyonines [2006-06-17 09:10:29 +0000 UTC]
I love the poem structure. It also is very well written.
Such a sad subject yet a great poem
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sushi4joo In reply to Kyleniebob [2006-07-08 18:02:48 +0000 UTC]
awwwwww p00r j00!!! wut made u change ur mind bout guys & dating???
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Kyleniebob In reply to sushi4joo [2006-07-11 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't lonely at camp. I've realized that as long as I am surrounded by friends I don't need the romance that I've been longing for...because it is then that I forget that I long for it.
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sushi4joo In reply to Kyleniebob [2006-07-11 22:17:53 +0000 UTC]
oh!!!!!!!!!!! i understand now!! kool.
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sushi4joo In reply to Kyleniebob [2006-07-24 17:56:52 +0000 UTC]
omg, Itchy Poodle was awesome! Katrina said that it was kool---well, what she seen of it. l0l. she was too busy hanging out with her carnie----oh well, i guess shit happens! l0l.
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